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Now that I know your making one I’m going to have go into the future and stop you from finishing so you can’t screw up any of my evil plans like stealing eight tons of Nazi gold or blowing up the earth and if more people start traveling back in time it’s bound to cause some paradoxes and I’ve caused enough by going back and having sex with myself.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

p.s. i'm getting review 666

I hope the nex update is soon i'm bored of waiting

666 perfect for sinners and it's mine haha i'll still try to take 700 for myself.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Now, on a more lighter note. Jirachi, a divine pokemon? When I haxed my Emerald to get it, I got no damm wish.

Also, I already know what Giovanni's plan is. DON'T READ IF YOU WANT THE PLAN SPOILED! He wants to get the pearls, get a relicanth and a wailord, use them at that undersea ruins that had all the weird writing, to reveal where the three regi's are, catch the regi's (the prince's,) then use them to awaken Regigigas (the king,) which is in some underwater tomb, who probably has some sort of god like power. DON'T READ IF YOU WANT THE PLAN SPOILED! Am I right or am I right? Also, don't ask where I got all this knowledge,as it took me a lot of blood and sweat.

Can someone leave a review of how many words are in chapter two please? Just the story part not the authors notes

Oh and slash I updated my story for chapter two if you want to read it.

Imasuky Lomae---Yeah, I know the shock trick, but it's still just Nintendo rated-E stuff, sigh. I wanna see that cute ass on Gardevoir...heh.

GenoLiger---She'd be fine, heh. Sexy and deadly.

But I'm still pissed that they're including something as dumb as "POKEMON TRAINER" but not a single Golden Sun character. fdgsdgsdfgs.

Xain---3578 words in chapter two. So short compared to later chapters.

And there's something I've been seriously considering...in the future, if I have a lot of time on my hands, I might possibly re-write some of the earlier chapters. The quality of Sinners is continually going up, I think we can all agree...and while that's mostly a swell thing, it does make the early chapters look kinda...dorky in comparison, ya know? Maybe someday I'll spruce up the first ten chapters or something.

Or maybe not. I dunno.

And yes, I'll give it a read as soon as I can, heh.

Holy Crap in the new super smash bro games Gardevoirdoes show up heres what happens.
It will protect the player that summoned it by conjuring a barrier.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

3500+ huh? God damn dude is it REALLY that small compaired to your other chapters? Well fuck. I have alot of work to do anyway. Each chapter probly won't be as long as yours Slash since well, AADHD and all. But at least i'm keeping with the story. My 24 KB file VS your 68 KB story, both with story only. Hell your chapter 17 is larger. By...2X + 20 In file size it was 2X +20 in word size it's about 3.5X larger. Good job slash. And I fucking suck at math. XD