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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very good man. Reads as good as any book I have ever read. I like how you didn't go straight into the sex after a chapter or two. You actually have a storyline going that has me hooked. I personally love the sex/pokemon type theme and if someone comes here what should they expect?
Keep it up man your doing great so far.
Keep it up man your doing great so far.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Yeah, the sex won't happen for a while, but when it does, it'll be good, heh.
I'm glad you're enjoying this...I'll try to keep updating at a fairly good pace. ^_^
I'm glad you're enjoying this...I'll try to keep updating at a fairly good pace. ^_^
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
most excellent. i eagerly await the next chapter.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well hat was a good update Kiako is really scary I cant wait to find out what his group is after and I see that you did go with the ditto arm which is realy cool looking foreward to more of this
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you'd be willing could you mabye fit in som Adult baby stuff some time I love it but there's like one person who writes it I would be foever thankfull if you did
Tia the Sexy Slave
Tia the Sexy Slave
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Slash isn't going to be banging Ralts (I mean, even from a logistical viewpoint, that's pretty much impossible). Now, when she evolves...heh.
I don't personally write underage stuff (well, unless both parties are similar, like 16/17 or something, but I don't consider that to really deserve a tag for it). There will be lots of dark stuff in this story, particularly once Slash and Gardevoir's relationship begins, but nothing like that...sorry.
I don't personally write underage stuff (well, unless both parties are similar, like 16/17 or something, but I don't consider that to really deserve a tag for it). There will be lots of dark stuff in this story, particularly once Slash and Gardevoir's relationship begins, but nothing like that...sorry.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually adult baby means treating someone whos an adult like a child it's a dom/sub thing the dom makes the sub wear diapers and dress them up and stuff like that I'm mostly a sub but there are a few girls that like to call me mommy the youngest one of them is 19 but when we're togather she does nothing but crawl around for me
Tia the sexy slave
Tia the sexy slave
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I getcha.
However, that sort of thing isn't really in Gardevoir's personality (or Slash's, for that matter). They won't have time for much kinky stuff either once their relationship gets found out, either...
However, that sort of thing isn't really in Gardevoir's personality (or Slash's, for that matter). They won't have time for much kinky stuff either once their relationship gets found out, either...
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THis seems like it could be intresting and it makes me think about a story that I'm working on but havent posted yet the main character is half ditto and can change one body part at a time if she wants letting her do some very intresting thigs Sorry about going on about myself like that well anyways looking foreward to what happens when the story goes further.
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was actually planning, at one point, to have Kiako with one arm being replaced by a Ditto, allowing him to form tentacles/blades/etc, but decided against it because he's gonna be plenty intimidating enough as it is, heh.
Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 should be out in a day or two if all goes well.
Thanks for the review! Chapter 3 should be out in a day or two if all goes well.