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And it is now officially the first of August.

And now it's updated.

AHAHAHAHAH so stfu :-D

It's about time you updated i was beging to think some had killed you well now that i've said that this chapter was great i cant wait for the next one and it had better come sonner than this one or else my army of samurai flesh pandas will break into your house and make a bunch of long distance phone calls


With Love, Imasuky Lomae

Ahhhhhh Slash delivered my daily dose of fluff! A nice one too , I might add . Thank you Slash ^^ Slash ( the character) is quite blunt huh >_> Kirlia must've wet herself.

Iw as going to add another "if you don't update I will kill you" , but I realised that if I kill you you owuldn't be able to write , would you? K then! I will TORTURE you if you take too long to update ;P But your other fics are very good as well , so I might be too busy to do that ....for a while .

Nice job buddy.

hmmmm.. If those death threats motivate you then I'll throw in my own :P.

If you dont finish this story. Or atleast add another chapter soon I will kill you!!

Alright now with that in mind go go go!! As for the Jesus/Muhammad fic how could you get more death threats here than that???
Anyway thanks for finally updating even if it does mean I have to chase you down on newgrounds...

Imasuky Lomae---Heh, don't worry...I'll never abandon any of my stories. If I thought I had to leave the internet forever, I'd probably delete all my WIP's just so no one would have to read an incomplete story that would never get an ending...

Glad you liked it, and as for the next chapter...I totally have no clue what it's going to involve yet. With this one, I obviously knew the main events beforehand, because it's the third part of a series...but the next one? We'll see, heh.

Fluffylover---I wouldn't say he's blunt so much as clueless...if he knew the extent of Kirlia's crush on him, I doubt he'd be saying things that could rile her up so much, heh...

I do agree that Kirlia probably got wet from all that, though. Er...wet herself. :heh:

Daemon---I've gotten a whole two death threats from Peace on Earth, which is a bit odd seeing as it's sacrilegious to TWO major religions. But I'm pretty sure I know why it's been so quiet: not many people visit the "Bible" section of AFF...lol.

Note: This is the anonymous that commented previously on June 21st.

I discovered the fanfiction over a month ago, and I think the new chapter is most certainly worth the wait. Considering you hate to write battles, you did the battle very well. I could feel the tension of it. This has been another good read.

Glad you liked it, heh.

Yeah, I hate battle scenes...but apparently people liked this chapter's battle, so...fine with me, lol.

It's weird writing sometimes. There are things I KNOW are good...things that impress myself (like the end of the chapter, I think was pretty swell, heh). But then there are other things I'm kinda :meh: over, like the battle scene. I personally don't think that part is a particularly outstanding bit of writing, so I get a little worried when I submit it.

But hey, usually I get a good response, so I guess I just need a bit more confidence in my own abilities, lol.

GO UPDATE OR DIE

AY YAI YAI, this story gets stronger and stronger! Your descriptive skills are great, and I know you just said you hate writing battles, I for one dont prefer to read them, but the action in this chapter was...well, rad. Very rad. The image of camerupt with the blood and water...superb. Your characterization of Wattson is great too, you have a way of making characters likable and dimensional. I'd totally hang out with Sinners-Wattson, hahahahaha.


Also, I'd be going "BLARRRGGG NOOOOOO!!!" at your working-on-other-stories announcement, but I know exactly where you're coming from and I just hope you get back in the zone soon :D