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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I told you before, and I'll say it again, you MUST write the naughty sequel to this in which Rose has his day. I don't think he's a bad man, but he seems a little more susceptible to the urge to take power and reign in his conscience, a darkness just waiting to be played up in fanfic. If you don't know who this is, btw, you can ask Swordy. She knows my secret identity here at aff.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. The run-up to the kiss was magnificent. I liked your pacing and writing style. Wow, really well done. You made it believable and really sexy ;)
Good job.
Good job.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi britt ,
first off , thanks for the nice reviews . I went back and saw the one for Passing the Time ; it really made my day !
This piece had me impressed and profoundly nervous by the end , as if I was the one in trouble , not Ryo . Takes a lot of writing skill to affect your audience that way , but you have it .
As I said , a Ryo-punishment piece would be so welcome . I would love to see all caution thrown to the wind and just have Rose do everything his twisted heart desires , but maybe that's a challenge fic...
I do like Ryo, however, and maybe the tables being turned on Rose by both guys , Ryo and Dee , would be interesting as well .
you write it and I'll read it , sister !
Moon
first off , thanks for the nice reviews . I went back and saw the one for Passing the Time ; it really made my day !
This piece had me impressed and profoundly nervous by the end , as if I was the one in trouble , not Ryo . Takes a lot of writing skill to affect your audience that way , but you have it .
As I said , a Ryo-punishment piece would be so welcome . I would love to see all caution thrown to the wind and just have Rose do everything his twisted heart desires , but maybe that's a challenge fic...
I do like Ryo, however, and maybe the tables being turned on Rose by both guys , Ryo and Dee , would be interesting as well .
you write it and I'll read it , sister !
Moon
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my--what is Rose trying to get from Ryo--surely not sex, a pure case of sexual harassment? Negotiating for smiles--oh Rose, how low of you! Interesting! I'm looking forward to the other chapters!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay , it's just me again . I already reviewed on your LJ but this is so good it deserves two reviews . I do love Berkeley in fic and I think he's under used . If I EVER get computer private time in my house again , I have Berkeley fic to post too .
I like the thoughts you have going through Berk's mind . The dynamic between these three is the best in the series among any of the characters, surpassing even Dee , Ryo and JJ . Or Dee, Ryo and Bikky . I am interested to see where you will take it .
But do take care of yourself first . Hope your personal life settles down .
Moon
I like the thoughts you have going through Berk's mind . The dynamic between these three is the best in the series among any of the characters, surpassing even Dee , Ryo and JJ . Or Dee, Ryo and Bikky . I am interested to see where you will take it .
But do take care of yourself first . Hope your personal life settles down .
Moon