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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person Bishonen
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've got a Pokemon story set in a high school and i want to know if i could use slash later one as a top student from another school but it wouldn't be for a while

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Anon---It was a close one, heh. My brain just kept falling out of the writing zone over and over, but near the end I got the big burst I needed, so heh.

Incidentally, Watson's got some swell Pokemons. It'll be fun writing for him.

DizzyRye---My muse is crazy. It's already nailed down critical plot elements dozens of chapters away, but I don't know what'll happen in chapter 23 or anything...

Anyway, glad you liked this one, heh. Like I said, I'd be shocked if anyone guessed who/what the Interloper is with the scant hints I've allowed so far...the only way I could see someone being right about it is if they hacked into my computer and sneaked through the dozens of Notepad documents I got laying around, lol.

You can e-mail me with a guess, but I'd just tell you if it's right or not, not giving any hints to guide ya, lol.

And if anyone's curious, Slash's Gardevoir is a Synchronize-wielder. Nature is more or less irrelevant in Sinners, though.

Tai---She should be in the SEXY group, dammit.

Incidentally, may as well mention this here so everyone can see. I have no problem with other authors using Sinners characters/plot points/whatever, as long as they attribute the characters/plot/whatever they borrow to me. Doesn't need to mentioned in every chapter or anything, just once in the first chapter/appearance would be more than adequate, heh.

Fanfiction of my fanfiction. That's certainly something, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---Yep, that's fine with me per above. Now I have a mental image of Slash and Gardie making out under the bleachers...lol.
person RoboRed
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reply to Slash's reply to Goggles:

Yeah. I agree. I'll refer again to my first review on this story. I like the angsy/romancy stuff. Part of what you mentioned in your reply to Goggles are a few of the resasons why. Stuff like that is just really rare in real life and can pretty much only be found in books, computer games, tv, movies, and anime (n' stuff like that).

But if it did, life would get REALLY interesting...>_>
person Goggles
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Humanity: Escaping from reality since [date of first published fiction].

Virtual Reality is a scary thought, now that I think about that.
The interloper is actually...Corphish, with Gravelers left arm attached. It was hard hacking, but I found you out.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RoboRed---Yeah, if people actually cared about each other as much as Slash and Gardevoir, the world wouldn't suck half as much.

Because everyone would be at home making love instead of shooting each other, heheh.

Goggles---Maybe Slash should catch a...no...wait...COULD IT BE?!

WILD MISSINGNO. APPEARED!

OH FUCK IT'S USING SKY ATTACK
person Bishonen
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Back when Pokemon first came out me and my friends would catch MISSINGNO. and see who could train the best one

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person RoboRed
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MISSINGNO ROTFLMAO!!!

I remember Missingno used to scare the living piss out of me because I was afraid of losing my game. I only messed around in that area because I wanted a sneakier way to catch poke's, and teh miss was good training bait.

Meh...now I don't really care about my red version anymore, and I'd be messin around with the miss a lot if I could be arsed...but I can't. :P
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Xain---Your wish is about to be answered. :3

Drew Pickles---All hail Drew Pickles. THE SECOND COMING OF THE BARNEY BUNCH APPROACHES. Maybe.

Goggles-I am about to atone.

Yep, chapter 17 in 3...2...1...
person xain34
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Perfectly mimics shawn connery's voice)
Yes, YES! YOUR THE MAN NOW DOG!
person Review
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a time to log in. I haven't been on in ages, and the first thing I see is the new chapter for Sinners! Yeah! To sum up this chapter; It fucking owned. A combination of SEX, the mysterious past of Kaiko, the inner workings of Slash's mind, Slash and Psymakio's future, and an upcoming battle! Could things get any better?

Answer: When chapter 18 comes out, duh.

And the gophers are more than pleased. Actually, they're currently dicussinng Slash's upcoming battle with Wattson. Hmm...I wonder what Slash has up his sleeve...

KABOOM!

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