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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person Bishonen
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two things relating to pokemon attacks in my stories they can learn as many attacks as I say are necessary and some attacks that I think Gardevoir should be able to learn are

Bounce

Swallow

and lastly Water Sport only really big time perverts will get that one
person reo690
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wasn't expecting the Rotom, and also, CLIFFHANGER ENDING YOU BASTARD!
person ThatGuy
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks like none of us got 700... Slash did. Dammit, this is what I get for sleeping in... gah.

Review tiem;

I do believe that this chapter can be summed up with one word; badass. Everything was just so intense, right from the start. Now that I think about it, everyone before me has already said what I'm thinking, so I'll just shut up now. lol.

Though I never expected Rotom...while I don't have Diamond or Pearl, or a DS for that matter, I do have Serebii, which is the only reason I know of 4th gen. Pokemon. But now that I think about it, it does make sense; Rotom is the most powerful Electric-type out there... I think. Neve checked its stats... >_>

Question; the title, "Death From Above", is kinda confusing; does it deal with Kiako's meeting with a certain legendary, or Rotom's attacks on Psymakio? Because it applys to both of them, in a way...

KABOOM!
person BlackWhole(nologinforyou)
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Reo690, I'm pretty sure I know why you didn't get a reply back; during a conversation I was having with Slash a while back he said he was cutting off all communications until Chapter 19 gets finished. So that's probably why you didn't get a reply.

That is all.

-+-Black Whole-+-
person DizzyRye
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I might as well jump on the bandwagon, too, and sign up for the plotmail.
proclaimer_rye@yahoo.com

Hope everything goes well, can't wait for the next update!

Imasuky- great vid, you chose some really good pics.

Oh, and:

PokeMon Contest #13, begin!

Gardevoir uses Flash, it's super effective!

Male audience members use Harden!

Female audience members use Waterfall!
person Bishonen
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DizzyRye with the contest I'd pay to be one of the judges and in my case it would have been Aqua Jet.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person DizzyRye (still too lazy to login)
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Or maybe String Shot? >_<

Wonder if Lick attack removes String Shot's effect?
person Bishonen
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to use Lick and Tickle on Gardevoir.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person reo690
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I emailed you about the mailing list, and I didn't get a reply back, so I guess I'll just post my address here:
tehmaster690@yahoo.com
person Araquiell
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that Im enjoying Sinners quite a lot, It's shaping up to be a unique story, and I enjoy reading about the trainer/pokemon bond that develops into a relationship. It's hard to find a story that isn't pure smut about it, and especially difficult to find one that isn't a oneshot, or hasn't had a chapter posted in it for years. I can't wait to see what happens next in your story, so goodluck writing chapter 19!
xD this is my first review ever on adultfanfiction.net.

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