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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say I have read a ton of stuff on this site, and I love, love ,love this story, I prefer fluff to little oneshots that don't have enough time to develope and show love between characters, wierd that of all the stories on here, I found one of my most favorite ones in the Pokemon section, I really like the fluff, you did a great job when it finally came down to the smut so update! Get those hands on that keyboard!!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and before I forget *Faves* damn right it deserves a fave
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---Uh...
...um...
That question breaks my heart...sentient creatures eating other sentient creatures (although, with Pokemon eating other Pokemon, I guess that happens anyway), so I'll make a compromise. They DO eat Pokemon, but only ones that die of old age. Until then, they're used as draft animals. So yeah, you might get a yummy Tauros steak, but that Tauros lived a full life helping the rancher plow the fields and died in its sleep from old age before being grilled up.
THERE. Haha.
DRD---I think I'd prefer some nice Spoink-bacon, myself. :-/
FROM A SPOINK THAT LIVED A LONG AND HAPPY LIFE BOUNCING AROUND.
Chapter 14 is still on pace to be completed this weekend, so it's very possible I can through chapter 16 before the end of the month. LET'S HOPE! :-D
Isaac---I love writing fluff, although I can't just have 24/7 fluff or the story gets kinda boring. In any case, I shall try to keep my hands on the keyboard...even during the sexiful parts. ^_^
...um...
That question breaks my heart...sentient creatures eating other sentient creatures (although, with Pokemon eating other Pokemon, I guess that happens anyway), so I'll make a compromise. They DO eat Pokemon, but only ones that die of old age. Until then, they're used as draft animals. So yeah, you might get a yummy Tauros steak, but that Tauros lived a full life helping the rancher plow the fields and died in its sleep from old age before being grilled up.
THERE. Haha.
DRD---I think I'd prefer some nice Spoink-bacon, myself. :-/
FROM A SPOINK THAT LIVED A LONG AND HAPPY LIFE BOUNCING AROUND.
Chapter 14 is still on pace to be completed this weekend, so it's very possible I can through chapter 16 before the end of the month. LET'S HOPE! :-D
Isaac---I love writing fluff, although I can't just have 24/7 fluff or the story gets kinda boring. In any case, I shall try to keep my hands on the keyboard...even during the sexiful parts. ^_^
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well pokemon would be the only real meat because there are no normal animals an i'd like to try rosted Farfetch'd with leek soup.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know. There be no normal cows or anything, bah. So I guess it's Tauros and Magikarp and such.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually they said that Magikarp has no real meat on it and it's inedabile so Goldeen would be more likely.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Slash sorry I’m late again . I’m trying to enter in one of the best universities in Latin America and it’s driving me crazy x_X Your fic is my only salvation!
I’ve decided to be a Game Designer! I never really wanted to accept it , but video games are my life . I know that this my sound sad to some people , even pathetic to others , but guess what? FUCK THEM . I gonna do what I love and the rest of the world can go to hell , I don’t care. Your fic is giving me some courage , I think =) Now I just need to beat about 20.000 to get a spot in teh university! ...yay... Well I may not be able to enter it this year , I’m not used to studying all by myself and the exam is in November already x_X heh ...Well at least now I know what I want , so next year I can prepare myself properly. I’ll be 20-21 , that’s still a good age to enter university , isn’t it?
Now to the fic!
AHHH that was so sweet , I might need to go to a dentist ^^ The fluff was awesome ( you know I love that ...thank you Slash =D ) and the smut was perfect . And damn Slash , I didn’t know you could get so BIG ...
Gay jokes aside , I’m amazed . The giant leap on Gardy x Slash relationship , in such a small time period , and the size of this chapter...Overwhelming (sp?) , I must say!
I already knew your smut-writing style because I read that Zelda fic ( The Ballad of the Fish? Damn I didn’t check it for a long time , did you update it?) . Romantic , as it should be on fics with such a great plot . You avoid repeating terms , thats really great , and you didn’t use too much vulgar language ^^ That can really ruin a sex scene , I can tell ya. Lol @ Slash talking dirty, the cornyness was BEYOUND 9 THOUSAAAAAND (congrats on teh 9000+ views , btw . I’d love to be the 10000th reader , but I don’t think I will be able to do it) .
