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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RoboRed---Haha, no.
person xain34
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can anyone check my story and see if it says add chapter for story? Leave a review if it does or doesin't I need to know ASAP.
person xain34
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I watched the trilogy of dragon ball the first dragon ball is honestly the best. Before he went super sayan...Like a pansie ass bitch -_-;
Oh and the last episode of the dragon ball trilogy was FUCKING BULLSHIT!
person xain34
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dragon ball GT in my opinion was the gayest fucking finale series ever conceived...
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Xain---I look back on Dragonball Z and wonder 'how the hell did I ever like this?'. I mean, there were some good fights, but the parodies are right: too much random constipated-esque screaming and episode-long taunting.

On the same token, chapter 18 of Sinners will be uploaded in five minutes!

...in Namek time.

XD
person RoboRed
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Swoot.
person Splenge
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Addictive, too.
Strangely unfappable, but that's alright (not that it's not arousing, mind you.)

While I have a few ideas of who the "interloper" could be (some of them more brick-shitting than others, some likely more clichéd than others); I'll refrain from saying anything and simply smile to myself if I happen to be right when the time comes.

However, I get the feeling that may take a while, so I should write them down somewhere. Just so I don't forget.
Keep up the good work, while I feel oddly compelled to listen to "Somewhere Beyond the Sea".
person Bishonen
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Something i just read that makes no senes is this

Despite the fact that Ralts and its evolutions resemble humans, they somehow bear a closer relationship to Ghost-type Pokémon than with other humanoid Pokémon such as Mime Jr.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---I have the weirdest mental image of the two of them karaoke'ing "My Sharona".

Tai---Without giving away too much, I can say that the early presence of an aura seer, or a high-level psychic, would stop a lot of chaos from happening in Fallarbor. Heheh.

Splenge---My lemons seem to have a consistent 90% fap rate, lol. Good enough for me.

There have been quite a few guesses as to the identity of the Interloper in my e-mail lately, and one or two have come somewhat close...closer than I expected anyone would get, anyway...but no one's gotten it right, or been very close. All I will say is that the identity of this Interloper is a very, very plot-critical element of Sinners, and that more will be explained in upcoming chapters.

Imasuky Lomae---Incidentally, the portrayal of Gardevoir in Pokemon Mystery Dungeon...of her caring for her trainer, even when he abandoned her...that played a rather large part in my formation of Psymakio's personality. She's linked to her trainer not just by loyalty or love, but by her very essence. :squee:

Incidentally, if anyone's finished the Gardevoir storyline in Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (no one spoil it!)...damn, that was a tearjerker.

And P.S., I hate Mr. Mime. Forever. Partly because it's probably Ash's real father and we all know it.
person RoboRed
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH!!! OOOOHHH!!!

Is the interloper the disembodied soul of Capt. Stern? :P

(...prolly not...)

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