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8890 positions wow and when you add in the fact that Gardevoir levitate that makes things even more interesting

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I forgot. RoboRed, I noticed your long review earlier. Now, seeing as it isn't quite as long as mine, but damn close. I'm afraid, you've given me no other choice. (takes out a glove, and slaps RoboRed across the cheek)
After the next few chapters, I challenge you to a write off. Who ever can write a review, that covers the entire story, and is longer than the other person's, is the better reviewer.

Fluffy_Lover---Awesome, heh. I love reading reeeeally long fics (like, takes-me-a-whole-day long), and eventually Sinners will become one of those stories, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---Kick ass. I'll check that stuff out later, because there are a few stories around here which I owe a lot to for inspiration.

CrazyIvan---24 years. O_O

Imasuky Lomae again---Yes, she could teleport while doing it, and float, and maybe make a force field around them and do it under the ocean if she gets strong enough...hm, that'd be a good way to avoid detection!

CrazyIvan again---Slash hearts long reviews!

*response to Slash's response to Imasuky* -- Well, if you wanna get technical, Gardevoir could actually make them invisible by using telekinesis to bend light around them (hey, it said in the game that Gardevoirs have the ability to create black holes...so if they have the power to do that...).

CrazyIvan -- owchies...rofl...
Well, define "a few", and we'll see...I guess part of the reason it was so long is because I came late in the game. Usually if I come into a discussion later, I try to keep on top of whatever was said earlier. (or something like that)

DizzyRye---I can honestly say that a Ditto will be in this story...but I won't reveal it's exact role yet, heh. However, a sexiful Ditto...that'd make an interesting oneshot...

Speaking of, I've begun planning a PWP oneshot for Sinners. It'll be done...eventually. Probably sometime after Chapter 16.

monkeygodlance---Newgrounds is so swell.

I've begun writing chapter 15...expect it in a day or two.

I will dedicate this day to reading your fic , Slash . I will re-read it and write some comments while I read. I've been posting a review per chapter so far , it's about time to write something about the story as a whole.

I've loved Sinners since I first started reading it. I found out about it on Newgrounds and was a bit wary of it, but after reading the first few chapters I couldn't stop reading it. Cant wait for the next chapter.

RoboRed---Neither can I. :3

Pokefurry---I didn't choose Gardevoir as the romance Pokemon because she was human, but because of the mental bond thing being a good plot device (see the Star Wars fic "Forbidden" for an awesome use of a similar mental connection). Lots of Pokemon could be physically compatible with humans, even if only on a basic level (as in, intercourse being impossible, but other activities still available).

chaoslord---Gardevoir is fucking adorable.

I never really took writing lessons...the closest I'd have to that would be my time in journalism and the school newspaper in high school...but I've always been a fairly proficient writer. The kind of guy who could bullshit his way through any essay, for example. Although I should probably be arrested for my crimes against the ellipsis (...) and my wanton abuse against the humble semicolon. XD

Nothing wrong with me inspiring you to write...like I've said before, this entire fic was inspired from someone else's story (which I personally consider to be superior to my humble work), heh.

Ol' Slashy is looking into getting a piece of good art done, but I've gotta wait a while to see if the artist will accept my request. Until then, I'm fine with making my own horrible images, lol.

Chapter 15 planning is complete. Writing will commence after I catch some sleep. The next chapter will be entitled "Running With The Devil"...when that title popped in my head, I damn near creamed myself and listened to the song a few hundred times. :3

Hearing you mention an 'on-the-run' arc and meeting other cross-species couples makes me say one thing. Ditto, please?
Not sure if you already had any couples planned, but I think it'd be the cat's pajamas to see a person and a Ditto in love. Both because as a Ditto, there'd be all sorts of knowledge about blending into society, tricks to hiding public displays of emotion and all that sort of thing. Oh, and Ditto tentacle fun time show!
(I know that's why the first Pokegirl I chose for my story was a Titto, at least.)

Another fantastic chapter. Can't wait for some Gardevoir/Slash smut next chapter. Otherwise, great fluff and back story. Keep up the fantastic writing.