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Great story! Love the smut ;) please update <3

this story is awesome! hot and sexy lol. cant wait for the next chapter if there is gonna be one. please keep writing!! everything about your writing was brilliant, not just the so-far story line.

Girl. Seriously. You have GOT to update this. It's hot. And it has plot. And its a great twist on what could have just been porny-ness over and over again. You do it well, you do it originally. And you probably have writers block. But seriously, this is good. A lot better than some of the mess on this site. So please, sometimes, update? and email me when you do? thanks.

Ah bugger, I can't work out a safe way to get you my email address without getting spammed. Um. Just. Update. And I'll check back weekly. Because really, you're a brilliant author.

xx GU

Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! :D~

You are the King! The Greatest! More, write more! I wanna see an UsagixAmi!

you are gonna update this soon, right?

yay! i got to read two chapters.....even though i missed not having an actual smut scene between Mamo and Usa i understand why you didn't include it and i think it is in fact better that way. in this last chapter i thought mina's speech was really great....and i totally loved the bit at the end with rei and serena. it was hilarious!.....yet again i love the smut and the plot. it'll be interesting to see this 'girls night out'...will usagi figure out that ami likes her? who will ami end up with, mina or mako? is rei going to find out that usa and mamo slept together? oooo....lots of questions to be answered....can't wait for more.

Another great chapter! I was rereading this just now, and noticed you called Mamoru a brunette; I just wanted to point out that he has black hair. I loved the scene between them, and I'm hoping for more like that (but with more detail, perhaps)

that was...that was SOMETHING THAT WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE!!! OH MY GOD!!! that...that was SOO...SOO... ARGH!!!I CAN"T THINK OF ANYTHING TO TYPE EXCEPT THAT YOU SHOULD UPDATE SOON FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!

Something particularly new for me and shows the effort you took in writing this. Since I'm not familiar with the porn filmmaking scene, there's certainly nothing I can say whether or not your depiction of it is accurate but since I enjoyed purely as a fanfic reader, I'm glad you took the time to flesh out the scenes and to make the reading as comfortable as possible.