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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*tears up* OMG that was so sweet... I need a hankie. Great job, dude! Good luck on the rest of your fics, I know I'll be wandering back here for the continuation of this one X3
person benn454
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two words, Slash. Fucking. Awesome. Or should that be Awesome Fucking? Either way, good job my friend! The elephants wish to convey their extreme pleasure *wink* for an incredibly hot and well-written chapter.

Don't take TOO long getting back to Sinners now. I'm definitely getting on the mailing list and I expect an email from you before we all get old and gray XD
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy_Lover---One can always cry AND fap. lol.

Twilight Knife---Glad you liked it. Even though I'll be focusing on other stuff for a bit, I'll be planning and plotting Arc 2's main points all the while.

benn454---Heheh, yes. And I'd reckon that those two will be stealing moments whenever they can.

My mailing list is swelling, hehe.
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, an unfappable (Albeit extremely sexy and well-written) chapter... Can't wait for Arc 2.

...BTW, add me to the mailing list, wouldya? zero9g9(at)yahoo.com
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Twi---The ratio of fappers to normal readers appears to be about 10:1. Not bad, if I do say so myself. XD

And yes, I'll add ya up, heh.
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I take it I'm the one? Heh.

Thanks for the mailing list add, though!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Very nicely done, and it goes at a pace that betrays the fact that the chapter is mostly smut. Not that that's a bad thing, of course! Looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)
person DemonicStrife
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I honestly can't find any words to describe how incredible that chapter was. Great work, Slash.

So now you'll be working on some other projects for awhile (hopefully including another story with a tortured Ash). The ending of Arc 1 seems like an ending to the first book of long-running series, if you know what I mean, and writing the next part often takes time of course. So rereading the story will keep me more than satisfied for now. And I've hardly seen any updates to some of your other stories anyway, so I'm hoping to get a good read from those, too. Again, awesome chapter.

Alright, it's almost 1:00 am. I'm going to sleep. Peace out. XD
person Isaac
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really wanna thank you man, this has been an incredible story, and to think it still isn't done, I'm simply awstruck by how good it actually is. I mean you relly should be over there on the your computer cheering for yourself and celebrating, the story is a complete success and it is just awsome. I have to say after 15 chapters of flufy romance and angst and otherwise great story telling, I can honestly say me and many others were on the edge of our seats hoping the long awaited mating would not be lacking in some way, and you just blew that chapter out of the water, Kudos, congrats, and as many other congradulations as there possibly is n the world, i truly is an unbeleveable story, it was just great, you should be literally beaming with pride lol
person anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, that was hot in every way imaginable. Definitely worth the wait you made all of us endure. Too bad you got rid of the anal scene, but I trust we'll see one in the next arc at some point. Oh, and Gardevoir taking the initiative and giving Slash oral was fantastic.

Take all the time you need on your other fics (but not TOO long). This chapter will sate me for some time to come.

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