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Heh, I'm fairly aware of the free reign-ness, my only pondering is how to use him.

Incidentally, I'm hoping Tai doesn't find that town once Kiako's done with it. His aura sense ability would drive him absolutely NUTS there - all those dying auras flickering and blazing, the fear and despair and panic of an entire town channelling into one mind would probably break him, or at least force a hard reboot.

Brilliance in motion. I especially like how Slash turns into a kid when he starts talking strategy. Anal sex.... damn, can't think of a joke for that at the moment...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Heh, you've got no fear of plagarism from me. I bitched out my friend in my Web Design class just yesterday because he removed the 'This script created by on ' from the Javascript he took off the net. I hate plagarists, and would dearly love to see them all devoured by fiery electromagnetic destroyosaurs. I'd settle for them being decapitated and mounted on sticks to use as a groteqsuely amusing puppet show. */sicko*

You can bet you'll be in the disclaimer if I do put it up. I'm still toying with plot ideas, though - I know the general direction they'll be heading in is 'Whereever Kiako is so we can kick his ass' but I'm not sure of things like where Kiako would go, or tricks he might employ, or even if I should bring in Team Galactic into Tai's backstory and have them crop up at some point or something. It'd be cool, but I've seen what happens when I try to cram all my ideas into a story in one go, it ends up a steaming pile of goat crap. ><

Another great chapter dude ^_^

And I <3 the ending.

I also have a couple ideas who the Interloper could be, I emailed it to you.
Ya don't need to tell me who it is, but if I'm right, say so when it's revealed *Evil Grin*

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Tyrant, teh WEAPON killer.>

Imasuky Lomae---I'd only use the damned thing for item duplication (way back in the days when I didn't even have a Game Genie, lol) and for hunting safari Pokemon easier. Good times.

RoboRed---It scared the piss out of me when I'd encounter a level 100+ Snorlax or something...

I've lost the cartridges for the original R/B/Y games, but hey, that's what the interweb is for. :3

Proximity Alert---Heh, yes. Despite all of his maturity in regards to Kiako, Aqua, and Psymakio, he's still only 16 at this point in the story. I was still cheering to Dragonball Z when I was 16, so...lol. Sometimes his calm slips.

Tai---Yep, I hate plagiarists with a burning passion (even more than people who use ghostwriters!). Lazy shits.

If you need to know about the red-eyed bastard's current actitivies...Kiako is currently heading to Fallarbor to obtain the Sky Pearl...although he'll likely stop to do a quick observation of Slash and "Kirlia" (boy, won't he be surprised...) beforehand. Something pretty catastrophic will happen once he arrives at Fallarbor...but I can't say anything more, heh.

Since it'll be a long time before Kiako's whole story/motives/etc is revealed, you got pretty much free reign over him, lol. Go for it.

Tyrant---Glad you like it. :3

I think that Kiako and Giovanni should do a duet

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G93im2-iCYs

I wonder which one is a better singer

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Imasuky Lomae---Slime trails could have kinky applications. Lawl. Incidentally, Gastrodon and Gardevoir are apparently in the same egg group of 'indeterminate'.

HOW THE FUCK IS GARDEVOIR NOT HUMAN-SHAPED BUT THAT FUCKTARD MIME THAT YELLS ITS OWN NAME IS?

BLEH.

Xain---My old-school Pidgeots were so awesome, bred specifically to kill my brother's Alakazam.

Goggles---This story sure has come a long way. The next chapter is probably going to make Sinners pass the 100000 word mark (currently 90000-something)...hard to believe. Word counts seemed so much more formidable back in high school...

And I love cliff hangers. Whenever I CAN end a chapter with one, I totally will, because it's totally awesome that way, HEH.

Incidentally, I love fuzzy stories specifically because such happiness is so rare in real life. Nowadays people take their relationships for granted, caring only about how much money the other makes, what they do for a living, how many kids they're gonna have, how they're gonna split the shit when they divorce...bleh. True love is beyond such trivialities as money and marriage. It is what it is...and until the world discovers that, the only happy endings they'll ever see will be on paper. Or computer screens. Whatever.

RoboRed---I thought I'd take a lot longer, too, but the plot came to me pretty quickly (even if the writing took a lot longer). Chapter 18, I dunno, but I DO have some ideas in my head for oneshots/other works, so I don't know when Sinners will be my "full time" project again with weekly updates and all.

The Gym Battles I love aren't the ones of the anime, where "DODGE" and "LOLUSETHUNDERSHOCK" are shouted over and over. It's more "ARE YOU READY TO ROCK?" mixed with some "FUCK THEM IN THE ASS, THE BAD WAY", heh.

Glad to see you kept your word and continued the story within November. Great chapter (not as much smut as I would have hoped, but I still enjoyed it). Very interesting scene wit the "Interloper" and I can't wait for the upcoming battle with Watson.

Keep up the fantastic work.

Once again, you have made something brilliant, sprung full-blown from your head, or somewhere else...

The mind has been boggled, so here I sit, all boggle-like, wondering why there's no next chapter.

Seriously, though, fantastic chapter! No idea what sort of word would apply specifically to that precise level of awesomeness your works invariably measure up to. Godly seems a bit audacious, not sure what else might fit.

I do have an idea who the Interloper is, but I don't know if I should say it. By freak chance if I were right, that could very well ruin a surprise, so I'll just hang onto the idea for a while. And no, I'm not thinking it's Gardevoir's mom.

And now for the requisite threat. Update soon, or I'll send an army of Pornygons (Porygons that went online to find porn, of course) to destroy all the world's Blow Pop factories! Rawr.

P.S. I am SO tempted to get to work on Ruby again, spend as much time as needed to get a Shiny Ralts, female, Naughty or Sassy nature, with Trace, and evolve it up to Gardevoir and teach it Thunderbolt. Thanks for stealing all of my free time for the next decade!

Heh, I think I know why they put Gardevoir in 'indeterminate' - in theory she could fall under both Humanshape and Fairy, and since they couldn't decide for sure they put her in 'Indeterminate' and just never got around to classifying her properly. It's a placeholder. :P

I have a little one-shot in the works, myself. I might just make a mild reference to Sinners at some point, since the characters involved are also going to star alongside Slash and Psymakio in my fanfiction of your fanfiction. :P I'll give you a teaser and say that it involves Spike the Lucario (or possibly a Riolu, who evolves part-way through), the masseuse in Veilstone city, and my own perverted take on just what her 'secret massage techniques' are :P

Maybe I'll even post it up. Who knows? With work as good as this in the world, even the shyest, least confident writers can find the audacity to put their work up alongside their literary heroes :P