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Uh huh...

Damn cliffhanger!!! My face was practically in my PSP (computer problems ^^;)!!! Yeah... I'm that devoted to this story. Anyways, wonder what Team Aqua has in store. I'm guessing they're possibly thinking of trying to recruit Slash, after the whole Magma incident. Or want info on the Sea Pearl.

This story's over 10000 hits, and it's not even at the lemon. O_O Whole...Lee...shit.

need i say more than this .. simply godly man

romance , angst , passion , doubt .. you bring it all and then to top it off with an epic chapter in size and sheer stoping power .. you rawk

Please forgive me for a moment. I may bounce from one thing to another in this review. I tend to go off on long tangets.

I'm a sucker for cutsey fluffy romance stories. I'm also a fan of angsty/dark stories. Piut them together however, and you've got me hooked. It's kind of like the story of Romeo and Juliet. Bunches of loveyness and dark death stuff (I'm not alluding to the fact that the two heroes in this story will die though...god I hope not...)

I absolutely LOVE this fic. It's jsut exactly the kind of romancey/dark thing I like. Except for a small number of spelling mistakes/grammar (and whatnot), This is completely brilliant. I'm also a fan of poke'mon, and I love how you've made it more realistic (unlike the anime...being scorched by a massive fire blast/electric surge does more than make you a little black and crispy). You've improved on it and more, and twisted the regular story in a cool way.

I like the religious addon. That's something you normaly don't see in games and it gives an intersting twist. I like how the criminal organizations are a hundred times more evil and ruthless. More importanly, I like the aspect of the dying/death stuff. Good dark stuff. I wish you'd work on the battles a little more. Like the chapter where the Magmas made a mass seige on Mauville. Sounded dark, but a little more point on a few individual battles would have made them seem more than a background (like having Slash and Kirlia get caught in random duels between the townsfolk and Magmas, not getting bombarded by random poke'mon).

I like the personalities given to the various poke'mon, especially Gardevoir (one of my faves). Nice, inquisitive, protective, and I like the psychic bond thing (kind of expected though). The biological aspects (skin-clothing thingie) were pretty ingenius, and also make this fic more realistic. I can't wait for the actual lemon part. Actually in reference to that, I like (and to some bit hate) the fact that you built up the characters personalities (but there's no instantaneous lemonyness, and therefore no fap fap...). It's an important part of the story, especialyl one this long.

On some general notes (and a reading of the long list of reviews), I'm glad I found this story two days ago (just in time to catch the next update). Normally after having to stop reading at the point of thirteen chapters, my brain jsut screams "OMIGODZ NOOO! IT'S OVERR!!! I NEEDS MORE" Then I remember, "You lunkhead...he said 'To be continued' on it." So yeah, I got to see another chapter two days later. But apparently, after reading the long list of reviews, you take ages to update. (once again, I got lucky, but I shouldn't get used to it...) I also got confused when you introduced some D/P stuff. Like you, I don't have D/P (me needs a DS). So I don't know much about it(I should look at serebii.net more...).

Anyways, awesome story, keep up the good work, and HURRY AND FREAKIN' UPDATE BEFORE MY PENGUIN MINIONS PELT YOUR HOUSE WITH SNOWBALLS OF DOOOOOOM.

Cheers. ^_^

I really have to say, I'm starting to hate you. This story just gets better and better, and makes my own seem so horrible in comparison. Rather frustrating.
That being said, I found it absolutely amazing how you crafted Watson into such a complex and believable character, before your story I had pictured him as the energetic old fogey type, but now he seems like a real person! And considering he's practically a side character in your story, how much more that says about the stars.
Great work, I expect even better things to come!
(And if it's not too much trouble, if you could read over some of my works and give me some pointers...?)

Negativety101---D/P mentions Pokemon and humans living together as equals a long time ago, eh? Now THAT does sound interesting. I can't give any specifics, but a part of the upcoming plot shares that historical claim...it'll be good knowing there's some canon evidence for it from the games.

You'll all have to wait and see why this is so important, though. :-P

As for Giovanni's goal...it's not really that hard to guess about the parts revealed so far, although I won't confirm or deny anything. However...remember that the tablet that had the inscription on it was broken, and that the entire message is not yet known. I might just pull out a surprise. :3

Incidentally, Doom Desire is a steel attack involving sunlight. LOLWUT?

some one---I have an original story, but it's never been finished or put into writing (permanently, anyway). I may or may not eventually post it here. In any case, if I do, it would take over the role as my 'main' story, and until Sinners is complete, I'm not going to start it.

I also feel that sexual encounters should serve the plot, not the plot serving the sexual encounters. You'll notice I'm not much of a PWP man (although I occasionally write them for fun, heh). I prefer longer, detailed stories without a lot of random shit, heh.

Incidentally, I notice that my hit rate quadrupled when I posted chapter 13. Funny how much more attention Sinners has gotten with a short, relatively undetailed sex scene. Man, chapter 16 will drive you all nuts. :-P

GENERAL NEWS

I'm sorry to say this, but expect chapter 14 late tomorrow or Tuesday. I've been sick the past couple days, resulting in me sleeping a lot and having a slightly-off mind when awake...so it's taking longer than I expected. Bleh.

Please Slash , take your time.

I hope you get better man.

That sucks. It's better for you to rest for a while, so yeah, take your time.

P.S.: Found out where you got the pic. ;) (Or at least a good idea...)

Hope your better soon.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Fluffy_Lover---I'm almost done with the chapter, although it'll still need to be proofed and fine-tuned. I just woke up at five in the afternoon AGAIN, and now I gots a runny nose too. dgsadgsfdgsd

DemonicStrife---I usually barely sleep at all, so sleeping in always fucks up my mental clock. Especially since 7 in the morning and 7 in the afternoon look about the same around here.

Incidentally, I DON'T KNOW WHAT SOURCE YOU'RE REFERENCING, GOOD SIR, BUT I DON'T VISIT ANY SITES OF DISREPUTE. SURELY ANYONE WITH A USERNAME OF SLASHFIRESTORM COMMENTING ON PICTURES ON A DEPRAVED SITE FULL OF HENTAI IS JUST IMPERSONATING MYSELF, TO DAMAGE MY SHINY REPUTATION

yeah totally

Imasuky Lomae---Thanks, but y'all, I don't have the plague or nothing, heh. I'll be fine with just a thousand or so milligrams of ibuprofen and my usual writing supplies of a cup of instant ramen and a nice, tall glass of ice water.

Well, time to go back to work! Gardevoir and Slash aren't gonna have sex anytime soon unless I hurry the fuck up!

Imasuky Lomae---Yes. One of the awesome things about me establishing that Gardevoir can take off her clothing is that she can put other clothes ON. I have a craving for a stripping scene later... XD

DemonicStrife---It makes my flash-made, three-steps-above-MSPaint images look like shit in comparison, eh?

Well, they look like shit by themselves, too. :'(

Draco Falconi---You definitely will be reading more, very very soon (ETA: 16-36 hours)!