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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome. That's all I can say on this one Slash.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DemonicStrife---Oh yes, Archie is interested in Slash...and if he forces a fight, ol' Slash and Gardevoir are pretty much fucked without the other Pokemon. Oh noes!
And I'm still rockin' over getting 10k hits, heheh. 20000, here we come!
Luminous Dark---I continuously make longer chapters, but I still can't promise that every one from now on will be 10000+ words...it's just been luck so far, heh. I can promise, however, that the first sex scene will be the longest chapter so far. :3
RoboRed---That is certainly a long review.
Yes, this story is a lot like Romeo and Juliet, except that everyone hates them and there are psychic powers and ancient prophesies and twisted half-human monstrosities and more hawt sex. Take THAT, Shakespeare, you bastard!
Realism is why this story is so cool...I'd like to see the anime or games try to show a Guillotine attack just 'making the opponent faint'. Or a Fire Blast capable of melting boulders making someone singed. HAHA, not going to happen.
This story would probably have three times as many hits if I hurried the fuck up with the lemon, but I like plot more than random sex. But for you perverts who are just begging for sexfulness...chapter 16 will be nothing but sexifulness, heheh.
Lately I've updated very rapidly, especially compared to the way it used to be, where I'd go a month or three between updates...I have nothing else to do, so expect relatively quick updates for the foreseeable future!
DizzyRye---When I was originally planning the basic plotline of Sinners, I never thought I'd make Watson into such a pivotal character. It wasn't until I started writing that it just sort of happened...so who knows who else will end up playing large roles throughout this story?
And yeah, once I get some sleep, I'll be glad to give em a read, heh.
anon---Well, the smut won't be until chapter 16, but we're getting very very close! :-D
some one---Heheh, thanks.
And I'm still rockin' over getting 10k hits, heheh. 20000, here we come!
Luminous Dark---I continuously make longer chapters, but I still can't promise that every one from now on will be 10000+ words...it's just been luck so far, heh. I can promise, however, that the first sex scene will be the longest chapter so far. :3
RoboRed---That is certainly a long review.
Yes, this story is a lot like Romeo and Juliet, except that everyone hates them and there are psychic powers and ancient prophesies and twisted half-human monstrosities and more hawt sex. Take THAT, Shakespeare, you bastard!
Realism is why this story is so cool...I'd like to see the anime or games try to show a Guillotine attack just 'making the opponent faint'. Or a Fire Blast capable of melting boulders making someone singed. HAHA, not going to happen.
This story would probably have three times as many hits if I hurried the fuck up with the lemon, but I like plot more than random sex. But for you perverts who are just begging for sexfulness...chapter 16 will be nothing but sexifulness, heheh.
Lately I've updated very rapidly, especially compared to the way it used to be, where I'd go a month or three between updates...I have nothing else to do, so expect relatively quick updates for the foreseeable future!
DizzyRye---When I was originally planning the basic plotline of Sinners, I never thought I'd make Watson into such a pivotal character. It wasn't until I started writing that it just sort of happened...so who knows who else will end up playing large roles throughout this story?
And yeah, once I get some sleep, I'll be glad to give em a read, heh.
anon---Well, the smut won't be until chapter 16, but we're getting very very close! :-D
some one---Heheh, thanks.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slash's mini-rant regarding the ketchup was the best thing ever. Can't wait to see what the frig Archie wants.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gardevoir is very yummy. Be proud of Slash's self control...a lesser man would have just jumped on her in front of everyone!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating please, I've been on this site for a while as a reader, and "Sinners" has become my favorite story thus far keep em coming as fast as you can, awsome awsome awsome story
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* such a unique story it brings a tear of joy to my eye, and yeah I love fluff, but this is an ADULT site, and of course I come here for the ummmmmmm "special" differences between these fanfics and normal fanfics lol, anywho you have some great skill in writing my friend, you are great at fluff and nowhere near lacking when it comes to the oh so appreciated smut, keep em coming, and I have to agree with some of the other reviews, I love the violence, it was something I found really irritating about the show, you don't get bit by a Golbat and just have a little scratch mark to show for it lol those fangs are like 6 inces long!! wheres the blood?, oh thats right its in this story, finnaly Team magma and team aqua ain't so harmless to the general public anymore like in the games huh?
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just want to say this.
IF U QUIT THIS STORY NOW IM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!!
Keep upp the good writing man. always exiting to see updates ^.^
IF U QUIT THIS STORY NOW IM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!!
Keep upp the good writing man. always exiting to see updates ^.^
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It does a good job showing the deepening bond between the two leads, and establishing the inherent problems and corruption that have driven Teams Aqua and Magma to become what they have, and the atrocities they will engage in. Though it seems Slash needs to get better at not saying some things aloud.
It's intersting that the Jirachians worship Jirachi, as there is nothing in any of it's entreys that really make it sound divine. Rather it just grants wishes. So it seems they are really just sucking up to the one who they hope will do something for them in return, as oppesed to the likes of Arcues, Groudon, Kyoger, Rayquaza, Dialgia, Pailkia, and Regigigias, whos entry's all seem to imply they had major roles in the creation of the world. Incedently looking at the stats using Daimonds handy comparison feature my highest Jirachi is weaker than Dialga, Regigigas, Rayquaza, Kyogere, Heatran, Groudon(whos elemental advantages would kill it dead several times over) And Giratina. Granted a few of them were in the 70's as oppesed to lvl52 like the Jirachi, but still...
