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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was always ticked at how stupid the enemies were in the games/anime. You don't become a feared organized crime syndicate by being bumbling idiots. So, I assure you, in this story, there will be a much darker group of antagonists.

The bond between Slash and Kirlia is only going to get stronger, and...well, we know what it'll culminate in, heh. But it won't be some mindless smut fic...in fact, there's a whole separate plot that'll deal with what happens then.

Glad you enjoyed, I'll update as soon as I can!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot! It should be out in a couple days if all goes well.
person Bishonen
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review oh and by the way the next chapter of Pink version should be up later today and tommorw there should be another chapter up where she uses her powers for the frist time.

With Love; Imasuky Lomae
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll keep an eye out for it, heh.

I think I'll be able to update my story today, too...I spent all last night writing. ^_^
person Bishonen
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this tory is dark but good it will be the kind of story that I love it's well written and even though updates may ake a few days I'm willing to wait and speaking of updates my story Pink Version's been updated with more Yuri goodness

With Love;Imasuky Lomae
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that this story reached four chapters (like my Zelda story), I'm going back to "Ballad of the Wind Fish" and adding a fifth chapter before I update this one again. But don't worry, it shouldn't take long...if all goes well, both stories will be updated before the weekend.

Glad you liked it! I'll continue reading your story as well. ^_^
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep, although the specifics of what he is, and what he is after, won't be known for a while, heh.
person Bishonen
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kind of like in my story of coruse any one who read this review will know that Pink is half ditto oh and the second chapter will be up on it soon so please a review for it

With Love; Imasuky Lomae
person SSjDiizoid
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to your next update.
And I wonder what negative side effects this will cause for Slash..
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Right now, Slash is paying the price for getting involved in a plot he knows nothing about...but he won't always be the same greenhorn trainer forever, heh.

Next update should be in a couple days or so. I already know where the next chapter is going, so it shouldn't be too hard.

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