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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was great and well written :D
hmm i guess it's ok as it is being suggestive and all..but somewhat of an incomplete feeling maybe since most lemony stuff goes all the way or have both partners satisfied =P
hmm i guess it's ok as it is being suggestive and all..but somewhat of an incomplete feeling maybe since most lemony stuff goes all the way or have both partners satisfied =P
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please :). It was believable for Raito to drug L like that.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aah please continue this! It was great! I enjoy seeing uke!L very much. :]]
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK. I enjoyed this.
There's a few mistakes and/or typos, bur dear god! uke!L is so hot who cares about typos?
Raitos was a bit OOC in my opinion (i hardly can think of him all that drink!!party!!whoaa! XD) but Matsuda was so cute!! *hugs Matsu*
I say go for a second round!! XD please??
There's a few mistakes and/or typos, bur dear god! uke!L is so hot who cares about typos?
Raitos was a bit OOC in my opinion (i hardly can think of him all that drink!!party!!whoaa! XD) but Matsuda was so cute!! *hugs Matsu*
I say go for a second round!! XD please??