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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person Bishonen
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ThatGuy is right just review the story and stop being whiney littlie pricks also here’s a vid by Slash that talks about someone else who bragged about shit

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/373684

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

P.S. Damn you for getting the 600th review my Samurai Flesh Eating Pandas will be paying you a vist later.
person Pokeman
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slash, you are one phenomenal author. This story hasn't even been up for a year, yet it already has just under 600 reviews. I've seen very few stories that can match that amount. But it is to be expected, because this story is so believeable(sp?). I can just see everything happening...and that's a feat that very few stories can do, in my case. I congratulate you once more, and hope to see an update before too long.
person xain34
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok slash I tried translating your story into japanese for a friend of mine, but it would seem the site can't seem to post the japanese words and letters. Any clue how to fix this?
person xain34
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My I.Q. is acctually 137, the reason why it's 137 is because I can translate one language to another language and vice versa visually (meaning through sight) I can't speak or understand any other languages other then english but visually I can translate Arabic,Chinese,Dutch,English,French,German,Greek,Japanese,Korean,Russian,Spanish and Italian. No i'm not using a fucking program to anyone else that keeps saying I fucking am. But as i'm trying to say slash if you need someone that can translate one of those laguages for you let me know alright?
person Tai
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Xain, chill out a little dude, nobody's attacking you. I think it's pretty cool you can translate like that actually, I have enough trouble with my two fluencies, English and Bad. :P
person Ragnar
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps on getting better. Your subtle messages about society mixed in with fi;thy, filthy smut... You are, by all intents and putposes, a god of literature.
With that said, I wanted to ask something: The character Kiyako... His mysterious powers... was he a product of a Human-Pokemon relationship? It would make entirely too much sense...

Also, i want to compliment you on giving Briney and Wattson their own personal backstories. Each one seemed quite entertaining, and I can't help but think that the actual series would be endlessly improved by their additions.

Lastly, while the lemon was good, as well as what I initially came for when will there be a return to violent action? Sex is nice, but your action scenes are also done amazingly well. Please bring back a little more violence.

person Ragnar
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Btw, I am also the Onar whi reviewed you earlier...

And I loved your lemon...

That sounded dirtier than I meant it to...

...

I guess that's what happens when you read one while listening to techno...
person Bishonen
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best DBZ parody is from Magical Shopping Arcade Abenobashi anime "Kamehamehot-hot-hot." Drops enerygy orb "Can we start over." Bad guy "Sure." Blast him cut to bunny girls holding up signs saying “The rest of this fight had been abridged.” Bad guy sent flying

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person xain34
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
namek time 5 minutes is 5 hours earth time O_O;

WHAT THE FUCK???

XD
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RoboRed---lol

Imasuky Lomae---Sometimes I'm thankful that Ash can't trash talk, or else he'd probably spend two episodes declaring how awesome his Pikachu is before doing anything.

Xain---Yep. Except more like five days in this case.

But don't hold me on that deadline...

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