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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person RoboRed
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Problems? Gee...I hope everything turns out okay, man. :(
person benn454
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, and AFF is SO different from AD. Riiiight. :P

This is the third time I've checked this story for updates today...don't make me send my herd of laser-equipped elephant cyborgs to your door...
person RoboRed
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL
person Bishonen
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look what I found

http://www.aerisdies.com/img.php?id=137237

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person RoboRed
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol...okay...so far we've got:

- samurai flesh-eating pandas that will break into your house, drink all your mountain dew, and make a bunch of long-distance phone calls
- a league of breadstick-weilding hamsters that will raid you and poke you to death
- and penguin minions who will pelt your house with snowballs of DOOOOM.

...

Better get that update in, or it's gonna be a very sorry morning. :P
person Bishonen
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
400 reviews Also I watched Misery the other day and it gave me some ideas Bwhahaha

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person Fluffy_lover
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Slash , my review will take a little while to do . I re-read your story twice , I've found a few points to discuss and I took some notes . A very big review is coming...soon . (HA! See what I did there?)

Oh btw , Imasuky,RoboRed , CrazyIvan...I will win the review contest! MWHAHAHAHAHA!

Things are heating up , both on Sinners and on the reviews...Damn if this isn't the best fic in this site I will eat my socks , that I've been using for a week !
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---Yes. That devious bastard, whoever he is, even has the same contact information as me! He must be some sort of evil mirror-universe-Slash...yeah...

RoboRed---Plus, if they were invisible, it would make finding their, uh, targets somewhat difficult.

Imasuky Lomae about the cereal-prize pic---Slash got revenge by...I dunno, spanking her.

Black Whole---UPDATE WILL OCCUR TOMORROW OMG OMG

RoboRed---I know, I know...

Imasuky Lomae---Yay for 400 reviews, even if half of them are responses! And the Misery novel > Misery movie. Except that poor Paul gets hurt a fuck of a lot more in the novel...

Fluffy_lover---Big reviews are good, heh. Things are gonna get fucking crazy up in here once the story gets even longer.

GENERAL NOTES

After the first arc is complete (after chapter 16), there will be a moderate break before I begin Arc 2. I need to shore up the current chapters for editing and such...currently all chapters are only double-run edited (meaning, only checked once by eye and once by spellcheck), and I know there are some grammatical issues and very minor continuity/wording glitches that need to be ironed out. Plus, ya know, I have like half a dozen unfinished works that have been sitting around for months...and I'd like to get SOME work down on them.

At the very least, Ballad of the Wind Fish and Stand By Me need a few more chapters between them.

But don't none of you worry...Sinners ain't going nowhere.

NOW, BACK TO WORK FOR ME
person Review
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHH! I wanted to be review 400...:(. Oh well, it's my own fault for signing on too late. Hm, it seems we have three different armies of animals. Let's see here:

Black Whole's league of breadstick-wielding hamsters who will raid you and poke you to death.

Imasuky Lomae's samurai flesh-eating pandas that will break into your house, drink all your mountain dew, and make a bunch of long-distance phone calls

RoboRed's penguin minions who will pelt your house with snowballs of DOOOOM.

Hm...time to add my own set of crazed animals!

Let's see here...I have my own army of ninja gophers that use cellphones and will mysteriously jump out of the ground and karate-chop you where it HURTS THE MOST!!!

How's that?? :D

Oh, and by the way to you all...with the longest-review contest?? I say that...you can enjoy yourselves. I'm too lazy to participate in something like that. xD
person RoboRed
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(dammit...I clicked the remove button...)

Ah well, you didn't leave any subtle hints to sarcasm like slash did...

And slash, I know that the invisibility thing would be too easy..I was just mentioning technical stuff for the heck of it. Invisiblility would defeat one of the majoir points in the story, now wouldn't it? :P

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