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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shaping up to be some more fluff in the next chapter, although there's going to be some actual plot development too, as we can't have Slash and Gardevoir laying in bed for the rest of the story...
...as tempting as that may be. Heheh.
Incidentally, thank you, anon, for being my 300th review. :3
...as tempting as that may be. Heheh.
Incidentally, thank you, anon, for being my 300th review. :3
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow, and wow.
That was long as fuck, I never bother to count how many words I have per chapter, it doesn't really matter to me, they are as long or short as they need to be.
Anyhow, that was yet another great chapter. That was quite a scene, and the old man Watson, and other small minute details I don't care to mention.
Well, there's not a whole lot I can say, so, I'l check in some other time.
This is CrazyIvan, reminding you, if you're contacted by the FBI, never mention my name.
That was long as fuck, I never bother to count how many words I have per chapter, it doesn't really matter to me, they are as long or short as they need to be.
Anyhow, that was yet another great chapter. That was quite a scene, and the old man Watson, and other small minute details I don't care to mention.
Well, there's not a whole lot I can say, so, I'l check in some other time.
This is CrazyIvan, reminding you, if you're contacted by the FBI, never mention my name.
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... Everytime (I don't know how you do it) you manage to somehow make the next chapter even better than the last. Once again, an excellent (and erotic) chapter by Slash. I eagerly await your next update. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Never again shall I read your author notes! Make me frikkin paranoid; is it worth the super long and nice chapter?!
...you bet your ass it is! Nice job! I like the long chapters...it's so hard not getting used to them though...
See ya next chapter ^^
...you bet your ass it is! Nice job! I like the long chapters...it's so hard not getting used to them though...
See ya next chapter ^^
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CrazyIvan---I used to type in Notepad, but now I use Microsoft Word just so I can spellcheck and get a word count, heh. I also have a single file with the entire story I've written so far, and at 12 point font it's a crazy 127 pages. Not that I'm surprised the story's gone so long, but more that it's got this much stuff so early in the storyline...
Anyhow, Watson is shaping up to be an important character in this story, far beyond just being 'yet another Gym Leader'. The next chapter is going to have him talking about his past, and it will play a significant role in the present for Slash and Gardevoir...
There will also be a little bit of...heheh.
DemonicStrife---Honestly, I don't know how I manage to keep improving each chapter. I'm sure a time will come when a chapter is less awesome than the previous one, but I will endeavor to keep the bar high in any case. ^_^
NS---Heh, remember that not even I can say with certainty where this story is going to go. As we near the beginning of the second arc (the race for the Sky Pearl), things are starting to accelerate beyond my control. Eventually I'm going to be little more than a channel for the story (if anyone has read the Dark Tower books by Stephen King, and the concept of an author being nothing more than a means of converting a story into type, it's like that)...
Well, planning stages for chapter 14 are about complete, so I'll probably start writing the chapter itself tonight. ^_^
Anyhow, Watson is shaping up to be an important character in this story, far beyond just being 'yet another Gym Leader'. The next chapter is going to have him talking about his past, and it will play a significant role in the present for Slash and Gardevoir...
There will also be a little bit of...heheh.
DemonicStrife---Honestly, I don't know how I manage to keep improving each chapter. I'm sure a time will come when a chapter is less awesome than the previous one, but I will endeavor to keep the bar high in any case. ^_^
NS---Heh, remember that not even I can say with certainty where this story is going to go. As we near the beginning of the second arc (the race for the Sky Pearl), things are starting to accelerate beyond my control. Eventually I'm going to be little more than a channel for the story (if anyone has read the Dark Tower books by Stephen King, and the concept of an author being nothing more than a means of converting a story into type, it's like that)...
Well, planning stages for chapter 14 are about complete, so I'll probably start writing the chapter itself tonight. ^_^
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fecking A, man. Every time I read the newest chapter of this story, I think 'there's no way he could top this' and then time and time again, you do.
Rock. ON!
Rock. ON!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, heh. Nice to see Slash and Gardevoir getting to finally express their love. :-P
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy *bleep*. I was directed to this story by a good friend, but I admit, I didn't expect it to be this...enthralling. I swear, I can actually feel the love that Slash and Psymakio feel for one another, as well as the feelings of the other characters.
I also have to say that I'm enjoying the direction that you're going with the overall non-smut story, Maxie's death in particular. Keep up the good work. ^^
I also have to say that I'm enjoying the direction that you're going with the overall non-smut story, Maxie's death in particular. Keep up the good work. ^^
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well then, keep an eye on it, because things are just getting started! Now that Slash and Gardevoir are together, having admitted their love and chosen a course of action on it, consequences be damned, the real story begins.
Now that Maxie is dead, Team Aqua threatens to take its niche and become a truly threatening superpower in the Hoenn region...unless something is done to prevent it.
Kiako is racing to Fallarbor to collect the final Pearl...for what, precisely, it is not known, although if the likes of he and Giovanni are questing for it, you can be sure it is for something sinister.
What is the reason for Giovanni's interest in Gardevoir? Does she somehow play a role in his foul plans?
FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EXCITING...HUNDRED OR SO CHAPTERS...OF SINNERS OMG OMG OMG
:3
Now that Maxie is dead, Team Aqua threatens to take its niche and become a truly threatening superpower in the Hoenn region...unless something is done to prevent it.
Kiako is racing to Fallarbor to collect the final Pearl...for what, precisely, it is not known, although if the likes of he and Giovanni are questing for it, you can be sure it is for something sinister.
What is the reason for Giovanni's interest in Gardevoir? Does she somehow play a role in his foul plans?
FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EXCITING...HUNDRED OR SO CHAPTERS...OF SINNERS OMG OMG OMG
:3
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great i love how Gardevoir acts now sorry it took me a while to review but i was kinda sick after this was posted but that i've read it i got to say you are awesome words fail to say how great this was.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae