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My best flash is probably the Secret Missing Episode of Jay Jay the Jet Plane. The idea of a sentient aircraft dive-bombing innocent pedestrians and impaling them on its cock just gives me the giggles.

I love you....
I popped on just on a whim to see if there was any cool stories out. Then I sighed and decided to check out your story knowing it wasnt updated but maybe somehow me looking at it would make it so eventually.

And POOF a chapter ten smacked me in the face. And I was most pleased :) Decide to write that on a whim? Regardless it was good hurry and write more. I have been loving the build up so the sex should be amazing whenever you finally get to it.

Keep up the good work :) no matter how slowly the work comes about.

Not even I knew I was going to write it, heh.

When you start writing stories that resonate with you, they start to take on a life of their own...I'm not so much writing this story as channeling it through my hands and keyboard. XD

So, the next chapter could be tomorrow, or it could be in a month or two. We'll see! :-D

Ahh I knew it! That was a dream ....hmm but a shared dream, probably because of the psychic link that they have...Nice one Slash, again .

You treacherous little devil! You said you would take a while to update =P And now you tease us by previewing a lemon scene that will probably take more than 3 chapters to really take place ( after Kirlia evolves , etc)! Your evil and cruelty know no bonds and cannot be spoken with mortal words!

Thats why your my favorite writter in AFF ;)

I agree completely with you FluffyLover he is a bastard.

a sadistic one at that

With Love, Imasuky Lomae

FluffyLover---Heh, yes. And I'm not telling who had the dream and shared it...mainly because I don't know, either! This past chapter was one of those out-of-my-hands things...I didn't know I'd have the inspiration come to me, but when it did I had to either write it immediately or lost it, so...

I really couldn't have that much Slash/Kirlia lemon-ness even in a dream due to...physical constraints...but heh, we'll see what happens soon.

Daemon---Yes, yes, I know, heh. But trust me, when the lemon comes, it'll be hawt. :-D

Imasuky Lomae---I am infinitely evil in my teasing. ^_^

Incidentally, I need to remember that I gave Slash blue eyes in this story. In nearly all of his other incarnations, he is a demon with green eyes (like, florescent green)...but he's human in this one, so...BLUE BLUE BLUE BLUE BLUE

For the sake of the reader:

DO NOT under any circumstances check out Slash's various Newgrounds flashes. Unless you want to see the character in this story have green eyes and jerk it to various things.... while flying. For me its tough to picture him as a normal person after seeing his uh.... colorful flashes.

Sorry Slash I know you MIGHT put a lot of work into those flashes on newgrounds but for the sake of the reader I wouldn't view them tell after this story is complete.

Or you can completely disregard the above and view them anyway. But you have been warned ;)

I must say, this is leaps and bounds above what I expected to find here, especially for a pokemon story. I am now completely hooked, and I can't wait to see more.

Glad you enjoy, and yes, there will be more...and possibly sooner than even I thought. I got a chapter starting to come together in my head, so we'll see if it develops in the next week or so.