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ThatGuy---Incidentally is my favorite word. I'm kind of absent-minded, see, and tend to jump from topic to topic like crazy. "Incidentally" provides me with a transition word that may or may not be relevant---it just makes it look less stupid. HEH.

Imasuky Lomae---The internet needs more Gardevoir porn. MUCH MORE. I can't draw, so I do my part by writing it...heh.

King dumbass---Oh, it's soon.

Reo690---Yeah, there won't be any crazy number-crunching in this upcoming battle. It's one of the reasons I don't mention levels or anything very much, because I'm sure some dork with too much time on their hands would figure out the possible stats for X Pokemon at Y level and give me a probability distribution for victory.

Sinners is more complex than that. All characters are as strong/weak as I need them to be, lol.

Splenge---I wish a Gardevoir would jump into reality, and then jump on me.

RoboRed---The plotmail's details won't be revealed for quite some time, but I'll say this: an older plotmail, the Thanatos Batch Results, will become rather clear in chapter 19. Honestly, I think it's pretty clear now, but then again, I'm the fuck who's writing it, so...lol.

No Christmas special for now, alas. I can't write a decent oneshot in one day, and since I got the new machine on Christmas...the special was pretty much fucked. Now, Valentine's Day is coming up, as is Gardevoir's birthday...which, incidentally, is on March 29 (anniversary of Sinners)...so I'll likely do a oneshot for one or both of those events.

Xain---Alrighty.

GenoLiger---Thusly added.

Hiei---Glad you enjoy it, and don't worry---Sinners isn't going anywhere. If there's one thing I would never, EVER do, it's abandon a story and leave everyone hanging. If, for some crazy reason, I decide that I'm done with a half-completed story, I'd either delete it or give it a quick and gritty ending.

Remember that everyone. Even if a whole fucking year goes by without an update or message from me, I'm either dead or writing a very, very long chapter, lol.

Anonymoose---Glad you like it so far, heh. I know the updates are pretty far apart...I'm not a quick writer. I know a lot of authors can update like lightning, but I'm just a slow person (in most things, lol). An update is coming very soon, though, so don't worry.

Heh, who knows what those two will do? Not even I do, right now. In fact, I don't know when those two will get to have sex again (which is sad, really). Too much sex detracts from the plot, and considering the whole life-or-death aspect of their situation, it would stretch believability. Too little sex bores me, lol. They'll get it on again eventually...

They'll likely try a lot of different things as they go. I'm not sure about the roleswapping...I can see them doing it, myself, but it might be hard getting the general audience to accept it. Of course, I don't really care what the audience thinks---LOL, to be honest, I write more for myself than anyone else, and all writers are selfish fucks at heart---but I like to make things believable.

I can see myself making it happen if the two get to spend a long amount of time together in a fuckable situation...far away from civilization, for example, or another night at a hotel/other private place. Somewhere where they could be making love a lot and letting their minds wander. Gardevoir could convince him, I'm sure, and Slash is secure enough in his sexuality to let her...hm, it's actually an interesting idea.

And hell, if I can't make it work in Sinners proper, I can always oneshot it.

You've given me a pretty interesting idea. I would make it loving and all---I know some people don't think it could be romantic, but I think I could do it. Whether it be with toys or telekinetic strap-ons or what, I don't know, but lol, that's got my mind a-stirring. We shall see where my muse takes me...and where, exactly, it takes Slash.

Kukuku.

Anyway, my internet has been wonky for the past couple days, so I couldn't upload the update as scheduled. Chapter 19 has actually been done for a day or two, but since I couldn't post it, I decided to rip it open and tinker. Right now, with my internet currently working, the chapter is actually a lot better than the original 'finished' version...I added a scene with Giovanni, expanded a scene with Kiako, and managed to have 10000 words before the fucking battle even begins, heh. I'm sleepy as hell right now, so give me a sleep cycle and a few hours and it'll be enhanced, completed (again), and submitted.

SOON

Araquiell---Glad you're liking it so far. Yeah, I'm not much of a PWP person (although I've been known to read/write the occasional quickie-smut story in my time), and I prefer reading and writing long, many-chapter stories over short ones.

And believe me, everyone, I know how y'all feel about slow updates and all...a few of my favorite authors take several months between updates (one of my favorite stories had an update after about nine months of inactivity---I thought the story was dead for a while!).

Like I said in the big review response, 19 is on the way. Barring another internet failure, tomorrow will be the day. Hooray!

And yep, you're on the list. Just in time, too---I plan on sending out another plotmail shortly after I upload chapter 19 tomorrow.

(points to Slash Firestorm's reply to me)

Yeah, I think so, too, on the general audience part. 'Tis why I hesitate on doing so myself for my own lemons (if I ever get back to doing them). Then again, we got fics with rape and extreme violence running around, so maybe not too many people would mind the temporary role-reversal here... as long as it doesn't turn BDSM. XD (No, seriously, in hentai and porn, 95% of hetero role-reversal in is BDSM-like. It's strange.)

Lookin' forward to the next chapter. I'll give you my "big review" after I've finished reading it. :)

Ch 17 was not D/s, just regular anal sex. In S&M scene, the partners must really act and speak domineering and submissive (according to their roles) during their play.

Hey fi you don't mind could you tell me what all the pwp things are,like what they mean? Oh and Gardevoir should have her own game.

I love the story. It fits most of my interests and everything which surprised me when I found this story so many months ago. I've read from the begginning actually since chapter 6 or 7 I think but just recently created a profile. I procrastinate things too much. But I definetly will put this story under my suggested reads. Love the story, keep up the good work if yuo can.

Hiya. I've been enjoying your story so far, in spite of seldom updates (darn suspense). I actually had a big review planned for your story, but it's really late over here and I'm getting tired, so maybe later. However, I do want to ask this:

Are Gardevoir and Slash going to try other "different" things later on in their, uh, activities? Like when Slash took Gardevoir from behind a chapter ago. Because if so, would you mind if I make a suggestion myself for some other different thing they could do? How about... Slash be in Gardevoir's place this time. No, no, I don't mean switching genders or anything, no. I mean, Slash is the one that "gets taken" this time. Their reasonings for this experiment being that Gardevoir wants Slash to know how she feels when she's being taken. Slash could be hesitant if he's never thought of that, but Gardevoir could convince him. As for how she does is... well, there's always... toys. You know, the stuff girls use on themselves... Or you could get creative. *shrugs*

If you do decide to do this, or you're thinking of doing this, I'd love to see you write it someday. I'm curious as to how you would do it, since you tend to focus on romantic/love and passion, rather than pottymouth filled PWP fests (not that there's anything wrong with that if you want a "quickie").

make sure you e-mail that teaser to my new E-Mail address xainrm@yahoo.com (If you havin't done so already.)

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