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by Amako

person satomika
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kya~~~!!!

I LOVE IT~!

And I honestly think it's SOOOOO them~ :D

More, please...? ^^ :D
person animegirl007
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been thinking of Princess Tutu for a while, and I'm happy a found a story with my favorite couple.....Very well done!!
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was quite adorable. I think it was mostly in character... Fakir seemed a little too confident at first, but I bet after living with Ahiru for years he'd probabl start to get a little used to her being randomly naked.

I'd like to think he'd write her into being a girl again. Otherwise the ending comes off really sad...
person Kiziku
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freaking god! there are no words to descrie how well this story is written it was just...amazing! i heart you for writing it xD!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this story. LOVED IT! And I have no complaints at all. Would you mind if I take your idea, and run with it a bit? I've never written lemons, before, but your story made me realize just how lacking the PTT section is...

I'll put up my story in a few days. If you are not happy about how I worked off your idea, or anything, please please let me know! I'll take it down. I have a feeling that you'll enjoy it. I didn't try to mimic your writing style, btw... too hard for me to do, hahaha. Your story was def. well written, and something you should be proud of!
person RMW
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Niccceeeee...!!!

Though may I suggest that in future lemons, Fakir cut back on calling Ahiru moron?
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
H-O-T! Amazing job! I was squealing so loud throughout that, I think my grandmother's going to have me sent to an institution! XD I'll keep an eye for more of your stories in the future!
person Hawkie
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I... er... hrm. This... This made me blush. A lot. And making me blush isn't that easy. Well done!
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I was meaning to review this earlier and didn't. Because I'm bad and lazy. -_- But I'm reviewing it now! Because I must tell you that I **LOVE** it! To my understanding, there's only one other long FxA lemon out there. So thank you for adding to that painfully small number. And thanks for sending me that little e-mail thinger to let me know that you wrote this, as I may not have found it otherwise since I'd just about given up on trying to find an oasis in the desert that is PT smut-fics. Haha.. ^^' One little thing- I was reading an old interview with the creator of this series. She (I think she's a she ^^') had said she would have liked to have made/or would like to make an OVA to flesh out (no pun intended. hee.) the relationship between Fakir and Ahiru some more. But that never came about. D= I was feeling a bit down about that. Then a few days later I found out about this fic of yours and I felt better about the whole thing. ^^ Hehe.

First of all, I wouldn't have guessed that this were one of your first lemons. The level of detail you put into Distraction fills it with win. Makes me want to work harder on my lemons. D: LOVE the dominate Fakir. I couldn't picture him any other way. Perhaps a little more embarassed (given how much of a total spaztastic blushie antisocialite he was in the anime. XD) but still- I found this Fakir to still be very convincing. After all he's 21 and he's been waiting forever. XD XD I cracked up when Ahiru was saying her usual awkward things (to be more specific, the scene (scene? I mean, part.. heh) where she rambles about a time when she was almost going to pull his pants down in front of everyone.) That's just such an Ahiru-thing to ramble about at an inopportune time. Also, sometimes I utterly forget that she's still fairly "new" to humandom and there must be some things she doesn't know. I liked seeing that fitted into the story.

I hope that Fakir will be able to teach her "new steps" for the Pas De Deux again sometime. That's my not-so-subtle way of gently hinting that if you ever chose to write more AhiruXFakir ficcies, I'd love to read them. :D But anyway, thanks for Distraction!

One last thing- my jaw is still on the floor after hearing you mention "perved up Fakiru Japanese fanart and doujinshi." After watching the show for the first time years ago, I combed a load of different sites and didn't find anything of that kind (not that I was exculsively looking for the stuff. XD I was looking for Fakiru is stuff in general..) but still, links please? XD
person cReaTiVe
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truly have no idea what to say...
for your second lemon ever that was pretty damn good!!! i mean, my first and second ones are BOTH cluttered & sort of confusing...unlike yours. If you could please continue to write more lemons based on this anime and others I would be overjoyed.

Once again great job!!!

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