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I have to say that if there were a april fools chapter than all of us should gather at slash’s house with a baseball bat a life sized ash doll and 42 gallons of frozen yogurt.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Okay, I can understand teh baseball bat and teh life-size Ash doll, but wtf is with the yogurt? (do I even wanna know?...)

Well if all of us get together than we need a snack and yogurt
Is good for you ,you should eat plenty of it and any thing else with milkl in it and I’m not just saying all of that because of the fact that I’m the leader of an organization bent on world domination by putting mind controlling drugs into everyone’s dairy products.......Ah crap i should'nt have said the last part.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

slicerness---I would never lie about lemons. A man who lies about lemons is a man who makes enemies.

RoboRed---Yes.

Imasuky Lomae, RoboRed, Imasuky Lomae again---I know that I've established Ash to be a disgraced Pokemon trainer in Sinners, but here would be another swell Ash-event.

End of first Pokemon movie: Mewtwo thanks Ash for showing him that he can be powerful and good at the same time.

As Ash and buddies turn to leave, Mewtwo laughs and says "just kidding", and proceeds to use his psychic powers to rip the internal organs out of Ash n' pals, because he thought it would be funny. And it totally was.

He then rapes Mew, because anyone's who's anyone knows that MEW AND MEWTWO ARE NOT EQUAL IN POWER GAHHHHH

EDN

That was an awesome chapter :D Slash teaching Psymakio to read was utterly adorable. Titanic? I'd rather see Rocky as well :P I'll call of the laser-wielding cyborg elephants. For now...

Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder who has more stamina, a human or a Gardevoir? =3

DemonicStrife---Oh, after hearing about that AND seeing the shitty anime every time I turn to Cartoon Network (do they just fucking marathon that show 24/7 or what!?)...Ash is going to suffer. Wailord, Nidoking, Muk, who knows...

Black Whole---It would be a bit difficult to operate as a below-ground terrorist unit when you advertise via brochures. "For the Team Aqua health plan, turn to page 4." lolno. If Archie had done that, Slash probably would have had Gardevoir blow his fucking head off, and to hell with the consequences.

Slash's unique nature will become more clear as the story progresses, heh. All I can say is that...well, I don't write Mary-Sue-type characters. People will have their flaws and their darknesses...and Slash is no exception.

I should make a picture of Slash and her reading together...

ThatGuy---As I was writing, I was actually toying with them doing a little something during the movie...nothing serious, just handjobbing or something, lol. But I couldn't make them justify the risk to each other (or to myself), regardless of how excited they were, so I scrapped that idea.

Hard times are coming up for Slash and Gardevoir, so I'm getting in as much fluff as I can now...

DemonicStrife---While I can't say what precisely with happen with Slash and Team Aqua...mostly because I haven't solidified it to myself, heh...I can say for certain that Archie is going to regret recruiting this trainer.

And yes, the reading scene was cute, huh? While Gardevoir is very intelligent, there are aspects of society that she's unfamiliar with, so...heh. She likes popcorns, you know.

Magi Kavin---Glad you're enjoying, heh. The next chapter should be out within the next few days.

Luminous Dark---You have no idea, heheheh.

dragonofunity---You won't have to wait too long...although it may be a while before Arc 2 starts after that.

benn454---Maybe it's best that they saw Titanic this time...you don't whip out Rocky movies til the third date, heh. They better get it on video though, because they'll need privacy once things start to heat up...

I was looking trough a list of pokemon and remembered Corphish's evolution Crawdaunt is part dark type i'm kinda wondering how Jirachians will react to that in addtion to the whole haveing sex with a Gardevoir.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Ahh damn you Slash ! This chapter already answers 2 points that I made on my big review =.= I TOLD YOU TO GET OUT OF MY F***ING MIND >_<

What a way to end a chapter too... Well at least chapter 16 is set up , I can't wait for it... But , more than ever , take your time to write it. Put your soul in it , I trust that you will be able to write a chapter to be remembered by everyone that reads it. You'd better make that leather whip from your Muse work a lot ;-P

I don't know what to do Slash ...I've written a lot about Slash and Gardevoir on my review , but know I'm stuck on Watson. I'm not sure on what I'll write about him, I don't even know if I trust him. He seems to be a good person , but you've proven to be very hard to predict... Maybe I should wait for chapter 16 , then write a review about the whole "1st arc" of this fic , while you work on your other stories? Oh btw I will be reviewing the other fics as well , don't think that you can escape from me >=D As I told you in another review , I'll be there till the very end. Not necessarily the end of this fic, either.

I just read taht you are having some problems in your real life Slash , I hope that the pressure that we are building for chapter 16 isn't bothering you too much. Maybe you should take some time to rest and think about everything,maybe go out and have some fun with your friends to help you get over that , so when you start writting chapter 16 you can put all your heart in it. I wish I could help you more than that , but unfortunately I can't.

Oh so the problem is the girl you like doesn't call you ? Well maybe I can help you then.

Be honest . You are sure that she likes you , or that she shows the slightest kind of interest? If she does , then things will get easier.

I don't know much about girls either , Slash . The little I know comes from my conversations with my trustworthy , female friends. One thing I can say for sure is: I'm yet to find a girl that never compared herself with another female , and tried to prove that she is better than her. Seriously. That's why they get so furious when we look at a gorgeous girl in the streets . Women are INSANELY competitive, SPECIALLY among herselves.

If you think that she likes you , but is playing hard to get , you can use that. Judge her personality ( and specially her self-confidence) and plan your next move accordingly. I will quote Freedie Mercury here : "Love is a game that I love to play" or something like that. If you use the rules in your favour , you may have an advantage.

I hope that helps you , even if just a little.

Imasuky Lomae---Oh, they'll be pissed...although, if that's the only thing the Jirachians notice, Slash and Gardevoir should consider themselves lucky...

There will be much more developments with the Jirachians later, and all that they represent.

Fluffy_lover---Slash has powers.

Heh, I'm sure the next chapter will be swell. Been a while since I wrote a long lemon scene, but I'm sure I still gots what it takes...and if I don't, my muse will beat it out of me.

You know, I trust Watson...and, what with me writing the story, you'd think that means YOU can trust Watson. But remember how little control I have over my muse; it's possible that Watson...or any character...can pull a fast one on us. But there will be hell to pay if that happens, heh.

Chapter 16 is actually going along just fine, despite my little personal problems. Getting engrossed in my writing seems to fend away stress, so...yep, lol.

It's not a romantic issue, though...if it were as something as 'some chick is rejecting me', I'd have told her to fuck off and not given it a second thought. The problem is that my best friend of five years (no romance here) just randomly off and stopped talking to me, and hangs up on me if I try to call. I have absolutely no clue why, although there's nothing I can do at the moment, so there's no point in me worrying about it.