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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter was too short- you are such a tease.. Please update again soon and let Yuki be reunited with Shuichi.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the slight revisions, and can't wait for more to come. I really missed seeing this fic and want to see an update as soon as possible. It's imaginative and keeps good momentum...And Shuichi does really need Yuki (and visa versa).
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Poor Shuichi! I hope he and Yuki are able to get back together...otherwise...YOU ARE CRUEL! Mind you...I already knew that LMAO! I love your cruelty! My new favourite authoress!
Update Soon!
Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
Update Soon!
Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story great as i loved every bit of it. the ending waas so sad when Yuki and Shuichi were slit up. but in the end i loved everything
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no more more the story is real good and i love it and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next . will yuki get shuichi back or leave his brothers to get shuichi for true love is there for them. up date soon be waitting.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi
Well..it's a good effort but this chapter is a bit hard to understand. I just thought you'd like to know that. Maybe go back and have a re-read and see the errors and give them a fix.
Well..it's a good effort but this chapter is a bit hard to understand. I just thought you'd like to know that. Maybe go back and have a re-read and see the errors and give them a fix.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, I have no clue what to think about this fic. It's hard to understand a lot of things. The storyline is pretty cool, but your grammar is atrocious. Seriously. Part of writing a good story is making it understandable. Otherwise no one will review. Seriously, get a beta or something. This is just so hard to read when this is a very good fic.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaahhh... i love this so much.
This fic is great, I love neko stories and this fic is such a smutfest
Me likey...
I hope you update again soon.
Good luck on the next chapter.
Hhugs Enzeru
This fic is great, I love neko stories and this fic is such a smutfest
Me likey...
I hope you update again soon.
Good luck on the next chapter.
Hhugs Enzeru
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love the chapter and it was real good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and i think that yuki is fell in love with his pet. up date soon. good luck.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah thanks so much i loved it ^__^ very good detail again and a very cute story to go with it. cant wait till the next one.