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It's me, Anonymoose! 'Tis time for my review.

First, I think this is one of the better stories on the Pokemon section (if not most of what I've seen on AdultFanfiction.net), both plot-wise and adult scene-wise. And though I admit to skimming some of the chapters (mostly the scenes that don't have the main heroes) partly because of the chapters' length, it's waaaay better than chapters or stories that are only a paragraph long. (Glares at a few stories right here in the Pokemon section.) And the romance between Slash and Gardevoir is so cute, yet I can't help but fear it will end in tragedy.

I've been thinking of doing a human/Pokemon romance story myself one of these days. But I don't know how exactly to do it yet, and I know that even with a human-like Pokemon like Gardevoir (or an anthro-like Pokemon like the Fighting Pokemon "Chop" family or Lopunny or other human-sized two-legged Pokemon), it would look weird to the readers. And the only "[semi-]canon" human/pokemon I've seen in the anime were Ash/Bayleef (formerly Chikorita) and Ash/Latias (who sometimes disguised herself as her human friend Bianca). Both were one-sided, of course, but I think those are the only instances of this type of pairing in canon. So I don't have a lot to go on. I've been trying to find other authors that have done it, but they are so few in number, het-wise. I do like yours, though, and it's looked down upon in [your interpretation of] the world just as I thought it would. It does give me a few ideas of how a romance between a human and Pokemon could be like, but personally I'd rather go the light-hearted route. Drama, especially romance drama, are a weakness of mine. :\

But now for the not-so-good. First, the obvious message from Slash near the beginning of the story. It's very obvious who the "Jirachians" are supposed to be, for example, as well as other real-world references. I don't know, it just seemed a little too preachy or blatant to me. I'd be more subtle, though admittedly I don't know how. I just don't like reading messagey stuff too much in fanfiction, but that's just me.

Hmm. What else. ... Actually, that was the only really negative thing I have about the story.


Sooo good luck on the rest of the story! :)

Imasuky- Wow, I wasn't even going to mention Water Sport, nice. *applauds*

Wonder if we should stop this now before we really get out of hand. (I can actually see someone writing a spin-off one shot for Gardevoir in a PokeSex Battle with attacks like what we've said... Maybe some info taken from the Pokegirl setting, but overall still Pokemon. Either way, haha.)

Wonder how many fans would nerdgasm if Gardevoir and Lopunny shared a Lovely Kiss?

DizzyRye I might write a story like that but it would use the Gardevoir I have planed for my story becasue she's already a pervert oh and I think Sweet Kiss would be more appropriate or less depending on how you look at it.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

P.S. If at least four others say they like to see it i'd write that story

More Gardevoir stories are good, IMO. :)

RoboRed---Hilariously enough, I sucked at that kind of battle and hated them. Battle Dome and Battle Pike for me.

Luckily for you (and me) 4th generation Pokemon will only be used sparingly in Sinners. And when they are used, they won't necessarily be strictly canon in terms of D/P, because all of my D/P knowledge comes from Serebii.net, lol.

All I shall say on Red Eyes is this: falling seven miles into the open ocean makes Kiako a sad panda.

I was actually making a list of every Gym leader/Elite Four member throughout Pokemon gens 1-3, intending to give them all special titles and decide which were still alive and which would have some part in the story, but halfway through I said to myself, "this is stupid. Hardly any of these guys are going to show up, and I can deal with them when they pop in." Heh. So FUCK Lieutenant Surge and his fucking stunted Raichu. bwahahaha

Luckily, a very hot Gym Leader will be showing up soon. Oh yes. And if I can't get her nekkid in Sinners proper, I WILL oneshot her. YES.

Imasuky Lomae---Gardevoir is bouncy, both in terms of personality and...physical attributes, heh.

And with her, even the shitty Constrict move wins. Fuck yeah.

Reo690---Rotom is swell. And haha, cliffhangers are only going to get worse. You can bet that, if I kill off someone important, I'll either end the chapter right before it happens, so you worry about them, or I end it right after, so you're left wondering what the fuck happens next. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAlol

ThatGuy---Slash is fearsome crafty.

The Kiako-nightmare scene wasn't in it originally; I'm glad I put it in. The sooner I expand his character stuff, the sooner I get to make him tear shit up with gusto, haha.

Rotom looks pretty swell, especially since its ability is Levitate---a godsend for electric Pokemon. I want one.

The chapter title was undecided for a long time---so much varying stuff happened in the chapter that I couldn't think of a title. Death From Above came to me randomly, and is super mega swell.

DizzyRye---If Sinners encourages even one person to write some more Garderotica, it will have been worth writing. There's so little Gardevoir hentai and sexfics out there...sigh.

Nerdgasm over this: I'm planning a oneshot involving Gardevoir and Flannery having some girl-girl action. No joke. Oh ho ho.

Imasuky Lomae---GARDEVOIR USED ROLE PLAY!

And go for it---like I said, we need moar Gardie.

RoboRed---Yes.

Flannery is hot no pun indented but personally I like Erika the most in fact one the most common pairing I do is Erika and Sabrina as Mistress and slave and I’m good at loving S&M kinda stuff.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

First off, Imasuky, yes! write it!
(And yeah, Sweet Kiss would probably work better, but they are pretty close regardless.)

Hmm, Flannery/Gardevoir happy fun time? Nice!
(Personally I'm a fan of Sabrina and Jasmine, but Flannery's hot, too. Too bad, judging by the general fan concensus, that she only gets it on with her Typhlosion.)

Hmm, one more Pokerotica attack. Could Slash use MilkDrink with Gardevoir? (Disreagrding pregnancy details and all that.)

I thought about MilkDrink as well as Snatch the story most likely have Sabrina or some other human because I'm far more used to human anatomy i'll lok around on Bulbapedia to chose that's were i get all my info.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Slash: 1)No shit? Me too! (down to the letter, even!)

2) Thank god for serebii.net

3) roffle

4) I swear to god, if this nekked gym leader involves Flannery, I will eat my laptop out of sheer orgasmic glee.

Imasuky: Pretty much all of the female gym leaders/elites are hot in one way or another, IMO (except for Agatha...eeeww).

So you think Bertha is hot oh and i've picked Cheryl form D/P heres what she looks like http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Cheryl and just a note the story will have a lot of foot stuff in it.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae