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wow what a nice pic *saves*

hm btw .....TRAIN SECKS ?!?

wow.....this is easily one of the best fics ive ever read. keep up the good work!

Fluffy_Lover---Heh...the TRAIN SECKS folder has to do with an upcoming flash of mine. Think of it as fanfiction in .swf format.

wrym47---Why thank you, good sir.

Now, if you'll all excuse me, I'm behind schedule! My sleep cycle has been completely fucked up lately, so at 5 in the afternoon my time, I just woke up...gotta get back to writing. :3

Best Pokemon fanfic ever? Probably. Best Pokemon lemon ever? Hell Yeah! I'm loving this as it's epic, has so great a plot sex isn't even necisary, and the sex is still steaming.
Now how about some of the stuff that's been mentioned over the course of all the reviews. Slash, you mentioned you haven't played Daimond and Pearl. Well here's something interesting. In a book in a libary in one of the towns there is a passage that reads- "There once were pokemon that became very close to humans. There once were humans and pokemon that ate together at the same table.It was a time when there existed no differences to distinguish the two." Perhaps your charecters should have lived in the acient Sinnoh region? Also of note it seems if any pokemon is god, it would be Arcus. Granted that's still just a creation myth. But hell the Jirachians would love me. I have five of the little freak, all legit. (freind who works at a store gave me the bonus disk for collosium. Everytime I start a new saphire or ruby game, I get a new Jirachi, after transfering my old one.) Well enough bragging on my part. I eagerly await more of this story with nail biting suspense, due to the excellent charecterization and suspensful plot. I have a theory on what Giovanni wants, but I may be wrong. I look forward to eventually finding out.

Once more I review..once more I am awed. This beats some actual books I have read...if your the creative type you should go pro I think...make some original work ya know? BUT NOT UNTILL YOU FINISH THIS STORY SLASH!!! YOU HEAR ME!? lol. Good work man. The sexual encounter served the plot rather than the other way around. Just as a good story should go. ^^ BTW Gardevoir has been my favorite pokemon since I saw it. So I must confess that I too am writing a story with it. I STARTED MINE FIRST!!! No I didn't...I promise not to post it on aff though. Not Copying! I swear! Also I have had way too much caffine.

ohohoho! i continue to love your wattson. what is it with you and your ability to write really good old dudes? seriously. also <333 at briny and wattson being on evil teams, its so perfect.

anyway, uh, it's cool that they finally got to mess around and all, but maybe it's little fast? broken limbs hurt :(

mffffff, i did fanart but i've been too lazy to scan 8___8

oh and i forgot to mention! i love that you made gardevoir grow some balls (figuratively of course ohohohoho) when talking to slash
"BITCH MY NAME AINT KIRLIA"
"LOLLOLOLOLOLOL YOU FAIL AT TALKING ABOUT CUNNILINGUS"


...not really, but still. i lollered. you go girl.

Watson will play a significant role, both in the next chapter and the story as a whole.

And Gardevoir ain't making fun of Slash...well, she is, but in a playful "omg I love you so much" kinda way, heh. His corny attempts at talking dirty DO work on her, even if she can't help but laugh at him trying so hard, lol.

Incidentally, anyone seen the image of a Gardevoir dressed up in a Mismagius outfit? DAMN, that's a hot one. And I wish I had that kind of skill...alas, all my artistic talent is in the form of writing, heh.

Where is the pic of Gardevoir dressed up in a Mismagius outfit i want to see it Mismagius is high on the list of hot pokemon...even if it dosent have legs.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Here's the pic as my desktop:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y5/slashfirestorm/clutter.jpg

That seems like inspiration for a Halloween-themed episode of Sinners, heh. If I can track down who made that pic, I'm gonna need to thank them for that.

Plus, you know, it's hawt.