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Judging by other people's reactions, I think people would stone him to death if he did that...

anon---NEVAR.

Just kidding. :3

Black Whole---It's not really that hard to write at all...it's just hard writing the fluffy parts, bleh.

Imasuky Lomae---I'm not dying or anything, it's just that a chick won't take my calls, lol. Still...

DemonicStrife---Good news? It doesn't involve a love interest. Bad news? She's still female, which means I'm absolutely fucking clueless. Slash is not exactly suave, lol.

RoboRed---She'll call. Oh, eventually, she'll call.

DEAR GOD I HOPE SHE CALLS.

benn454---AD NEEDS MORE GARDEVOIR HENTAI. THERE, I SAID IT.

And you may wish to recall the elephants, because...well, keep reading.

RoboRed---Roflmuffin?

Imasuky Lomae---That is a bunny with tits. Why am I curiously aroused?

Now, the question is, do I submit chapter 15 now, or wait until 11:59 just to see who all the would-be assassins are?

No...rofflecakes!

Which 11:59? People have different time zones you know...it's 11:28 here right now.
(*rummaging around room* now where did I put that flail?)

EDIT: YES! IT'S UP! OMIGODTHANKYOUUUU!!!

I cant wait for the next chapter also a few things about the events

The enemy of my enemy is my friend And keep your friends close and your enemies closer

I would have died if Archie had pulled out a brochure

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

RoboRed---I operate on CST, heh. So I managed the self-imposed deadline with less than an hour to spare.

SLASH ALWAYS DELIVERS ON TIME. USUALLY.

Imasuky Lomae---Arc 2 is going to be wild, heheh.

sweet sweet sweet, lol awsome so basically Slash is a spy, great twist, great story, and finally the ong awaited mating is next chapter, nice. Well keep it going strong and I don't think I need to tell you, if that next chapter never comes, well your next birthday won't either =)

BTW Gardevoir is fucking adorable, when she growls, when she blushes, ah hell lets face she is the most adorable pokemon also, I've seen your myspace profile and newgrounds profile and have seen pics of slash in a "demon form", can I assume that he may have some similarities to Kiako that have not been revealed, that would be badass, a fist to fist fight, freaky arm against freaky arm, can't wait for the more detailed info on Kiako and just what the cool freak of nature can do hehe

I've been waiting for this update for what feels like FOREVER, and what do you give us? Actual plot development? How dare you...

Well at least the next chapter ought to be filled with lemony goodness (and it better be lemony! LEMONY I SAY!). Interesting plot developments in this chapter, liked the Team Aqua spin on things, and the scene where Slash was teaching Gardevoir to read was absolutely adorable.

With praise aside, the next chapter had better be one big ole' sour lemon! ( ...in a good way ;D )

Well man, once again another great chapter. I cant think of anything to say that i havnt said before. Well, im sure yur gonna get a LOAD of hits after the next chapter, hopefully those people will actually read the story, just not the smut. Its a really great piece of work, you should be proud man.

Isaac---Rather than forgetting what Watson told him about the Magmas and Aquas, it's one of the reasons Slash decided to join...revenge. Let's just hope things go smoothly with that for him and Gardevoir...

Slash and Kiako DO look similar, yes, and there's a reason for that...the original incarnations of Slash and Kiako are both demons of the same species. And while the stories and incarnations of the two may change greatly...the two will always be bitter enemies.

Whether or not there is any connection between the two in Sinners remains to be seen.

anon---OH NOES, NOT PLOT!

I had the mental image of Slash teaching Gardevoir how to read a while back, and wanted desperately to put it in the main story. Luckily, it DOES fit...and the reason why Psymakio was capable of reading the 'prophesy artifact' and not standard script will become clear in time. In any case, yes, it is very cute.

The next chapter will be very, very lemony. In fact, my biggest plot problem will be keeping the amount of times they fuck to a reasonable level. XD

chaoslord---I've been getting a lot more hits ever since the short sexiful scene earlier, and yeah, once I have 10000+ words of lemon in one chapter...heh. I also hope that newer readers don't only want sex in this story, because I'll be honest...the plot will always be top priority, and there won't be sex when the situation does not allow it. I do not force lemon, and I refuse to sacrifice story quality for sex scenes.

As time goes on, there will be several PWP oneshots of Sinners, so hopefully those will satisfy the less plot-inclined crowd I'm sure I'll draw.