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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person NS
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods damn it! I hate it when people leave off at cliffhangers!!!
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude summer will be over by the time you get the next chapter up! This is the pits!!!
By the way hows the arm? and what the hell were you doing chilling in a tree? >.<
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nevermind about the arm, didnt read the reviews before posting that last one.
Isnt there any rich people on this website that can give slash some money for a SLIGHTLY better piece of shit computer?
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up man I love the story
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Daemon---My arm is fine, yeah. As for why I was up in the tree...I'm a very anti-social person. When I want to have fun, I don't go to the mall, or go clubbing, or hop on over to a bar. I go outside. My house is near a moderately-large piece of forest, so I wander around in the fields and trees, heh. I have a favorite tree right by a creek that I like to sit in to just relax...a lot of story ideas have come to me while I was up there, too...

I do have one other thing to say...the summer won't be done before this story is updated.

In fact, this DAY won't be done before this story is updated. :-O

Yeah, you heard me: before the sun goes down (on Pensacola, Florida, anyway), this story will have a new chapter! I just woke up and I am in the mood to write!

Reylus---Thank you, glad you enjoy. More to come soon. :-D
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha well buddy the sun is down in PA and your on the same coast.
I see no new chapters!!
As for sitting in a tree please tell me you dont get those insane fap fap fap flash ideas in that tree.
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's almost done, rofl. I suck at precise estimations...within an hour (by 2200 CST).

As for my fapfapfap flashes and such...those come from my more bored/drunk moments, heh.

Been a while since I made a flash, too...
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha if only your flashes were as good as your writing.
I enjoy reading this a lot more than watching your character jack off to young Asian girls. (my eyes bled)

Its now 10:18 East coast time.
Good luck!
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KABLAM

Also, thanks for being my 100th review (even though about half of them are just me responding to people, heh).
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha no problem man its an honor. That chapter was pretty good I figured it would end soon considering a sweet battle was about to happen. And ya ash is a dumbshit and made me wanna kill him. I played like every pokemon game and when i started watching the series I wanted to cry. Use thundershock pikachu! I'm sure our friendship will make it strong!!! dumbshit. Who has a pikachu anyway they suck balls.

Ash is everything a trainer should not be. Again thanks for getting rid of those annoying stupid evil stereotypes.

Do I even DARE ask when the next SEGMENT of the chapter will be up?

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