Now on the subject of cross species relationships. In the case of something like a Gardevoir it's huge thing in my opinion. Both in terms of physical and mental similarities I don't think their would be a huge amount of problems. Something like a Magnaton would be impossible to have any kind of romantic or physical relationship with, due to the fact it's a genderless inorganic lifeform, that most likely has radicly different though processes. Again their is unlikly to be any possibily of such feelings with a bug type pokemon. But when you get to those who both have simeler thought processes and biologys, it becomes less improbable. To use Star Trek as an example, who even blinks about Spocks parents relationship, due to the simelarities. In terms of mental development a Gardevoir is every bit a humans equal(and possibly superior. Several psychic types are stated in their pokedex entreys to by smarter then humans. I don't recall Gardevoirs ever saying it, but I could be wrong.)
Well this got off on a tangent for a review, but the story is one that well deserves deeper looks. It's worth noting that the human culture looks down on the pokemon, and assumes they must always be victemized or defective in relationships such as the protagonists. But as has been shown, the Pokemon do know what their doing, and are far less brutal and cruel than humans.
It's intersting that the Jirachians worship Jirachi, as there is nothing in any of it's entreys that really make it sound divine. Rather it just grants wishes. So it seems they are really just sucking up to the one who they hope will do something for them in return, as oppesed to the likes of Arcues, Groudon, Kyoger, Rayquaza, Dialgia, Pailkia, and Regigigias, whos entry's all seem to imply they had major roles in the creation of the world. Incedently looking at the stats using Daimonds handy comparison feature my highest Jirachi is weaker than Dialga, Regigigas, Rayquaza, Kyogere, Heatran, Groudon(whos elemental advantages would kill it dead several times over) And Giratina. Granted a few of them were in the 70's as oppesed to lvl52 like the Jirachi, but still...
Now on the subject of cross species relationships. In the case of something like a Gardevoir it's huge thing in my opinion. Both in terms of physical and mental similarities I don't think their would be a huge amount of problems. Something like a Magnaton would be impossible to have any kind of romantic or physical relationship with, due to the fact it's a genderless inorganic lifeform, that most likely has radicly different though processes. Again their is unlikly to be any possibily of such feelings with a bug type pokemon. But when you get to those who both have simeler thought processes and biologys, it becomes less improbable. To use Star Trek as an example, who even blinks about Spocks parents relationship, due to the simelarities. In terms of mental development a Gardevoir is every bit a humans equal(and possibly superior. Several psychic types are stated in their pokedex entreys to by smarter then humans. I don't recall Gardevoirs ever saying it, but I could be wrong.)
Well this got off on a tangent for a review, but the story is one that well deserves deeper looks. It's worth noting that the human culture looks down on the pokemon, and assumes they must always be victemized or defective in relationships such as the protagonists. But as has been shown, the Pokemon do know what their doing, and are far less brutal and cruel than humans.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Isaac---Don't worry, there will be more sex and violence soon, heheh.
Asrael---I ain't gonna quit til it's done, heheh.
negativety101---Some heavy shit will be happening with Team Aqua in the near future...
Yes, the Jirachians pretty much worship the Pokemon that they do because...well, they're greedy. Most religions started out with people not liking the idea that their lives were out of their hands, and so they made up deities that controlled their life, and the concept that pleasing such deities could bring them fortune. It's a way of escaping reality and denying responsibility for both one's own faults and circumstances beyond their control. And, of course, when stuff doesn't go their way, they assume that the deity is angry, and thus they blame something...or someone...and censure them.
Bleh.
Legendary Pokemon in this story...and Pokemon in general...don't necessarily have the same power ratio as they do in the game. While Sinners follows basic strategy and mechanics fairly dead-on, things aren't dead-set to the exact stats of the game. For example, we can all guess what the "Three Princes" are, particularly with Relicanth and Wailord being required to access them. Those three Pokemon, while 'legendary', aren't particularly super-powerful, but in this story they're near-godlike. A few other legendary Pokemon, while not uber-powerful in the games, will play enormous roles in this story.
As for attraction to Pokemon...yeah, there are some Pokemon that couldn't be with humans, based on sheer physical differences...although a great deal of them, the majority for certain, could manage in some capacity. But in the cases where it's simply impossible, it's unlikely that any attraction would show up, anyway...for example, Magneton or Wailord (god help anyone who fell for a Wailord). It would all depend on the situation. There will be a few other human-Pokemon couples in this story, during the 'on-the-run' arc later, but none of them will be particularly unbelievable.
Asrael---I ain't gonna quit til it's done, heheh.
negativety101---Some heavy shit will be happening with Team Aqua in the near future...
Yes, the Jirachians pretty much worship the Pokemon that they do because...well, they're greedy. Most religions started out with people not liking the idea that their lives were out of their hands, and so they made up deities that controlled their life, and the concept that pleasing such deities could bring them fortune. It's a way of escaping reality and denying responsibility for both one's own faults and circumstances beyond their control. And, of course, when stuff doesn't go their way, they assume that the deity is angry, and thus they blame something...or someone...and censure them.
Bleh.
Legendary Pokemon in this story...and Pokemon in general...don't necessarily have the same power ratio as they do in the game. While Sinners follows basic strategy and mechanics fairly dead-on, things aren't dead-set to the exact stats of the game. For example, we can all guess what the "Three Princes" are, particularly with Relicanth and Wailord being required to access them. Those three Pokemon, while 'legendary', aren't particularly super-powerful, but in this story they're near-godlike. A few other legendary Pokemon, while not uber-powerful in the games, will play enormous roles in this story.
As for attraction to Pokemon...yeah, there are some Pokemon that couldn't be with humans, based on sheer physical differences...although a great deal of them, the majority for certain, could manage in some capacity. But in the cases where it's simply impossible, it's unlikely that any attraction would show up, anyway...for example, Magneton or Wailord (god help anyone who fell for a Wailord). It would all depend on the situation. There will be a few other human-Pokemon couples in this story, during the 'on-the-run' arc later, but none of them will be particularly unbelievable.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh goody! I can't wait. :D