What I way to end a chapter , as well ! That me me Lol really hard , I almost got caught. When I say lol , I truly mean it . I’m not teh kinda of person that types lol when actually I’m just grinning or smiling . If I type Lol , if because I’m LAUGHING FUCKING OUT LOUD.
Hm I like to try to tell what is going to happen next in the fic , but you are proving to be very hard to read . When Slash started to talk about rape and Gardevoir asked if he couldn’t be raped as well I tought “ Oh fuck probably Slash got raped and he will probably try to hide it form her in the whole fic , but in teh end Gardevoir will discove rit and it will lead to some nice fluff “ . Then , a few lines later , you reveal that it was actualy his cousin that got raped , without giving too much attention to taht . You know , more previsible authors could base their whole fics on the mistery of Who Got Raped , but you are inprevisible =/
I’m still thinking on some guesses , but I will keep them for now ;p AHH GET OUT OF MY MIND CHARLES !
About the PWP one-shots , I fully support this idea . Just be careful about when you are going to release those , you’d probably wnat to have at least 2 real canon sex scenes before trying something more ....naughty .
Hmm Psymakio? It’s kinda funny to speak that in my language , definetely not something you would want to scream while you orgasm. How should I pronnounce it , Slash ?
Well I guess I typed enough already , I don’t wnat to bother you too much =) But before I go , thank you Slash . When you are praising a real good story/video/whatever , you know that your comment will be another one in a ocean of good reviews , Add that my English isn’t very good , and it would be natural to think that my comments would be ignored ( or at least wouldn’t get too much attention) , but its not like that with you. You gave me attention , and you were kind with me . That really made me happy Slash ,and I really would like to consider us to be friends , even though our communication is limited to reviews . Maybe someday we will talk about much more things , but I won’t push it .
I don’t know when I will be back , Slash , but keep writing >=P You know that I’m always watching you
I’ve decided to be a Game Designer! I never really wanted to accept it , but video games are my life . I know that this my sound sad to some people , even pathetic to others , but guess what? FUCK THEM . I gonna do what I love and the rest of the world can go to hell , I don’t care. Your fic is giving me some courage , I think =) Now I just need to beat about 20.000 to get a spot in teh university! ...yay... Well I may not be able to enter it this year , I’m not used to studying all by myself and the exam is in November already x_X heh ...Well at least now I know what I want , so next year I can prepare myself properly. I’ll be 20-21 , that’s still a good age to enter university , isn’t it?
Now to the fic!
AHHH that was so sweet , I might need to go to a dentist ^^ The fluff was awesome ( you know I love that ...thank you Slash =D ) and the smut was perfect . And damn Slash , I didn’t know you could get so BIG ...
Gay jokes aside , I’m amazed . The giant leap on Gardy x Slash relationship , in such a small time period , and the size of this chapter...Overwhelming (sp?) , I must say!
I already knew your smut-writing style because I read that Zelda fic ( The Ballad of the Fish? Damn I didn’t check it for a long time , did you update it?) . Romantic , as it should be on fics with such a great plot . You avoid repeating terms , thats really great , and you didn’t use too much vulgar language ^^ That can really ruin a sex scene , I can tell ya. Lol @ Slash talking dirty, the cornyness was BEYOUND 9 THOUSAAAAAND (congrats on teh 9000+ views , btw . I’d love to be the 10000th reader , but I don’t think I will be able to do it) .
What I way to end a chapter , as well ! That me me Lol really hard , I almost got caught. When I say lol , I truly mean it . I’m not teh kinda of person that types lol when actually I’m just grinning or smiling . If I type Lol , if because I’m LAUGHING FUCKING OUT LOUD.
