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Heh, glad you enjoyed. I'll probably update in a few days. I really WANT to update my Zelda story, but I'm just not in Zelda mode right now, so I'll probably be focusing on this story until that changes.

Glad you're continuing to enjoy. Hopefully I'll have another chapter up before the weekend is over, if all goes well. ^_^

(me again)

Very good take on the religions of today and in the pokemon world. I am also atheist for those exact reasons. It causes more pain an intolerance than good. So following your own path your own way appeals very much to me.

Had examples of religion in pokemon which I have never really thought about. The topic of pokemon/human sex was brought into the open and tied into the same topic, that was very clever.

Anyway keep up the good work.

Feel free to e-mail me if you need ideas or just want to bounce anything off me.
unholydaemon@aim.com

Looking forward to more.
-Arthur

Glad you like it. The religious intolerance in Hoenn is going to play a major part later on, and make this story have some rather dark moments. I wish I didn't have to write something that parallels the real world like this, but...it's the world we live in, sadly.

Pfft.

now have an account on here

Kick ass.

On a side note, I allow anonymous reviews because I want to get as much feedback as possible. If someone doesn't like this, they can go ahead and say it, and I won't delete their review or anything. Honest feedback is what I crave, and so far, I'm happy that the feedback has been overwhelmingly positive. ^_^

Spending so much time on Newgrounds and dealing with a hostile public made me a bit paranoid I suppose, but heh, the AFF community seems to be much more accepting. Awesomeness.

Ya I am on newgrounds daily and they are pretty harsh only because the audience varies so greatly. Only people who enjoy reading and 18+ are here. (well some are below but thats to be expected)

Newgrounds just has a huge audience with every religious/family/regional imaginable your going to take some heat.

Have you ever posted a flash there?

Just about to say never mind. Searched newgrounds for slash and up popped some of your flash. So ya found your amazing crapp that passed the blam. Looked at your myspace and holy crap man you got some strong opinions. Little tough to read but worth the twitching eye.

Glad you don't tolerate the growing retarded/ignorant populace.

Heh, yeah. I'm a very confrontational person sometimes...

I've been on a Newgrounds-vacation for a while now, just dropping in and out every so often, til the new layout comes out. I don't think I'll go back long-term until then, and also probably not until I finish this story...otherwise I'd get distracted, heh.

me again, nice job man this is way better than the regular pokemon episodes. Its very realistic makes you think about pokemon as more real than little icons with a health bar. And also gives more insight into the evils pokemon can be used for. I never understood why team rocket was a hassel because they never really did anything bad.

But these team aqua guys man...

I like the bond that is developing between the 2 and how she can talk to him now. So far its progressing nicely. 2 thumbs up!