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KuraiD---I might mention other religions over the course of this story, but Jirachism is the primary and ever-present opposition and hurdle to our young lovers, mainly because they're fucking everywhere. I do have a scene in mind for later involving a more radical sect of Jirachism, but...I don't wanna reveal anything yet. Besides, y'all are gonna hate that part... :-(

I know about Gallade, and I really wish they'd made it so all male Ralts become Gallades eventually, cuz the possibility of still having a male Gardevoir is just...unsettling, heh. Like a male Jynx or a female Mr. Mime. I actually go out of my way to ALWAYS have a female Ralts in R/S/E, even if it means spending a few hours looking for one (as I also demand that my Ralts have Synchronize as its ability and be of a neutral/Modest nature).

In any case, I've already got the main characters sorted out, buuuuut...that does sound like an interesting concept for a oneshot...I can't see Gardevoir ever swinging for a Gallade (once you go human, you...keep fucking humans, I guess, and we know Slash won't ever want anyone else, heh), but maybe both of them in the same room or it being Slash's birthday or...heh...if it's a oneshot, I could really make anything happen since it wouldn't have to be 'canon' in terms of Sinners, heh. WE SHALL SEE. :evil, perverted laugh:

And yes, I know about Lopunny, too. Every furry's dream Pokemon. N-not that I'm a furry, I'm just saying...heh...

Imasuky Lomae---Lopunny IS hot. The only problem I have is that I'm not intimately acquainted with it (that sounds dirrrty) like I am with Gardevoir, having not played D/P yet. Buuuuut maybe a oneshot sometime, with THREE trainers...Slash, a girl with a Gallade, and a guy with a Lopunny...like, maybe they're forced to hide from the Jirachians and are in the same place and since they're there for a while they...hm.

This sounds like a good idea to celebrate my 10000th hit (which we're getting closer to!): a crazy oneshot orgy. I gotta remember, I can make anything I want, since it won't be 'canon', HEH.

Y'all got my mind (and other things) stewing now...we'll see. :-P

I'm sure that if you wrote something about Lopunny than sevral of your fans would be stewing in something other than thought

With Love, Imasuky Lomae

Hehe, you know it.

Incidentally, I am currently writing chapter 13...expect it tomorrow or Sunday; Monday at the latest. :-D

This is simply the best pokemon fanfic ever. I can say that without a moment's hesitation, it's just that great.

Luminous Dark---Fluff is indeed good, and it's what I love writing the most. :-D

Drake---Thank you, good sir. It's only gonna be getting better. ^_^

thusfar im having fun writing for a change .. normaly im all serious

slash my char is going to reach maville in the next few parts or so , permission to use your char and your gardevoir ( not in the comedic sense im using but as just a charachter who happens to be in town .. i had a plan for the most epic line in the history of my char .. when you kick the living shit out of ash in 1 move in a random battle ^.^

NS---Chapters gotta end eventually...I also hope y'all don't become addicted to the 6000-7000 word long chapter, cuz I can't promise I can do that every time! I'm typically more of a 3500-4000 kinda guy, heh. Anyway, next chapter is in production, and I'll I'm gonna say is that...well, neither of em are dead. :3

DRD---I can feel their pain, too, but they'll get through it the best they can. They might not have many people to draw help from...especially once their relationship becomes public...but they have each other. ^_^

DemonicStrife---My style of writing involves, among other things, the abuse of the ellipses and the utter molestation of the humble semicolon. XD But that's okay, because everyone seems to enjoy reading it, heh. The next chapter is kind of a 'relaxation' chapter...more for me and the readers than Slash and Gardevoir, who are going to have to discuss some very serious problems with their affections. But it'll be very low-angst, so yay. :-D

Will Slash have a rival, someone to fill the role of 'grudging ally'? Ho ho, maybe. But I don't wanna give away too much. :3

And oh yes, I can see Gardevoir in black leather. I finally decided what to do on the issue of Gardevoir's 'clothing' (the discussion will be in a future chapter, lol): it's removable, but she can regenerate it if it's lost/damaged. So yes, she's very capable of removing the long, flowing, elegant dress and putting on a leather miniskirt and a tight top and black gloves and taking out a cat-o-nine-tails and...er...heh.

Luminous Dark---Yes, you can use the characters. I abide by the old-school rules of fanfiction copyright: while we don't own the franchise we're righting about, or the characters from it, we still own the story itself and any original characters within. So it's always best to ask before posting someone else's story, or using someone else's in-story characters. You asked, so yes, go for it, heh.

TIME TO GET BACK TO WRITING :3

Thanks for the go ahead .. im way ahead of schedule and hadnt even planned to be 5 chapters in let alone this far yet

when i get on a roll -.-

anywho I think everyone needs alittle fluff with all the drame ^.^ no offense intended

Great update. Nice mix of romance and angst.

Luminous Dark---Fluff. Discussion of their situation. Fluff. Fluff. And then, maybe, if I have some time, some more fluff. ^_^

Twi---Life be a cruel mistress most of the time...but sometimes one can find beauty in those cruelties. And they found theirs, heh. :-D

DamienZ3r0---Kinda funny that compared to later in the story, this chapter of their life will seem easy...