Hm I like to try to tell what is going to happen next in the fic , but you are proving to be very hard to read . When Slash started to talk about rape and Gardevoir asked if he couldn’t be raped as well I tought “ Oh fuck probably Slash got raped and he will probably try to hide it form her in the whole fic , but in teh end Gardevoir will discove rit and it will lead to some nice fluff “ . Then , a few lines later , you reveal that it was actualy his cousin that got raped , without giving too much attention to taht . You know , more previsible authors could base their whole fics on the mistery of Who Got Raped , but you are inprevisible =/
I’m still thinking on some guesses , but I will keep them for now ;p AHH GET OUT OF MY MIND CHARLES !
About the PWP one-shots , I fully support this idea . Just be careful about when you are going to release those , you’d probably wnat to have at least 2 real canon sex scenes before trying something more ....naughty .
Hmm Psymakio? It’s kinda funny to speak that in my language , definetely not something you would want to scream while you orgasm. How should I pronnounce it , Slash ?
Well I guess I typed enough already , I don’t wnat to bother you too much =) But before I go , thank you Slash . When you are praising a real good story/video/whatever , you know that your comment will be another one in a ocean of good reviews , Add that my English isn’t very good , and it would be natural to think that my comments would be ignored ( or at least wouldn’t get too much attention) , but its not like that with you. You gave me attention , and you were kind with me . That really made me happy Slash ,and I really would like to consider us to be friends , even though our communication is limited to reviews . Maybe someday we will talk about much more things , but I won’t push it .
I don’t know when I will be back , Slash , but keep writing >=P You know that I’m always watching you
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh SHI- they cut off my evil laugh! That last part sounded gay without it !
Let me add it now :
*MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*
There you go =D
Let me add it now :
*MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*
There you go =D
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!!!!
They are finally able to do "stuff" now. Bout time. 13 chapters in and finally they fondle each other. It was a good build up. It's nice you made Watson the old guy who was understanding and is glad they are happy together.
Cant wait for the next chapter!
They are finally able to do "stuff" now. Bout time. 13 chapters in and finally they fondle each other. It was a good build up. It's nice you made Watson the old guy who was understanding and is glad they are happy together.
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy_Lover---Be careful, I spent most of my second semester in college skipping class and reading fanfictions in the university library. IT'S ADDICTING! :3
Do whatever you want with your life, even if other people think it's dumb. One of the major themes of this story, as well as my own personal philosophy, is "who gives a shit what other people think of you?", heh. You go with what makes you happy, and if others don't approve...well, they can learn to deal with it, lol.
I usually like writing long, slow-moving romance and stuff...where the characters have time to gradually fall in love...but in this story, that just can't happen, because anytime they'd start getting closer to admitting their feelings to themselves and each other, something catastrophic could happen (such as being beaten up and nearly killed by asshats). Tragedy has brought them together, hardship will keep them close, and nothing short of death will tear them apart.
I can't wait to write the first 'real' sex scene. I plan to devote an entire chapter to it---and not a short chapter, either---and it's not too far off now. My planning has come up with some swell ideas. :-D
Incidentally, YES, I NEED TO UPDATE BALLAD OF THE WIND FISH SO BAD. My first main story, one I had so many ideas for, has been laying idle since March! :-(
Ya know, I often love leading readers in the wrong direction, on purpose. Get them thinking something will happen when something entirely unexpected will. I've been getting a good deal of inspiration lately for the events of later, far-off chapters...and the action will blow you all away, cuz no one will see it coming. :-D
Don't worry about the PWP oneshots just yet; none of those will happen until this first arc is done (I'm guessing two, three more chapters), and by then Slash and Psymakio (Sy-Mach-io, heh) will have been...intimate. Very, very intimate. :3
Also, not all the oneshots will be crazy-ass orgies with leather and Lopunny. Sometimes there will be cutesy stories that fit in with the original Sinners, but don't really have a place in the storyline...like a Christmas special or something, heh. We'll see! ^_^
You know, I think one of the major reasons for the success and growing popularity of Sinners is that the audience and the author, humble ol' me, maintain communication. Not only has all the attention and expressions of enjoyment spurred me to focus on this work over all my other fics, but also gives the readers...something more. Like, I know that there are many authors, many of whom are just as good as me (if not better) who don't really have time to respond to reviews or whatnot (also a common occurrence on Newgrounds). It kind of makes the story and the person behind it mysterious, and while that can sometimes be a good thing...I prefer interacting with my fans, hence the promise I make here and on Newgrounds, that Slash ALWAYS responds to all reviews. It's a little hard sometimes, because I tend to get quite a lot of reviews and a lot more e-mails/instant messages/etc, but it's something I'm glad to do, heh...because then, instead of having 'a bunch of reviewers' and 'the guy who writes this stuff', we got more of a community-type thing going, which is awesome.
