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Thank you very much, and I PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE I will update soon...I'm fighting my way through a mess of work on another site and as soon as it's done, I'll return to Sinners. ^_^

Hey Slash. Loyal reader of your fic thus far. Keep up the good work. I'm impatiently awaiting your future updates! ;)

Glad you enjoy! Should be out in the next couple days, as long as I don't get too distracted by Newgrounds...heh.

Great story Slash Firestorm, I'm a Hardcore Pokémon Fanboy and I have to say that this is one Great Story, having said that I noticed alot of errors within the story, but you said "if I make any errors, consider them to be artistic license" so I'm not gonna bust your chops for them, keep up the good work.

Heh, glad you enjoy it. Just remember that this is a stylized version of Hoenn and not totally true to the games (which I take as my primary source, as I rarely watch the anime), so there may significant differences between this story and the primary canon.

However, feel free to bring up any continuity errors and such...I make them every so often, as I write without the use of an outline, and many times I find myself re-editing chapters to fix little mistakes I've made (like in this most recent chapter, I had Growlithe 'guessing' what Kirlia just told him, and had to re-work the dialogue).

That was an interesting update for some reson I almost knew that guy was Giovanni I feel bad for Jessie and James although if I ran a group I'd get rid of them myself

With Love; Imasuky Lomae

Heh, yeah, Giovanni's identity was more confirmation than revelation.

I always had issue with the hard-ass portrayal of Giovanni in contrast with the bumbling idiocy of Jessie and James (and really Team Rocket in general). In this story he is ruthless, brilliant, and unwilling to tolerate the incompetence of others, which is what I feel the head of the most powerful crime syndicate in the world should be.

Of course, the ultimate goals of Giovanni will not explored until later, heh. ;-)

With my story most of the bad guys are pretty poor excuses for villains in fact they are Jessie and Jame's kids but later on some bad guys are going to show up and thier very powerful but that's all I can say about them because the frist member wont show up until around chapter 14

With love; Imasuky Lomae

Heh, in the Pokemon manga those Jessie and James are no longer fucking with anyone, they got together and left everyone alone.

If only they'd do that in the anime...

Wow not bad! Now we know how she feels about Slash not just hints here and there. The encounter with the growlith was pretty funny, and how she defended herself when it wasnt needed was dead on to how i pictured her acting. Not bad. Btw what was the story that had your distracted all this time?

Keep the chapters coming man!