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July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Its depressing that this story is not finished and seems to be forgotten.
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooo!!!! why you no update?????
its really good, why did you stop! the dule perspective and mainly monlogue style is veryy effective! please pick this back up!
i hope your all right and it nothing big that had forced you to stop wirtting this story. i really look forword to reading the end of this you have set up a nice well rounded story, with how the twins and tama-chan will react to the face that mori got the girl! i wonder how they will find out and i wonder what will happen when haurhi has to go home and how her dad will recat to the fact that there now dating! i also wonder how moris family will react, they might be resentfull that shes not of money but i dont belive so, please continue to write this story as there is still sooooo much that can go one and this polt line is notwhere near finished!
also ending right in the middle of a sex scean is only okay if you plan to update the reast quickly, not like over 3 years later, so please finish what you started is reall well written and i do look forward to reading more of your works as they come out!
feel free to contact me at maxlene@velocitynet.com.au
raelene
its really good, why did you stop! the dule perspective and mainly monlogue style is veryy effective! please pick this back up!
i hope your all right and it nothing big that had forced you to stop wirtting this story. i really look forword to reading the end of this you have set up a nice well rounded story, with how the twins and tama-chan will react to the face that mori got the girl! i wonder how they will find out and i wonder what will happen when haurhi has to go home and how her dad will recat to the fact that there now dating! i also wonder how moris family will react, they might be resentfull that shes not of money but i dont belive so, please continue to write this story as there is still sooooo much that can go one and this polt line is notwhere near finished!
also ending right in the middle of a sex scean is only okay if you plan to update the reast quickly, not like over 3 years later, so please finish what you started is reall well written and i do look forward to reading more of your works as they come out!
feel free to contact me at maxlene@velocitynet.com.au
raelene
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave it there 0.0
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol why is it that every mori and haruhi story i read it ends just before the sex scene it makes me cry TT.TT
this story is realy good!!! i love it MAX! please continue writing :D
this story is realy good!!! i love it MAX! please continue writing :D
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if I was takashi I would grab her hand and guide it south of the waist band
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn I want that ( Takashi-sama)
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is HOT!!!!!!! I love it soooooo much! I just wish the rest of it was up. *pout* please update soon. I need to read the rest of the lemon. Its not nice to end a chapter in the middle of a lemon. I am anctiously awaitiong the rest of it.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is not a nice place to leave off a story. my only problem with this story so far is that in a house with his brother, a housekeeper (who from the sound of it would be the type of person to check up on a girl in her care), and servants why have haruhi and mori not seen any of them? i'm sure that they would have had breakfast and shared a ride to school with his brother, and wouldnt somebody have checked to see why one or the other wasnt up when they over slept? and satoshi would have been by to see why mori didnt practice in the morning.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg.....update!!!!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you finish this. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next update.