rate_review Reviews

This story of yours was fascinating to read, and it got straight to the point. I'm actually rather curious to see where else you could take it, particularly the good little Ash angle. On a whole, one or two things seemed odd to me, but I attribute that to personal taste. I look forward to seeing either future chapters or stories from you.

Its kind of diferente from i have read, but interesting, I saw Ash a little like a (what is the word that im looking for...)easy to satisface? any way, is ther going to be a second chapter?

see you