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yay! so glad you updated! at first i was ready to be all whiny that there was no SD interaction in this chapter, but i totally won't whine, because this chapter did not disappoint....i'm not much for "foot love" (as you called it), but that was hot. i loved the bet, and that you didn't make rei out to be a total b*tch. great job with the plot and the smut. update soon please!
~Z

p.s. the name thing definitely clarified things for me....and i'm wondering what'll be the consequences if, or when, rei gets her scene with tuxedo mask.

Every now and then, you find a gem amongst all the good (but not always great) fics you pull off of a site like this. While I'm not ready to call this one a diamond yet (but only because it's just beginning), this is one of the best stories I've read in a while.

In fact, I usually hate AU fics! I'm a big psychology buff, so I get very attached to the cannon personalities of characters, yet you manage to stay true to the core of the characters while changing their setting completely, a feat few can accomplish. I think the secret lies in that the characters seem to separate their personal lives from their business the same way the original characters did from their senshi alter-egos. It shows the forethought you've put into this.

The story is good enough that I found myself skimming the sex to get to the next duologue, then going back later to read the nicely written sex scenes. It's erotica like this that makes me so sad FF.net cut out this kind of material and thankful this site made a home for it.

Now I'm far from one to tell an author how to write their work, and I look forward to seeing how things turn out, but I will say this: I hope you're already letting a sequel percolate in the back of your mind where you can properly introduce the "Outer Senshi". Their simultaneously more professional work ethic and more volitile personal natures would add a new dimension to this very provocative idea of yours.

that was SOO HOTT that there are no words to describe it!!! please, please, PLEASE for the love of GOD update soon!!!

So, let's see... Rei likes Mamoru; Minako likes Ami; Makoto likes Ami; and Ami likes Usagi. Love parallelograms! Woohoo!

very good..... i enjoyed it alot, and i'm not into feet at all, still it was nice to see rei put into her place.... and being forced to climax.

i'm still hoping for an update soon!

love it, keep it up this is certainly interesting.

love love love this! i hope that was mako and darien that went to "intercept the pair." darien loves usagi and he knows it. i love both the plot and the smut. great job, i can't wait to read more!

Talk about a road less travel :)

Great story can't wait for more

Amy having a crush on Usagi? you'll get no complaints from me.

Hmm... I'm guessing the green eyes are Makoto's, the blue eyes are Mamoru's, and they are jealous. Ami has a crush on Usagi, huh? They should get together (not neccessarily permanently, maybe only a one time thing).