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balls to the effing wall i love it <3

Black Whole---I'm also a bit surprised that I've managed to update so (relatively) quickly. Can't promise it'll always be like that, but I'm not complaining, either, heh.

The two of them finally got to spend some time together, even if it's stuck in bed. Heeey, that's actually a great place for two new lovers to be stuck, ain't it? Heheheh.

I shall always try to top myself...sometimes I don't think I can (I didn't think I could top the last chapter), but it always seems that I manage. I shall endeavor to keep pushing my own personal bar up!

Imasuky Lomae---Those two really complete each other. Even having to hide it from prying eyes, you'll see just how much they need each other when they're up and walking again...and when they confront their enemies.

Luminous Dark---Glad you liked it, heh. ^_^

slicerness---It wasn't even a real sex scene yet, just them...getting to know each other a bit intimately, heh. Don't worry, though, they'll be thoroughly enjoying each other's company soon enough...

While this chapter was my personal longest chapter, I've seen much longer...some of the chapters of the Star Wars fic "Forbidden" are absolutely titanic. But I usually write a chapter over the course of only a few days (although the planning/revising can take a lot longer), so my chapters tend to not be THAT huge, heh.

As for Aqua/Rocket, remember that none of the protagonists are currently aware of Kiako's allegiance with Team Rocket, nor even that Team Rocket still exists (and even if they did, remember that Rocket is based in Kanto, and would not seem to be a major threat). However, with Giovanni and Kiako extending the tainted reach of their organization into Hoenn, it's only a matter of time before it becomes clear.

This story is nearing the second major arc; the first arc involves the protagonists developing from a newbie trainer and his Ralts into battle-hardened lovers. The second arc will be about the race to the final Pearl...and that begins in a scant two or three chapters.

KEEP AN EYE OUT!

I just thought of something you might want to adress ( if you havent already and i missed it ) in a later chapter .. the possibilty or probablity of gardie getting pregnant or having an egg by slash if/when they do the deed .. if their ridiculed now they would be destroyed carting around a half human / pokemon .. so you might want to air it out if it is / isnt possible for that to happen ( in mine it wasnt but you may have different veiws on this matter .. it would be fun diolouge for him to educate her on it tho

I can say right now that I doubt it would be possible. I mean, the whole Pokemon-being-able-to-interbreed in the games is already stretching the limits of plausibility, although it isn't ENTIRELY impossible if all Pokemon share a common ancestor (although it would still be obscenely unlikely). Most people could suspend belief enough for that, but for a human and a Pokemon to be able to produce offspring...even infertile offspring...would be stretching it.

For the last couple of chapters, all I'll say is... this fanfiction continues to be amazing.

I totally will.

Incidentally, expect chapter 13 tomorrow or Monday; I spent all of today working on a LONG overdue flash I've been promising to do for like, six months.

*is close to Sinners-induced mental/emotional orgasm*
Put it up! PUT IT UP!!!! The agony is unbearable! Plus, my metaphorical mind-dick is getting sore and blueish! HURRY!!!!!!

Wait holy shit, aside from having godlike legendary stats, the best moves in the game, looking cool as fuck and having a very awesome name, it can be ANY TYPE?! Holy shit man!
Imagine trading to get six of this fucker at maxed stats...

You can’t get Arceus in-game, not unless you cheat that is. The only way to get it is to obtain an event-only item; the Azure Flute. Without this rare item, you can’t get Arceus.

But even if you were to get hold on it, Arceus is an Uber and very unlikely to be allowed in competitive plays. However, even if it were allowed, wining with an Uber is something everyone can do since no skill and intelligence – apart from being able to pres a few bottoms that is - is required to use it.

Amazing! Your talent is wasted on this site, where nobody is taken seriously. You should really post this on fanfiction.net
As for this chapter specifically, It was nice, if not a little rushed. But I'm glad things worked out in the end. Next chapter is the Lemon, isn't it? I look forward to it.