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Gawdamn, I've missed a lot. Incidentally, my computer had broken down for awhile, and school's been a bitch too. But now I'm ready to start reviewing again. :3

By the way, I'd like to join the "Sinner's Mailing List".

Email: demonicstrife@gmail.com

Now to review that story with the blowpop. Lol.

Put me on the mailing list as well

bishonen20@hotmail.com

What did you edit today, one of the infrequent, minor errors I notice but feel it would be nit-picking to point out? Or maybe a note in a chapter other than the first and last. Either way, I had an idea for the people who have trouble loading this review page (it loads in only a few seconds for me, so I don't care too much, but...) maybe you could post the second arc as a separate story? That would start the review slate back at zero. Unless, of course, you wanted to try to push it into 4 digits, in which case don't let me stop you.

Ok slash you can most likly send the E-Mail by responding to the E-Mail i sent you. Hell it may even be in the spam folder honestly -_-
And i'm not getting E-Mail from newgrounds either...

DemonicStrife---Added, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---You got it.

Anonymous---Changed Slash's use of "pussy" in a previous chapter, lol. I like to avoid that word in lemons...just not sexy enough, heh.

I haven't started the massive copy-editing I intended to do after 16 yet (most of my time has been spent on the Sinners oneshot and planning for other stories), but I will eventually. I'm aware of several problems in the story (minor continuity issues, a handful of grammatical shit that slipped by), and I'll nail em when I get some time, heh.

I was actually considering putting each arc in a separate story, but then I'd have to add up views/reviews/etc for a total, and yeah, I'd love to break 1000 reviews. I haven't had any of the loading problems yet, but I know some people have to a small extent, which leads me to consider a couple ideas.

1) Break up the arcs into separate stories as you suggested, to limit the massive review counts in each.

2) Break up every three arcs into separate stories; that way I could have a "Sinners Trilogy" with 3 arcs each, and a final arc to round things up.

3) Keep it as one massive story, and anyone having problems loading this page can just ask that I reply to their reviews through e-mail.

I'm more inclined for 2 or 3, because I'd love for the final hit/review tallies and history of Sinners to be readily seen for those who come after I leave...hell, it's already impressive enough, but imagine someone stumbling along a story with 100+ chapters and a few thousand reviews! I don't know. The problem isn't critical...right now, anyway...so I suppose I'll keep Arc 2 in this story and consider option 2 if enough people have problems.

It'd really help if there was a page system for reviews...like, 50 on each page...but the AFF guys are already damn busy, and I know better than to pester active tech staff, lol.

Xain---I sent it last night, so it should be in your e-mail somewhere. "Thanatos Batch Results" would be the subject, heh. I'll send it out to you again, as well as all the new sign-ups, just to be sure.

johnfnkey@sbcglobal.net
dude i didnt recive any mail from you yet O_o
And im possitive im on that mailing list O_O;

Xain---Hm. I sent something out on the 11th, but I checked my list with the email in your review and it wasn't on it. Either I missed it (my spam controls are really high) or forgot to add it, bah.

I've added you (for sure this time) and I'll send you the little thing I sent out on the 11th to make things square, heh.

Incidentally, chapter 17 nears completion...a day, maybe two.

This story is kick ass i hope the next update coms soon or else I'll send my overly religious mutant crocodiles to your house to beat you with bibles

Hinatasfootslave---Next chapter is underway; mid-to-late November release date.

I also sent out something to all of you on my mailing list; AND NO, I WON'T COMMENT ON IT ANY FURTHER. :3

negativety101---Sometimes my computer does that "we're done loading, but oops we didn't really load everything" thing for large images, but it's behaved surprisingly well for so many reviews.

Ah, it'd been a while since my last death threat, heh. Don't worry, I expect at least one, probably two, possibly even three chapters in November.