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You have no idea how happy I was to get to this chapter.

As I was writing it, I was yelling at myself for pumping all the angst into it, but thankfully I was able to compensate for it!

I can't wait to get to write about them being in love while NOT bleeding profusely. :3

dude iv read this entire series so far. And i must complement your writing abilities. I have read many stories (not just this site, i mean novels and such), and i must say that none of them compare to emotions this series has invoked in me. I very much apreciate your difference in style from the other authors in the site. Smut and sex does not make a story. Have you ever seriously considered a carear in writing? I swear your style is excellent and descriptive, rivaling (in my mind anyway) the epicness of other writers such as JRR Tolkien and Robert Jordon. Keep up the excellent work man, you have a great gift. I look forward to the rest of this truely epic story.

Thanks for enjoying it, heh. I'm probably never going to pursue anything as a professional writer...and I doubt any editors would be willing to put up with my "I'll work when I feel like it" approach, lol. I do have one major original work that would certainly be novel-length, but it's been locked up in my head since middle school...it'd be a damned hard task to finally write it out somewhere.

But eh, maybe someday, when Sinners is done. :3

...Oh. My. GOD.
That was the single greatest chapter this story has ever had. Combined with it coming out a mere 2 days after I found this fic combined with your er... luxurious writing style/pace it's just too much to handle.

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Holy fucking shit. Gardevoir evolves, geodude evolves (btw the graveler thing made me crack a smile) fucking sheer awesome.
And really, now that kirlia evolved into Gardevoir the chapters seem like they'll just flow from your mind like the amazon river! heheheh... If only you could keep up that pace. Maybe another chapter by the weekend, perhaps? Cuz I seriously think my head will explode from sheer awesome without another chapter...

oh hell yea .. Gardevoir is my fav pokemon .. a mix of drama and romance to entice the senses .. much love man

*Claps*
*Claps some more*
*Claps will hands hurt*

Not only did you get out 2 chapters in less that a week you managed to blow all expectations out of the water.
I dunno how you did it but it's an amazing story so far. If there was a book I would buy it haha.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful.

Keep up the good work man. Finally after 12 Chapters they actually kiss. That has to be a record on aff for the most chapters without anything sexual going on. And for once I couldn't be happier. I actually care about these characters and hate it when bad stuff happens. If you can keep up this pace while maintaining the quality I will be very impressed. Great job :)

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T_T .....

So sad... So beautiful...
Sinners or not, those *ssholes have no right to judge them!!!

Go get them, Gardevoir!!! T_T

im thinking of making a gardevoir fic now .. inspired me ^.^ .. maybe an aff exsclsive .. what do you think slash ..

Aaaaiiiiee, that was not a happier chapter at *all*!!! ...well, except for the end. The end made me happy X3

But boy, I've said it once and I'm sure I'll say it again, you sure know how to write a fight scene! Really, you do. It's like being right there in the middle of the battle and seeing it happen, except better, because you know what the fighters are thinking/feeling and you're not in any danger from explosions/shrapnel/pokemon attacks gone awry.

Oooh, and we've had the almighty confession of lurv!!! I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter! ...but I will. 'Cause rushing fellow authors is not nice. Keep up the insanely good work!

i almost forgot i had a list that my gardevoir has for moves in my games ( for reference )

1. psychic ( since yours is superpowerful you might be able to pull off extrasensory instead )
2. shadow ball
3. attract
4 . calm mind

just throwing some moves up to be helpful incase you might need it ^^