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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! THANK YOU SO VERRRRRYYYY MUCH!!! That...was...shit, I can't describe it!!! You just keep on getting better and better Slash...I don't know how you do it. The best part was the final connection of their bond...so fucking intimate!!! Too bad Sinners is gonna be sitting for a while...it makes me sad...wait, what the hell?!? AAAAAHHH!! NO, BAD GOPHERS! GET AWAY!! SOMEONE HELP ME--
We sory. Teh persn known as thatGuy is ded. He was mauled by a group of some of da othar gofers who din't want da chaptr 2 end. So ya. he ded. By da way, I'm jumpin' on teh keysss to type. I hopee taht this loooks rite. Byebye.
"OWWW...my freakin' head...what the hell happened...Ugh...What the fuck?? Get off my keyboard!!!!"
;asklfdjasl;skfja;lskfja'lskdfjaopisndvlakvnrpaiohfln;oeainsefoijeaopi
Okay, I'm back. My head's busted, but I should be okay for the next few minutes...or until I die from bloodloss. Eh, w/e. Yes, my gophers went rabid and tried killing me...oh, it seems one of them already explained that. Nice. Well, my ambulence is here, so I gotta wrap this up.
KABOOM!
We sory. Teh persn known as thatGuy is ded. He was mauled by a group of some of da othar gofers who din't want da chaptr 2 end. So ya. he ded. By da way, I'm jumpin' on teh keysss to type. I hopee taht this loooks rite. Byebye.
"OWWW...my freakin' head...what the hell happened...Ugh...What the fuck?? Get off my keyboard!!!!"
;asklfdjasl;skfja;lskfja'lskdfjaopisndvlakvnrpaiohfln;oeainsefoijeaopi
Okay, I'm back. My head's busted, but I should be okay for the next few minutes...or until I die from bloodloss. Eh, w/e. Yes, my gophers went rabid and tried killing me...oh, it seems one of them already explained that. Nice. Well, my ambulence is here, so I gotta wrap this up.
KABOOM!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DemonicStrife---Glad you liked it, heh.
Yes, I have been horribly neglecting many of my other stories, and I'll FINALLY give them a bit of attention now that I've got free time. Plus I have sooo many oneshot ideas...
Isaac---I'm honestly amazed that I've managed to have so many people keeping up with this story, despite there being no sex until THE 16TH CHAPTER (like, 70000 words in!). I have a feeling that now, with the hotness beginning, things will heat up. Heheheh.
And I am proud of the last chapter, even if I had to cut some of the fun for the sake of flow and feeling, heh.
anon---You most definitely will be seeing the anal scene put elsewhere. Originally the problem was that I couldn't include it and still make things feel romantic...but eventually I managed, and it really was a good scene in terms of hotness and luff. However, when I finished the chapter, I read over it and noticed there was WAY too much sex, so certain things had to go, alas.
But hey, better to have less sex than a romance-less chapter of nothing but pointless smut, so in the end, it's for the best...
Black Whole---Ol' Slashy can write lemons that touch people...TOUCHING THEM EVERYWHERE. YA KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING?
Incidentally, this chapter was loosely based on my own first time. XD
I can't write to start writing Sinners again with the two of them being mates. Things will be so...fluffy. Well, fluffy whenever the plot permits, heh.
ThatGuy---Glad to see this chapter getting such a positive reaction (in your pants?). Yes, the point of this chapter was to present something more than just random reckless sex. There's a common idea in the world that sex and romance aren't really connected, or that certain acts (such as oral or anal) are inherently non-lovey....BULLSHIT, I say! Gardevoir can suck off Slash and it can STILL be romantic and fluffy.
:3
Yes, I have been horribly neglecting many of my other stories, and I'll FINALLY give them a bit of attention now that I've got free time. Plus I have sooo many oneshot ideas...
Isaac---I'm honestly amazed that I've managed to have so many people keeping up with this story, despite there being no sex until THE 16TH CHAPTER (like, 70000 words in!). I have a feeling that now, with the hotness beginning, things will heat up. Heheheh.
And I am proud of the last chapter, even if I had to cut some of the fun for the sake of flow and feeling, heh.
anon---You most definitely will be seeing the anal scene put elsewhere. Originally the problem was that I couldn't include it and still make things feel romantic...but eventually I managed, and it really was a good scene in terms of hotness and luff. However, when I finished the chapter, I read over it and noticed there was WAY too much sex, so certain things had to go, alas.
But hey, better to have less sex than a romance-less chapter of nothing but pointless smut, so in the end, it's for the best...
Black Whole---Ol' Slashy can write lemons that touch people...TOUCHING THEM EVERYWHERE. YA KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING?
Incidentally, this chapter was loosely based on my own first time. XD
I can't write to start writing Sinners again with the two of them being mates. Things will be so...fluffy. Well, fluffy whenever the plot permits, heh.
