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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I know I myself love getting reviews, knowing when people like my stories and what they like about, so I guess others must, too. :)
A beautiful last chapter, very fitting. I liked how the sex-scene was done. it's so sweet and soft, as if it was all recorded in soft focuss, very well done. And the last one, where Hakkai and Goyjo make eye contact, is very good too. I like how you did Sanzo, and the thing with the seremon was a very cool found! ^-^
Congrats on finishing this! :D
A beautiful last chapter, very fitting. I liked how the sex-scene was done. it's so sweet and soft, as if it was all recorded in soft focuss, very well done. And the last one, where Hakkai and Goyjo make eye contact, is very good too. I like how you did Sanzo, and the thing with the seremon was a very cool found! ^-^
Congrats on finishing this! :D
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
parts of the ending seemed a little rushed, thought that just could have been my perceptions (i read very quickly). it was a very well done finish up, though. didn't feel like anything was left out or left hanging. i think you did some good work here.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a fantastic new chapter, and one i was glad to see today, as i was really in need of something to read. again, your writing has been a joy to read.
but, that cliffhanger is mean. that's just cruel and unsual punishment.
but, that cliffhanger is mean. that's just cruel and unsual punishment.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!? That- that- that's so MEAN! *pouts* Mean mean mean mean mean mean! O.O
I loved how sweet this chapter was... All of the boys fussing over Hakkai for once instead of the other way around. Sure, they all do it in their own unique way, but they're still fussing ^-^ (Yes, even you Sanzo... *gets shot*) It was so cute! (*gets shot again*) So anyway... More? *puppy eyes*
(So glad you liked the fic! ^-^)
I loved how sweet this chapter was... All of the boys fussing over Hakkai for once instead of the other way around. Sure, they all do it in their own unique way, but they're still fussing ^-^ (Yes, even you Sanzo... *gets shot*) It was so cute! (*gets shot again*) So anyway... More? *puppy eyes*
(So glad you liked the fic! ^-^)
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can't believe this is HAPPENING!!!!!! First, Hakkai and Gojyo are troubled for being gay, then-how in the seven hells can it be illegal to be gay!!??!!(Sorry, unwanted outburst:3)-Hakkai is put on trail and convicted???? How much more will he suffer????!!!! You MUST write more!! I must find out why Hakkai suffers so much...and Gojyo too!!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dances around the room* Hakkai's safe! Hakkai's safe! (well more or less anyway :P) ^-^
Heh at some point Goyjo asks Hakkai 'are you alright'... It's so Goyjo to ask something as pointless as that :P He's been flogged and sentensed to death, sure he's alright... And of course Hakkai sais he is *sighs* Those two...
I really envy your abilety to write longer stories; I usually write snapshots from the same universe, but nothing ongoing like you do. I never seem to be able to write and finish things, definately not that long! That's really cool.
Heh at some point Goyjo asks Hakkai 'are you alright'... It's so Goyjo to ask something as pointless as that :P He's been flogged and sentensed to death, sure he's alright... And of course Hakkai sais he is *sighs* Those two...
I really envy your abilety to write longer stories; I usually write snapshots from the same universe, but nothing ongoing like you do. I never seem to be able to write and finish things, definately not that long! That's really cool.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an impressive story so far. i was a little leary at first--and in fact bypassed it several time before finally coming back to it. i'm honestly glad that i did.
its been excellent to read, even if i felt the descriptions were a bit lacking in spots. (but i did notice your note that english is not your first language, so i understand.) your characterizations are excellent, even if they are incredibly different than those of your other fan-peers. (and that's neither an insult or a bad thing. i like origonality in my fellow authors.) and i really enjoy your OCs.
i honestly can't wait for the next chapter of this. keep up your excellent work.
its been excellent to read, even if i felt the descriptions were a bit lacking in spots. (but i did notice your note that english is not your first language, so i understand.) your characterizations are excellent, even if they are incredibly different than those of your other fan-peers. (and that's neither an insult or a bad thing. i like origonality in my fellow authors.) and i really enjoy your OCs.
i honestly can't wait for the next chapter of this. keep up your excellent work.
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares* NONONONONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOO! You can't do that! Stupid friggin judge! Damn it! *goes to strangle the gudge before clinging to Hakkai*
Oh and I'm sorry my reviews where so useless, you just make them so by your evil evil cliffhangers ;) So anyway, I loved Goku's speech; I don't like how people always portray him as dumb. Like traumatised and moody equals smart ;) And even so, Goky had his fair share of trauma, I can't begin to imagine what 500 years locked in a cage will do to a child. He's done wonderously well... And yeah, he sometimes comes over as a little child and naive. Partly because he is, and partly, if you ask me, because being the brainless monkey kid is a lot easier to deal with than actually feeling... And I ramble on again XD Sorry. If you are interested *blushes* I just posted a story on Goyjo and Goku on my LJ... http://ginnyvos.livejournal.com/16955.html#cutid1
So anyway, awesome story and still has me on the edge of my seet every time...
Oh and I'm sorry my reviews where so useless, you just make them so by your evil evil cliffhangers ;) So anyway, I loved Goku's speech; I don't like how people always portray him as dumb. Like traumatised and moody equals smart ;) And even so, Goky had his fair share of trauma, I can't begin to imagine what 500 years locked in a cage will do to a child. He's done wonderously well... And yeah, he sometimes comes over as a little child and naive. Partly because he is, and partly, if you ask me, because being the brainless monkey kid is a lot easier to deal with than actually feeling... And I ramble on again XD Sorry. If you are interested *blushes* I just posted a story on Goyjo and Goku on my LJ... http://ginnyvos.livejournal.com/16955.html#cutid1
So anyway, awesome story and still has me on the edge of my seet every time...
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares* *whimpers* But... But... But... But... NO! O.O *grabs Gojyo and clings to him*
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Forgot to say last time, I love how you wrote Yaone, very good!
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Forgot to say last time, I love how you wrote Yaone, very good!
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares* See? See? See? I was right! I said it was the girl who killed them, I said so! I said so! Now to get the anidote into Hakkai... And survive it all... And things will be alright? Right? Oh and you're still evil ;)