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Holy shit that is so fuking sexy i'd love a one sahot about her dressed like that

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

That is, indeed, a sexy pic you've got there. I've seen my share of Gardevoir pics (heh...), but I've never come across that one. Nice find. :3

Duuuuuuuude, awesome story. I most definitely want to read more of this story very very soon.

Magikarp...sigh.

FEEBAS > MAGIKARP

Chapter 14 still on pace for tomorrow or Sunday. :3

my spidey sense tells me 14 is going to be epic winnage .. honestly amoung all the writers i comment on slash might be one of the best

Current predictions:

14---Fluff, significant plot developments
15---Major plot developments, minimal fluff
16---EXTREME FUCKING FLUFF, end of Arc 1 (Summer of 16)

At least that's what I'm planning at the moment. :3

Hm so the next 3 chapters will have fluff, even if it's only minimal ? Hmm I could get used to this =)

I hope that this fic gets much more chapters . When Gardevoir evolved I thought " Oh shi- , that happened faster than I expected"....Since Kirlia's evolution is such a important part of the history , I thought that we were getting to the end of it ...but then I thought about Giovanni , and teh Big red-eyed guy and all that stuff ....I don't think that this fic is ending anytime soon =D And that's good , very good indeed.

I'm liking this one-shots idea more and more . Some PWP might be good , but a christmas special....AHHH that can be a very nice story indeed and since I know that you will be the one writting it .....I can't wait it =] As always , take your time .

Damn , when I was 13/14 I started taking some anime/manga-drawing lessons , but the professor had to move away and I couldn't continue it . I'd love to make a manga of this story. Too bad , but maybe I can make a game of it , when I get to be a game designer? That would be a secret between us , of course , since it'd probably be hentai =3
Well I don't know if I'll do that , but I promise that if I ever plan to make a pokemonish-type game , it will be unique and much more mature than the ones we have now =) And the main character will be named Slash ;P

So you plan to update the fic in about a week? That's fast >_> You're doing some overtime with your Muse Slash ?

I agree that the communication with your fans is helping your fic Slash and is nice to know that you are so dedicated to it. Hehe but now that you said that , you will have to endure me to the very end!

Well see ya in the next chapter , I gotta go back to studying. I still don't think that I will make it in the first try , but hell let's give it a shot . The exam is very close to my birthday , that would be a nice birthday gift =3

Oh, there will almost always be SOME fluff...I mean...well, when I had a girlfriend a long LONG LONG time ago, I remember me and her talking on the phone, having such enlightened conversation as "I love you". "I love you more." "I love you most." "I love you more than that." "I love you more than [insert cheesy crap here]".

I can totally see Slash and Gardevoir talking like that even during epic battles. :3 They're so cuuuute.

Slash also has a surprise in store for Psymakio...you'll see in a couple chapters. ^_^

Ya know, even though I don't really like Christmas (commercial racket), I can still write a cutesy idealized Christmas. It doesn't even matter that Christmas wouldn't be celebrated in a Jirachian world, cuz IT'S A ONESHOT AND DOESN'T NEED TO MAKE PERFECT SENSE. Hot chocolate, mistletoe, exchanging gifts, making love in front of a fireplace...:red: oh yeah, that'd work just fine.

HURRY UP WINTER

And you know, if I could draw well, there'd be so much hentai/ecchi work for Sinners already...heheheh...

Yeah, chapter 14 is coming together well, and since I inadvertently planned chapters 15 and 16 as well, the next three chapters should be released over a relatively short time period: possibly all three in September. :-D

I looove talking with all my readers...I just wish AFF divided reviews up onto pages of 100 apiece, because whenever I click on the review page, it takes my computer longer and longer to load it. :3

BACK TO WRITING!

Something I just thought of me and my friends talked about this when pokemon first came out maybe you could address it in your fic at some time wher do they get they meat for hamburgers and stuff like

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Imasuky Lomae, that's a good point.
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SOYLENT GREEN IS MADE OF PIKACHU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Update soon, please? All 3 chapters in september would be killer pwn... do it do it do it!
Consider it a challenge or something.