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for Sinners

by Stormborn Apostle

person Review
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that Flash attack was awesome. Now, if only that's how it actually worked...

The vid was pretty awesome too. And we all know that Gardevoir is hot. :D
person RoboRed
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Weird stuff, dude...that teaser in the e-mail really twisted my brain. I like the chapter interlude, just because I find stuff like that cool. Like in the "A Series of Unfortunate Events" movie. I've never read the books though, so I dunno if the narrator pops in like that there.

Glad you got a new comp there, Slashy. However, I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't put up the Christmas oneshot (unless you still plan to :D), I was REALLY looking forward to it, especially after I showed you that one song and everything...:(
person reo690
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
667 heh. Well, the Pokemon games, IMO are too unreal for my taste, because a pokemon battle is basically statistics
and has no uncontrolled variables in them. Like, for instance if you were in a battle with a wild pokemon it doesn't take into account any other wild pokemon.
person Splenge
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Regarding Gardevoir in Brawl:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gByHqvrq9so

Now if only Gardevoirs could make the jump to reality.
person Review
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You may have gotten 666, but that won't stop me from getting 700...and if you do, all I have to do is erase one of my old reviews so that I can get 700! HA!

You can't stop me from finishing my time machine, as it will be completed before this hour finishes! Take that! ... you had sex with yourself??? 0.o
person Bishonen
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is to funny.

http://pyroasta.deviantart.com/art/Psycha-use-Flash-Attack-68893136

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person Bishonen
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I made a Gardevoir vid here it is

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0VeIVR4vLs

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person Bishonen
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I’m a mad genius and I built a time machine and went into the future and found out how the story ends let me just say this Slash write faster no one will believe just how kick ass the last chapter is especially the truth behind Kiako…It’s to cool for words.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae---I'd prefer it to protect you by stripping. Somehow. I don't know, she just needs to take it off.

Xain---My more recent chapters have all been 10000+ words...which isn't that impressive in terms of the entire site, as I know authors with chapters MUCH longer (of course, they also tend to update only once every three or four months), but it seems like a lot to me. I always compare my writing lengths to my extended essay in IB, 4000 words, which seemed like a lot at the time...but now 4000 words is child's play. Maybe it's because I actually enjoy writing Sinners, as opposed to some boring paper on the political backdropping of the Mexican-American War, bleh.

GenoLiger---I luff Saturos. Incidentally, when I get some time, I need to work on a few Golden Sun oneshots...

Reo690---Well, really none of the in-game legendaries are THAT impressive. I mean, Kyogre carved out the fucking oceans, so you'd think its Surf attack would do a little more damage, wouldn't ya? They could have had an in-game explanation for their relatively low power (Rayquaza/the orbs/something sealing away the majority of their strength or something), too. Lazy bums.

Incidentally, yes, you're mostly right. Not that I'm surprised. To see the trees in a forest is no great feat of vision, heh...but it's what's hiding in the darkness of the woods that you should really be looking out for.

And incidentally (fuck, I abuse that word), I highly recommend anyone who hasn't signed up to the mailing list already to do so. Some of the near-future plotmails will be very interesting, expanding on certain Sinners points without being spoilers. Nothing in any of the messages will be critical in the sense that you NEED to read them to enjoy Sinners, but...well, you'll likely enjoy it more with them, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---Yes, when I'm near the end, I'll probably write like a madman...or at least write many chapters and then submit them in quick succession. What I think I'll do in particular is end the main story like that, with rapid updates and such, and then, a month or two later, release a final epilogue to round things out.

The ending I currently have for the story is a good one. It'll almost certainly change by the time I get to it, sure, but it's still a good one. If it still fits then, and my muse has no objections, it'll be swell.
person Review
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well I learned something new today...never heard of that shock trick, gonna go have to play with that here in a few, heh...

Imasuky built a time machine?! Damn, that means that mine won't be the first when it gets done.

And yes Slash, you do abuse 'incidentally' quite often. But I don't think anyone's said anything about it, either...

And this is review number 663... only 37 more 'till 700... which will be mine, by the way...lol

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