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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man cliff hanger that is so not right but that was an awsome update hope the next one doesnt take so long.
With love;Imasuky Lomae
With love;Imasuky Lomae
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Black Whole---Yeah, I'm surprised by the amount of views/reviews/e-mails, etc that I've gotten from this story, heh. As for the spelling and grammar...I was an International Baccalaureate nerd, so...
I actually don't like writing "action" stuff as much as dialogue and character development. I'm looking forward more to some later chapters than the next one, but the next one has to be written first, so...yep.
Imasuky Lomae---I know, I'm an evil person for the cliffhanger...but the chapter was running pretty long, and I promised I'd have the chapter out today, so I stopped where it was. At least the wait for the next chapter won't be anywhere near as long! :-D
(I know I said that last time, too, but this time I mean it!)
I actually don't like writing "action" stuff as much as dialogue and character development. I'm looking forward more to some later chapters than the next one, but the next one has to be written first, so...yep.
Imasuky Lomae---I know, I'm an evil person for the cliffhanger...but the chapter was running pretty long, and I promised I'd have the chapter out today, so I stopped where it was. At least the wait for the next chapter won't be anywhere near as long! :-D
(I know I said that last time, too, but this time I mean it!)
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You better mean it this is a great story and I'd hate to see it end up like just about everything by WotanAnubis who never finishes anything at all
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh Slash! You had to end it in a cliffy ! You are so evil. That's why I like your style ;P
Nice chapter, even though there was no fluffyness on it. I can sense some angst coming, maybe a tragedy... As always , I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is quite addictive , because I believe that it is what the pokémon games should be , with real badass villains .
Even though I'm eager to read the next chapter , please take your time writing it. Inspiration is the key for an author and nothing could be worse for the fic than a rushed chapter without the magic that the other chapters have. Just ....don't make me wait so long again!
Hm you said that the inspiration for this fic was a doujinshi about gardevoir that you read late at night , but now you said that many of your fic ideas come when you are on the top of a tree...Do you have a treehouse with a laptop or something like
that ? I doubt it , but it's interesting to know that you like to spend time thinking on teh top of a tree ^^ I just hope that you don't get hurt again.
Anyway , see ya next time , happy writing ;) And remember ...I'm watching you . Closely.
Nice chapter, even though there was no fluffyness on it. I can sense some angst coming, maybe a tragedy... As always , I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is quite addictive , because I believe that it is what the pokémon games should be , with real badass villains .
Even though I'm eager to read the next chapter , please take your time writing it. Inspiration is the key for an author and nothing could be worse for the fic than a rushed chapter without the magic that the other chapters have. Just ....don't make me wait so long again!
Hm you said that the inspiration for this fic was a doujinshi about gardevoir that you read late at night , but now you said that many of your fic ideas come when you are on the top of a tree...Do you have a treehouse with a laptop or something like
that ? I doubt it , but it's interesting to know that you like to spend time thinking on teh top of a tree ^^ I just hope that you don't get hurt again.
Anyway , see ya next time , happy writing ;) And remember ...I'm watching you . Closely.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you were drunk too? This keeps getting better and better lol.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---I assure you, I will finish every story I start. It may take a while...Sinners is going to be a very, very long story, as are a few of my other works. But I will never completely abandon any story.
FluffyLover---Heh, I'm looking forward to getting back to fluffy-ness and cuteness. The story will have its very cute moments...and its very dark moments. I also have a rather sad idea in mind for later...poor lil Kirlia.
As for the villains...oh yes. The anime fails because, other than Ash's tremendous suck-age, you don't have a threatening enemy force. HAY GUYZ LETS STEAL PIKACHU! SHALL WE DIG A WHOLE OR CROSS-DRESS THIS TIME? MAYBE A GIANT ROBOT LOLOLOL damn it pisses me off.
Heh, as for my inspiration...the idea of a human and a Gardevoir going at it came from a very sexy pic of Gardevoir and Gallade that I saw on deviantart (which can be seen at http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48112587)...despite there not being a human in the pic, it still got my creative juices flowing (among other things...er...).
But as for the story itself...that all comes from trees and ramen and drinking and the like, heh.
The next chapter will likely be out in the next couple days...I'm on a roll and I don't want to stop, heh.
FluffyLover---Heh, I'm looking forward to getting back to fluffy-ness and cuteness. The story will have its very cute moments...and its very dark moments. I also have a rather sad idea in mind for later...poor lil Kirlia.
As for the villains...oh yes. The anime fails because, other than Ash's tremendous suck-age, you don't have a threatening enemy force. HAY GUYZ LETS STEAL PIKACHU! SHALL WE DIG A WHOLE OR CROSS-DRESS THIS TIME? MAYBE A GIANT ROBOT LOLOLOL damn it pisses me off.
Heh, as for my inspiration...the idea of a human and a Gardevoir going at it came from a very sexy pic of Gardevoir and Gallade that I saw on deviantart (which can be seen at http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48112587)...despite there not being a human in the pic, it still got my creative juices flowing (among other things...er...).
But as for the story itself...that all comes from trees and ramen and drinking and the like, heh.
The next chapter will likely be out in the next couple days...I'm on a roll and I don't want to stop, heh.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just looked up the pic that was pretty good I can see how it gave you....Ideas
With Love;Imasuky Lomae
With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---Heh, yeah. 'Tis rather sexy.
StarPika555---INDEED, another cliffhanger! :-D
I've seen much more evil cliffies, though. In the Star Wars fic Forbidden, there's one in the middle of a sex scene. :-O
Next chapter is about 20% complete at this time (1635 CST, 21/6/07), so...it's going good. :-D
StarPika555---INDEED, another cliffhanger! :-D
I've seen much more evil cliffies, though. In the Star Wars fic Forbidden, there's one in the middle of a sex scene. :-O
Next chapter is about 20% complete at this time (1635 CST, 21/6/07), so...it's going good. :-D
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this today, but I found it a very good read. I look foward to more.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story, dont love the afer comment, you know ash was just a starter at that time, he wouldn't know much about pokemon he's 10 for crying out loud, if you know that much, you'd also know that ash was learning everything froma pokedex or random ppl as comes along. also ash was just begginning, if ash started out as a super tactical genius, there honestly would be no point in pokemon being a kid's show, would kill the drama of him getting better as he goes along his journey, and more or less, the trainer being a friggen genius only happens in fics.