ThatGuy---Glad to see this chapter getting such a positive reaction (in your pants?). Yes, the point of this chapter was to present something more than just random reckless sex. There's a common idea in the world that sex and romance aren't really connected, or that certain acts (such as oral or anal) are inherently non-lovey....BULLSHIT, I say! Gardevoir can suck off Slash and it can STILL be romantic and fluffy.
:3
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damnit man, you're putting me to shame, I havn't updated, or uploaded anything new in months. Then again, I have several multi chaptered fics and one/two shots in progress. About a total of 12 works currently in developement, so I guess, as long as I'm working on them, no one can really call me lazy.
Anywho, back to your fic. Well, still going strong, not much else to say.
Semper phi, carry on.
Anywho, back to your fic. Well, still going strong, not much else to say.
Semper phi, carry on.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus slash man i think you gave me a heart attack .. very hot and very sweet .. loved it
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CrazyIvan---Yeah, I've got a lot of half-finished shit too, and lots of ideas that were never put into writing. Can't wait to get working on them...
Sinners is maybe...one tenth completed now. I currently have ten arcs planned, but things change when ya start writing, so...who knows.
Luminous Dark---Heheh, glad you enjoyed it.
Sinners is maybe...one tenth completed now. I currently have ten arcs planned, but things change when ya start writing, so...who knows.
Luminous Dark---Heheh, glad you enjoyed it.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god Slash....Damn I don't know if I cry or fap....fuck that was so perfect...ahhh sorry I can't write anymore , my hands are full atm.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's great to see a well written story. Excellent in every respect. Keep up the good work, and start a new arc ASAP.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello I am Lao Shu first general of the Pandas I am sorry to inform you that our master has died as a result of reading this chapter but theses were his last thoughts on this story
Oh my fucking holy damn I.I…I…words no in existence describe good this chapter is.
After uttering that incoherent bit of gibberish his heart exploded and he died instantly so now I and my followers are free to do as we please in a few days we will take control of the world and in thank you shall be given control over Canada and incase your wondering how I’m typing I used bamboo t poke the keys.
“Hey I’m not dead just unconscious.”
Bang bang
Again I am sorry to inform you of the death of my master.
With Eternal Gratitude, Lao Shu
Oh my fucking holy damn I.I…I…words no in existence describe good this chapter is.
After uttering that incoherent bit of gibberish his heart exploded and he died instantly so now I and my followers are free to do as we please in a few days we will take control of the world and in thank you shall be given control over Canada and incase your wondering how I’m typing I used bamboo t poke the keys.
“Hey I’m not dead just unconscious.”
Bang bang
Again I am sorry to inform you of the death of my master.
With Eternal Gratitude, Lao Shu
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!
That was absolutely wonderful, very enjoyable! (I think I would have enjoyed it even more if my body wasn't on a caffeine high...) Great work, Slash! Unfortunately, I don't know how I'm gonna surrvive the extremely long period of time with no updates, but hey, I got a lot out of just reading this section of the story. Lemme tell you something, this story got me more than enjoyable reading. I now have a cool deviantart account, and I inadvertantly met a music remixer that I had been wanting to talk to for a few months, and we worked on a new music remix to improve the original! (In short, I've been given something more to do with my life :P) I MIGHT work on a AD account later. Dunno... But anyways, it's interesting how one thing leads to another. Great job on arc one, and be expecting an e-mail from me for the Sinners mail list. ^_^
- RoboRed
That was absolutely wonderful, very enjoyable! (I think I would have enjoyed it even more if my body wasn't on a caffeine high...) Great work, Slash! Unfortunately, I don't know how I'm gonna surrvive the extremely long period of time with no updates, but hey, I got a lot out of just reading this section of the story. Lemme tell you something, this story got me more than enjoyable reading. I now have a cool deviantart account, and I inadvertantly met a music remixer that I had been wanting to talk to for a few months, and we worked on a new music remix to improve the original! (In short, I've been given something more to do with my life :P) I MIGHT work on a AD account later. Dunno... But anyways, it's interesting how one thing leads to another. Great job on arc one, and be expecting an e-mail from me for the Sinners mail list. ^_^
- RoboRed
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---There was much banging and exploding going on in that hotel room. :-O
RoboRed---In the long run, the break before the next arc is for the best. Writing too much on one subject can get one weary (even when concluded with teh secks), and a change of pace will get me all refreshed for Arc 2, heheh.
I'll be keeping myself busy til then...there are a few projects that I can't wait to get started on. :-D
Glad you liked the chapter, and more sexfulness will occur in the future! Hell, chapter 17 is probably going to be titled "The Morning After" or something, and you can guess what happens there. XD
RoboRed---In the long run, the break before the next arc is for the best. Writing too much on one subject can get one weary (even when concluded with teh secks), and a change of pace will get me all refreshed for Arc 2, heheh.
I'll be keeping myself busy til then...there are a few projects that I can't wait to get started on. :-D
Glad you liked the chapter, and more sexfulness will occur in the future! Hell, chapter 17 is probably going to be titled "The Morning After" or something, and you can guess what happens there. XD