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I saw that pic you drew with the charging sharpedo toy when i saw that i nearly pissed myself laughing.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I reread the story just because and here’s a few thoughts and comments

1. Even though Slash is a lot stronger he has a long way to go before he can take on Kiako and his freaky arm also I cant wait to find out more about his red eyes that is just so fucking cool.

2. Too bad for Maxie he didn’t know more about Watson or else he might have lived.

3. I wonder will Briney be any help with Aqua since they’ve shown up now.

4. Slash said to Gardevoir that home is where the heart is so that’s why he has a girl back home wherever she is earlier in the story Slash commented on how nice the area they were in was nice and Kirlia said It reminds me of home, Well, where I lived before I met you. because now, home is wherever you go, and i wouldn’t have it any other way.

5. I still have only a very hazy idea of what Giovanni is after with the pearls I cant wait until more of the prophecy is reveled.

6. Gardevoir is hot and I already know that you can write great sex scenes and I’m dyeing for some even if it’s a none cannon one-shot although something connected to the plot would be better I guess I’ll just have to wait a while longer.

7. I’ve been looking all over for Gardevoir pics and one of the best ones I found had her dressed as a bunny girl complete with puffball tail.

9. I hope the next chapter is up soon I love this story and think that everyone who reads it and has an account should put it into their recommended reading section especially if you don’t have any stories of your own that was why I first made an account a few years ago.

10. Because of this story I’m going to put more effort into my own pokemon story Pink Version which is pretty much the opposite of this and now I’ve decided that one of the characters will have both a Gardevoir and a Gallade one her team and a relationship with her female Gardevoir because interspecies yuri is good but rare.

11. Back when I first saw this story I was hesitant about reading it because I didn’t know what to expect from a pokemon/human love story but this is better than I could have imagined back when I saw it frist posted

12. I’d forgotten how short the early chapters were in comparison to some of the newest ones I hope that they stay like they are now but if they keep getting longer my as might end up fusing with my chair.

13. I’m throwing my hat into the ring for best reviewer and I’ve go the jump on you CrazyIvan and if you beat me then my Samurai Flesh Eating Pandas will break into your house and drink all your Mountain Dew and make a bunch of long distance phone calls.


14. Wow that was a lot longer than I thought it would be well I’m going to wrap everything up and just wait for the next chapter on the edge of my seat.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

One last thing to say almost 400 reviwes.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

One last last thing that had to be the longest review i ever wrote.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Suikotsu from AerisDies checking in.

I see you made good on your idea to write a humanxGardevoir fic, and I must say; Bravo! My hat's off to you, good sir. :)

RoboRed---Invisibility would be TOO easy, though. Can't have them consistently getting it on without any risk of getting caught...that'd just be boring. :3

Imasuky Lomae---Kiako's background and goals will become greatly expanded upon as we enter the second arc of the story. Just what the fuck is he, where'd he come from, and what exactly is he after?

Maxie did know about Watson and his role in the events of the day both teams were crippled, and that is why he wanted to avoid a conflict with the old electric man...and why, when Maxie was taken down, the Magmas weren't able to respond rationally...instead, they just tried to blitz Mauville, and they paid for it. More Magma/Aqua history and events will be upcoming, both in the next chapter and the next arc.

Like Watson, Briney hasn't forgotten about Team Aqua, either...maybe there will be a little reunion between the old men and the current Team Aqua someday... :-O

Gardevoir's past...the good and the bad...are going to be put to the test. She may be just a little shaken up when confronted with the same kind of Pokemon that killed her family...at least now she won't be alone when she faces her fears.

The Pearls, the prophesy...heheh. The truth behind Giovanni and Kiako's goals...and the truth of the prophesy...have been revised significantly since I began writing. I thought I knew what would happen, but just a few days ago a new idea popped in my head...heh. All I can say is that the inevitable confrontation is going to be big.

BIG SEX SCENE COMING UP AFTER THE NEXT CHAPTER. I won't let anyone down...and everyone will be up. ;-)

If you wanna see the best Gardevoir pic I've seen so far, here it is:

http://www.aerisdies.com/img.php?id=150038

That's what I envision Gardevoir to look like...slim, sexy, silver, heh. Fapfapfap.

The next chapter is nearing completion...should be done tomorrow or Tuesday if all goes well.

You're right about the chapter size, too. Early chapters were pretty short, but the more recent ones have been around/over 10000 words. I thought I preferred shorter chapters, but now...well, my muse is hankering for more meat per chapter, so...we'll see how long that continues. ^_^

And yes, that was a long review.

benn454---Glad you enjoy! ALTHOUGH I TOTALLY DON'T GO TO THAT HENTAI SITE. JUST BECAUSE THERE'S AN ACCOUNT NAMED SLASHFIRESTORM ON AD, AND I REFERENCE PICTURES FROM IT, DOESN'T MEAN I GO TO A FILTHY PORNOGRAPHIC SITE LIKE THAT

...totally not! No!

...lol :3

I saw the comments and if you're not the one who made them then you should find that other slash and tell him to stop takeing credit for your work.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I know i was doing the same thing.

With Love, Imasuky Lomae

Recommended Reading is back and this was the first story a put in there.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

(picks up a book) There are 1872 known sexual positions, with a total of 7018 variances. That's a total of 8890 positions. Ergo, having sex in one different position, once a day, every day, would take 8890 days. I'm not going to bother with years, because I don't feel like dividing in 4 unit segements. (puts book down)

Now anyways, this was another good, long chapter, and you're still going strong.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Semper phi, carry on...