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DRD---It's nearing completion, although I'm stopping for tonight (seeing as it's 5 in the morning where I am, and my mind isn't coherent enough to write, heh), but it will be done, most likely, tomorrow. Currently at about 7400 words and still got a ways to go, then I need to proof it.

Fantomius---That's what I heard, too. I wonder how common that thing's gonna be when it's released. Of course, I'm sure plenty of them have already been hacked. In any case, I don't own Diamond or Pearl, and even if I did, I only use super-legendaries when playing by myself, heh.

Onar---If I remember correctly, I have a couple of my old (non-lemon) Golden Sun fics on FanFiction.net, but I stopped using the site when I heard about them banning NC-17 rated stories, partly on principle and partly because I was getting into the lemon scene at the time. If that's still in place, I can't put any of these stories on there, because...well, they're all going to be getting pretty explicit eventually, heh.

The next chapter won't have sex, but it'll have...something. All I'm going to say for now is that the chapter begins with Slash and Gardevoir in bed...and it ends the same way. As for what happens between beginning and end...well, you'll have to wait and see, heh.

* lurks * still waiting <3

O: An arc? I'll be really looking forward to that, since your fic has so "harshly" reminded me on how I myself and my friend were going through the 493 pokemon and go "I'd tap that.", for joke or even more ulterior motives, I'm not saying. But... If I might suggest? Gallade and Lopunny are must-have. But a Blaziken would totally be kickass, since I already know one of my own friends who would totally hunt one down and do things with it if they really existed. XD Milotic would be interesting as well (And we so know Shinnoh champion Cynthia has something going on with hers -shot- ), not to mention Froglass, Snorunt's female-exclusive evolution (with its ghost/ice type combo offering interesting kink potential). Luxray, Arcanine, Typhlosion and Ninetails are all good candidates for 4-legged furries with their rich and warm fur, and in its extension the entire eeveelution family could be considered (Flareon's very warm, and Vaporeon sure would be slick as hell in water. Jolteon probably has a mechanism that can make its fur smooth when it's not threatened. Espeon has an interesting tail, Umbreon would be fun in the dark. Glaceon's adorable, and you'd wonder what Leafeon could do in the woods, etc ;D ). For the tentacle fetish, Tentacruel might get upstaged by Tangrowth, and Lickitung/Lickilicky's tongues certainly do raise some questions. And if you can, I think homosexuality/bisexuality would be interesting, as well. Why not go with Girl/Lopunny or Guy/Blaziken male while you're at it? P:

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I talk too much, don't I. -Shakes head- My apologies. Though, do add poffins and pokeblocs, please? D: I'm sure it's a good way to bond, not to mention that a blue scarf would look Gorgeous on Gardy~ ♥

Then I'll watch the Jirachii freaks with curiosity. O: -Slightly laments on how something as cute as Jira could have such crazy fans- Though... same could be said for our world, eh? Do what you must; the readers have no valid reason to start to complain because this fic itself is way beyond their own capacities.

...Well, wherever your keyboard takes you! :D

-About Arceus-

Yeah, since you find plates by going around in Shinnoh/underground. They are of each type, and have the same effect as the items that are Miracle Seed, Charcoal, TwistedSpoon, Blackglasses, etc. Y'know, type damage+ hold items. Except they're plates. Fire Plate, Mind Plate, Dark Plate, etc. And Arceus' type becomes whatever the Plate it's holding is. And with Judgment's 100 acc/100 power, it's nothing to scoff at.

If you put a female Glaceon in this or any story i will love you forever Glaceon was the frist pokemon that i ever truly had a fantasy about it's just so sexy for some reason

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Spankmonkey1_69@hotmail.com

DAmn those bastard's, they DESERVED TO DIE! And how terribly sad for poor Kirlia. Those phobia-induced assholes just had to go and ruin the moment. They deserved nothing less than death!....DEATH!....ahem. I had to copy this down to my laptop's word document to read it, since, now that I'm living in a place that doesn't exactly have internet access or wireless connections near by. Sorry for the late review because of it. Yes, yes, I know what your thinking...If I really was a devoted fan of yours I would have snuck into my neighbor's house and used their computer..But I couldn't cuz none of them ever leave their damn house's!

Anyway. I'm gonna go review the chapter 12 now, so, see ya soon? (figuratively of course).

SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com

An update this quick....
It's unheard of....
It's crazy.....
It's so fucking awesome...
It makes all of us happy...(in the pants....?)

Finally, Gardevior makes her grand debut. I can already hear the other fans going into orgasmic cries of joy (and you know I'm one of them). So cool for Geodude to finally have gotten the chance to evolve, and (because I forgot to put it in the last review) I thought it was pretty cool how Slash did all these notes on his Pokemon's fighting styles' and such. (You'd never catch a single character from the show doing something so...smart.) So now, I'm sure, where going to start seeing some more problems arise for our completely hott for each other, in love, yet so much more, main characters. I feel sad knowing that their problems are only just beginning. I also feel so excited knowing that their problems are only just beginning. (hehe). Well, that's enough of me taking up your time for now. Take care you amazing godsend of an author you. Be safe.

Ok, I have to step in and just say NO. Please, don't add M/M to this story. I'm not against it IRL, but on AFF too many stories are M/M or have M/M in them. Too many M/M stories here, especially in the pokemon section. One reason I started reading this story instead of another one, was because this didn't contain M/M. It's a serious turnoff for me and a lot of other people. Not against it in real life, but I sure as hell don't want to read about it, and I love this story. If it absolutely MUST be in Sinners, at least limit it though, please?
Btw I personally don't mind F/F or M/F/F, (being a hot blooded and hetero male, :D) but I'm sure some readers might, and it's only fair that if M/M isn't in neither is F/F... though a slash/gardevoir/lopunny would be very hot... Maybe as a oneshot?

Eh, but don' mind me, I'm just a reader...

Luminous Dark---IMPATIENT, FUCK YOU

Just kidding. You won't be waiting much longer. :-P

KuraiD---I'm not saying that any same-room sex will happen in the actual Sinners story...although it IS a possibility, as that wouldn't involve any swapping, just, you know, a bit of daring on Slash and Gardevoir's parts. As for all your other hundred thousand PERVERTED FURRY SEXUAL SUGGESTIONS, PERVERT...LOL, wow. I admire your, ah, depth of imagination. However, remember that Sinners is a story based not on random, wanton sex, but love, romance, and a quest to stop a very dark man and his Demon-Eyed liege from obtaining the power of the Three Princes. Any other explicit human/Pokemon action would be strictly relegated to PWP oneshots or whatnot, unless I get inspiration for another serious, Sinners-like story involving human/Pokemon relationships, heh.

The mention of Gardevoir wearing a scarf brings something up: what's the deal with Gardevoir's clothing? Does it come off, is it part of her, or what? HEH, I actually address this and answer it in chapter 13. I make it what I do partly for convenience, heh...just like how, in this story, Gardevoir can 'summon' her psychic 'horn' whenever she's in battle, to magnify her own power, because let's face it, it's in a rather annoying location for two lovers, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---We'll see...I foresee, by the time Sinners itself is completed, a whole series of random oneshots spinning off from it, heh.

Angel---Yes, they did deserve to die. When I was originally planning that scene, my muse wanted me to let them go, and be taken into custody by Watson...but I begged my muse to let me kill them, and she acquiesced, heh.

Even though they DID ruin their beautiful sunset moment, they're gone now, and chapter 13 will have some Slash/Gardevoir fluff...and maybe a wee bit of LEMON. :-O

As for chapter 12, I loved making Geodude evolve, because Graveler is such a bad-ass Pokemon. The Golem series has always been one of my favorites, even with its 4x type disadvantages. I dunno when Slash will make Graveler evolve yet...but I can't wait to figure it out, heh.

Chapter 13 answers several questions Slash and Gardevoir have; mainly, how they will act around others.

DRD---I should make some yaoi just to spite you. :3

Nah, nothing of that sort is planned, although we must remember that anything could happen, as I haven't decided on a lot yet. You'd be much more likely to see yaoi/yuri in oneshot stories, like the already-published masterpiece "Liek, use thundershock okay", HEH.

I can see Gardevoir being so devoted to Slash that she tries to convince a Lopunny to help her give Slash a very happy birthday or something...in a oneshot, of course, heheh.

Well, guess I should go ahead and post chapter 13 now, since it's completed. Or maybe I should wait a few months just to fuck with you all?

Just kidding. No more death threats, plz, heh.

Post it or I'll kill you.

Just jokeing but update soon

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER

As soon as I'd posted that, I got two e-mail threats and then yours. :3

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