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by Stormborn Apostle

schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will, heh.

Also, 200 reviews! Freakin' sweet, even if half of them are me replying to people! :-D
person Angel
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Damn. You really have an innate desire to just kill your fans with all this sexual tension don't you? I for one, think this should definitely help keep any viewers desperate for some Slash/Kirlia action sedated for awhile at least. Congrats.
As for who really dreamt it, I have a feeling that they both may have had a hand in that dream/fantasy. Their minds are connected after all. Wouldn't it make at least a little sense that perhaps the closeness of one-another may have connected their minds even more so during their sleep? Or am I just being naive? (Probably some fusion of the two I'm sure.)

Great-freakin job you genius you. Take care
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL you all think this is sexual tension? Man, when Kirlia evolves, you guys are gonna go nuts. :-P

Yeah, in regards to the dream, they both definitely helped create it. Kirlia's already infatuated with her trainer, and Slash is starting to have more...untrainer-ly feelings towards her. We've seen how Kirlia feels about him; the next chapter will give you a glimpse into Slash's feelings, heh.

By the way, the strength of their bond is going to increase significantly as time goes on. With Ralts, Slash could only get basic feelings and understand her in a vague sort of way. With Kirlia, she can directly communicate with Slash's mind, and emotions and the like can be sent through the bond both ways. As she gets stronger and closer to evolution, the bond is becoming so pervasive that the two are losing their ability to keep their own thoughts and emotions private. And when she DOES evolve into Gardevoir...

Well, you'll all see. :-D
person someone
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word....genious. It has been long since I have seen a fanfic written so...perfectly. It seems that all fanfiction is these days is sex,sex,and more sex. You sir are a beacon of light. A single shining ray of hope. Update soon before I go insane with anticipation!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, glad you like it. I'm not very good with PWP, so I usually avoid it, lol. There will be sex, sex, and more sex in this story eventually, but obviously the plot will always be the focus of this story.

Most of the time. XD

Update should happen before the week is over.
person Fiasco
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's..... strange but good. REALLY strange, but equally good. *never crossed her mind to think about a pokemon and a person* Even well-written... Few grammar problems, but hey, who doesn't have those?
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It'll only be getting more strange as things progress, heh.

Yeah, I know about a lot of the grammatical problems. This story, and all my stories on AFF, are currently first drafts. I do a visual spelling check before I upload it, but that's all. Plus I type my stories in Notepad, not a real word processor, so I miss a lot.

Eventually, I'll probably go ahead and proof all the chapters in one sitting.
person ILC
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slash this is an awesome story when you going to continue it? ell hopefully soon cause i would like to know how the story progresses from that dream onward.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW YOU, lol

Very soon. I've only got three things to do today:

1) Make my Clock Mask for Clock Day!
2) Make a short flash for Clock Day!
3) Type up my story!

I've already got a good chunk of the next chapter written, so either today or the day after Clock Day. ^_^
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SHHHHH

If anyone sees this review...

(I AM WRITING CHAPTER 11 RIGHT FUCKING NOW, AT 1600 WORDS AND RISING)

KEEP IT A SECRET DAMMIT :-D

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