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Xain---I punched the keys, for God's sake!

Black Whole---I was a bit surprised at how long I stretched a single sex activity, heh. I'm also surprised that I made the whole dominance/submission issue into something romantic. Honestly, when I started writing it, I had no plans for D/S...and once my muse started nudging me there, I had no idea where it was going with it. The whole issue ended up with me discovering the lesson of the D/S---to give, not to take---at the same time as story-Slash, which was pretty amusing for me. XD

I'll be revealing more about Kiako, and his history, as Arc 2 goes on. A little piece here, a little bit there...maybe a big ol' chunk every once in a while...heh. I can't wait to get to talk about "the battle on the mountain". :3

Incidentally, Kiako's choice of travel reveals more about him than you'd think...kukuku.

I WILL NOT COMMENT ON THE BATTLE WITH WATSON, SO NYAH

And for those of you who waited in suspense for chapter 17, you can take solace (or evil laughter) in my karma...I've been waiting eagerly for an update on my personal favorite story for about two months now, lol. :-(

ThatGuy---Heh, I almost missed the deadline AGAIN. The original deadline was sometime in October, which then became November 15, which then became November 24, and lastly Sunday. I finished and published less than an hour from unleashing a wave of murderous animals on myself...

Now, as for chapter 18...I don't know when it'll happen. The Christmas oneshot is coming up soon, and I'd like to put out a chapter of my upcoming original story before 2008, so...we'll see, heh. I need to stop giving out estimates for my chapters/oneshots, because I almost always miss them. ^_^;

All I have to say is.......I'm speechless this was just great that's all i can say without makeing up words...Next chapter I'm makeing up a word for this it will take me a while to think up somethis good enough.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Excellent.

...But still unfappable. :P

I have an idea as to who the Interloper might be- but I'll keep my wild and unverifiable speculation to myself until there's more evidence.

-Twi

Imasuky Lomae---Heh, thanks. I'd recommend "Slash-tastic", even though that might go better with yaoi, heheh.

Twi---I fapped while writing it. Thankfully I've much practice in the art of typing with one hand...

If anyone correctly guessed who the Interloper is now, I'd be shocked and wager they read my mind, heh.

An awesome chapter... but you're pure evil for ending on a cliffhanger! >< I've spent all damn day trying to ponder Slash's strategy for Watson...

Since his idea is either genius or stupid, I'm assuming one of his lead-ins will be Corphish, possibly alongside Growlithe. And since he isn't using Graveller, and probably won't want to risk Electrike till he knows what the little guy can do, that leaves Psymakio on reserve, or possibly as one of the lead-ins (though I think he'd rather have her on reserve - he probably wouldn't put her at risk until necessary, despite what she said about being more than willing to battle).

So, with that logical conclusion, I have to now figure out how he plans to win this... After all, he's got a Plan, and that Plan is most definitely insane, which means it just might work. :P

Tai---I SHALL NOT COMMENT ABOUT THE BATTLE, AHAHAHA

I CAN comment, however, that chapter 18 will likely be shorter than this one, as I think I'll be devoting all of it to the battle.

And yep, it is insane. Like Slash said, in a straight-up battle Watson would destroy him. Which means he needs to do something batshit crazy if he's to have any hope of victory.

It'll be close...

yet again you amaze me .. incredibly hot and sweet i couldnt put it down +1 to you slash

Luminous Dark---Thank you, thank you very much. Heh.

Heh, I don't want you to tell me what happens, but I'm going into tournament battling once I get my team right and once I get the Wii and Battle Revolution, so I'm trying to think like a trainer. The idea of using type-inferior Pokemon is completely alien, so this has me very, very curious. My strategy gland is buzzing with excitement!

NEED MORE! Update ASAP, or Magikarp will kill you and your family (http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ban5uv5v72c) ^^

Ash got whopped by Magikarp just goes to prove how lame he is

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae