rate_review Reviews

very nice. chapter 3 has one of the best kanda internal monologues i've ever read. it wasn't too bitchy and not too ooc. very good.

wow. that was haaaawttt~! i really like how wanton tallen was in chapter 5. hawt. can't wait for more smexy scenes. i also like that you didn't immediately make them have anal sex. personally, i think that's a bit unrealistic to do in real life if you've *just* gotten together, you know?

i realise that when i was reviewing chapter 4, i mentioned it was chapter 5. that is incorrect. i meant 4, not 5. *now* i am reviewing chapter 5 which is kinda mushy, kinda sad, kinda i loV IT! can't wait for chapter 6!!

more more plaese the story is real good . up datesoon.

Wow, this fic is so wonderful! I just read all 5 chapters straight through. You convey the emotions so well, and Chapter 4 was really incredibly hot! Please continue this one!

I think this is such a great idea and love how nicely it is coming along!

I cant wait to read more :D

I actually registered just so I could review since I was so impressed with this fic and want very much for you to continue it!

You kept everyone perfectly in character and the premise is a *really* great setup for getting Kanda and Allen together. Komui is such a crazy bastard. I really hope that you will continue to work on this since I agree with you - that there really aren't many good D.Gray-man fics to be seen.

Thank you so much for writing and I hope to see more! XOXOXO