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..as another note: Amae really is like my favorite character from this story. Can you tell? Please let something good happen for him.

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Okay that was hot...

I am so going to be happy when Yuuri finds Wolfram and kills the bastards. Really happy.

That really hurt to read. >_< I feel sorry for Wolfram.

This story is so awesome. Please tell me you are going to write more. It's been my addiction for days.

Wow. Just simply, WOW.

I'm at chapter 14 now and your fic has left me totally awed and addicted. Really, stories like yours so well fleshed out and detailed are truly one in a million and I'm so happy you've chosen to write for this fandom! You've an excellent command of the language; until I read your Author page, I had no idea it wasn't your main language.

I apologise for not reviewing more. This story's just been so enthralling I loaded the page on my PSP and brought it around to read while I was out. In my eagerness to get to the next chapter and the next, I totally neglected giving reviews!

Ah, firstly, I do like your idea of "power swapping". You've explained it and reasoned it out nicely and it fits very well with your story. I do like how you portray Wolfram as well. His behaviour and how cunning he is all so that he can be reunited with Yuuri is really sexy! Lol! The randy side of Yuuri took me by pleasant surprise. I always thought Wolfram would be more inclined to it but I'm glad I've been shown the other side of the picture!

I also love your side characters! You've taken the time to really put personalities to great descriptions and that is something few authors make the effort to do. You've made it absolutely delightful to envision what goes on with your nicely done narrative too!

All that being said, I can't wait to read Working out the Paradox. I'm going to try to drag out reading that though to make a good thing last for a long time, but knowing how addicted I am to your writing, I'm sure I'll be done with it soon. >.<

Thanks for taking all the effort to write your stories!

ok--whats so special about the mouse?-need more--hope to read you soon.

Horay I was diying with despare to know what was happening. That Faraya is a bastard, and onece again wolf should count himself lucky that the king had his fill with Amae, and didn't try to make a defenite move on him, I'm wondering how long will it take , or if wolf will be able to scape before that happens, if anything he hates the guy even more, and has some degree of sympaty for Amae. I'm glad at how he took it, he managed it to perfection, he remained calmed, and delt with his own problem, and kept a neutral view to it, like he sais its anly natural, and he being in a cock free diet for far to long to anyones confort, or at least after having it so frecuantly, I like that the relation between them is not realy afected negatively over that insident, true is not making any mayor leaps towards a brotherhood, but I belive they've reached and understanding, Lasami was very sweet the way he talkes about Amae will sure influence wolf desition to take Amae. I wonder what kind of info is Yasai getting from observing the goings in the concubines cuarters, Is a concubine at all, or just a silly spy to keep tabs on the others, or he provides the info in exchange of getting shafted by the king, in either case if I'm not mistaken, he will pose some trouble for our heros, am jusdt waiting to see what kind, and how big. I loved the mouse! hahaha, and let me explain this to you, since this story is usualy updated every other week on sundays, I read the new chaps late at night on sunday to monday, when I get back from work my roomate is asleep, and every time something funny happens, like "i'm afraid of the dark" and other ways wolf choses to goad kohar, of any funny situation, is all I can do to keep from waiking my room mate up, I have to bite back my laughter, and forse myself to reduse it to an amused chuckle wich is not easy I may add. But this time I'm alone and I've laughed my head off with the mouse scene. I pictered it clearly in my mind, the way every one went in to hysterics, and I could imagine wolf's face at all this, and the way every one looked at him when he knifed the poor thing to the carpet, probably to take it out of its missery before it diyed of a cardiac with all that screaming. But what made me roll and the floor was expresion that wolf most have had on his face when he said "well, i'm not picking it up". that place is a circus. well thats more than pleanty for now I'll be waiting, ja ne.

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I started reading this fic because I absolutely loved the prequel to it, and I hoped this one would be good too.

I love Wolfram, I really do...but...
Ugh...the angst and stuff, and since it's not really YuuRam I have to say I really don't like this fic. -_- Sorry...

Nothing like coming back from a tideous night of work at 12:30 am and find the new chap of my favorite fic! I saw the pic of Amae and that is one beautyful man, god where do they make men like him? The things he has to do to keep pease in that Goddamn place, playing slap and tickle with Torani the guy is daft in the mellon! What is Faraya thinking (it took me 13 chap to learn his name) taking Wolf to Amae's. Was it to show him it wasn't that bad, or to show him it was inevitable, to use Amae to soft him up? I mean I agree with Amae the guy is fucked up in the head. What will be Wolf reaction to this, I mean Amae is one hell of a sight, and wolf is in desperate need of a laid, will he be aroused or disgusted by the show. Will he get off on it, will he be his dignified self and resist the urges, or will he wank watshing them getting it on, will he invited to the sheats party, or left alone just to watsh, to many possibilities

I'm sorry I pressed the wrong key and the stupid thing closed my review before I was done writting it. At one something in the morning my motor skills get kind of sluggish. Any way as I was saying I need to know waht is going on in that room I'm going to go insane with speculations, and imagining the out come of all the possible scenarios, I'm going to nag you and say it was a mean closure point for the chapter, bad enough to be considered a cliffhangger and they are hazardous for oversensive readers' health. Now that I had my tantrum, Wolf was kind of mean to Amae saying he did'nt care, but I understand, I myself tent to block out and denie the things I'm not able to cope with. It is sweet of Amae to try and keep Wolf safe, from both the other concubines and Faraya. Amae should have know better than to get flustered by wolf coment, if he didn't care he wouldn't have made a move when Torani grabbed him. I felt like wolf during the conversation between Faraya and Amae, it was surreal, and creepy, I LOVED it!!! How can you flirt with some one who's guts you hate with a passion, and how can you fuck some one so calmly when you know the moment you turn your back that person could try to stab you? Amae knows he is gorgeous and he knows how to use it to his advantage, I comend him I think he is really strong to put up with Faraya the way he does. I want to apologies I know I'm a spoiler but I cant help it, this kind of thing happens to me ofthen, when I watch a something in the tv, be it movies, anime, series,or when I'm reading some thing I get the hang of the trama, and I can guess many of the events, It most be anoying the hell out of you that I keep guessing whats going on in the story, I hope the other reader are averted from my reviews because of their length so I don't ruin the element of surprise you work so hard to achive, onece again gomenazai! Well I the only thing I got left to say is I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chap, I have to know if wolf will: a)blush of emberassment, b)nosebleed from arousement C)pass out with disgust or stress or d)out burst with anger. and also will he stay in time out, or will he have to join in to the play yard? ja ne ^_<

this is definatly getting strange but interesting