Daemon---Originally I thought of maybe making Watson having loved a Pokemon a long time ago, but the "Can You?" part of me (Misery readers will understand what I'm talking about) thought that it'd be just a little too coincidental, heh. But yes, the old guy is someone they can count on...and there won't be many more of them, so Slash and Gardevoir will greatly value his help.
Next chapter is currently being written...ETA is likely sometime this weekend. :-D
Do whatever you want with your life, even if other people think it's dumb. One of the major themes of this story, as well as my own personal philosophy, is "who gives a shit what other people think of you?", heh. You go with what makes you happy, and if others don't approve...well, they can learn to deal with it, lol.
I usually like writing long, slow-moving romance and stuff...where the characters have time to gradually fall in love...but in this story, that just can't happen, because anytime they'd start getting closer to admitting their feelings to themselves and each other, something catastrophic could happen (such as being beaten up and nearly killed by asshats). Tragedy has brought them together, hardship will keep them close, and nothing short of death will tear them apart.
I can't wait to write the first 'real' sex scene. I plan to devote an entire chapter to it---and not a short chapter, either---and it's not too far off now. My planning has come up with some swell ideas. :-D
Incidentally, YES, I NEED TO UPDATE BALLAD OF THE WIND FISH SO BAD. My first main story, one I had so many ideas for, has been laying idle since March! :-(
Ya know, I often love leading readers in the wrong direction, on purpose. Get them thinking something will happen when something entirely unexpected will. I've been getting a good deal of inspiration lately for the events of later, far-off chapters...and the action will blow you all away, cuz no one will see it coming. :-D
Don't worry about the PWP oneshots just yet; none of those will happen until this first arc is done (I'm guessing two, three more chapters), and by then Slash and Psymakio (Sy-Mach-io, heh) will have been...intimate. Very, very intimate. :3
Also, not all the oneshots will be crazy-ass orgies with leather and Lopunny. Sometimes there will be cutesy stories that fit in with the original Sinners, but don't really have a place in the storyline...like a Christmas special or something, heh. We'll see! ^_^
You know, I think one of the major reasons for the success and growing popularity of Sinners is that the audience and the author, humble ol' me, maintain communication. Not only has all the attention and expressions of enjoyment spurred me to focus on this work over all my other fics, but also gives the readers...something more. Like, I know that there are many authors, many of whom are just as good as me (if not better) who don't really have time to respond to reviews or whatnot (also a common occurrence on Newgrounds). It kind of makes the story and the person behind it mysterious, and while that can sometimes be a good thing...I prefer interacting with my fans, hence the promise I make here and on Newgrounds, that Slash ALWAYS responds to all reviews. It's a little hard sometimes, because I tend to get quite a lot of reviews and a lot more e-mails/instant messages/etc, but it's something I'm glad to do, heh...because then, instead of having 'a bunch of reviewers' and 'the guy who writes this stuff', we got more of a community-type thing going, which is awesome.
Daemon---Originally I thought of maybe making Watson having loved a Pokemon a long time ago, but the "Can You?" part of me (Misery readers will understand what I'm talking about) thought that it'd be just a little too coincidental, heh. But yes, the old guy is someone they can count on...and there won't be many more of them, so Slash and Gardevoir will greatly value his help.
Next chapter is currently being written...ETA is likely sometime this weekend. :-D