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This can't be considered as review. I just want to tell you I enjoy each of chapters. Thanks for writing it. ^_^

hi! i just got back from work and found the new chap 13 my lucky number. why? well because everything is cristal clear, at least for now. i think i have just one question, why can't amae use the water element any more and still use healing power. well like amae, he told my kind of story as cliché and trite as it is, so i'm going to risk it and thrust him, he seemed sencere and had good enough motivations i guess, besides yasai is the squealer right, riigghht, RIGHT? I could imaging wolframs face when Amae "suggested" that he sleep with faraya (for once i was able to remember the asshole's name), and the expretion was priceless.
Yes! thank you for rescuing wolf wedding bracelet, that was a nice touch, you don't leave any detais hangging with out a porpuse, very nice; and besides i was kind of sad when they took it, because i liked that mental picture i got at the beggining when wolf and yuri where making love and wolf covers his eyes with his arm and the gold loop catches yuri's attention, i don't know every time i remember this fic that image pops in my mind first, go figure. So now is kyota to the rescue, man he is going to flip out when he finds out what happens to wolf,. After they get out of there they are going to have one hell of and argument, their bickering is going to be heard all the way in shin mazoku. Well thats it for now, i'll be checking for more later, i'm dying to know if wolf will take amae with him or any others for that matter. As always exelent work, keep it up, ja ne -_~

Hello again, I was having some fun imagining when wolf and kyota are reunated, I don't know why I have some high expectations for those scenes, I love the sarcastic and cynical arguments they have; any way i was thinking of this when I remembered I thought you mention that you'd probably give kyota a love before the end of the fic but that it was not yuri's wus of a friend, and all of the suden I remembered Amae's intentions to scape with wolfram, and I'm going to take a wild guess and go out of my way and say that our blue hair comander and the charismatic concubine could be an item. Hell why not? wolf would agree with me to say that kyota needs a good shag up the arse, and God knows Amae could use a change of position and be on top for once. But I don't know I guess thats just me having fun with your characters in my mind while listening to Alanis Morissette's "you owe me nothing in return" and "surrendering", music usualy inspires me and my imagination runns away with me. Oh by the way if you haven't heard those songs maybe you should it is my personal opinion that the go perfect with your fic in both wolf/yuri and wolf/kyota relationship, so I would like to dedicate those two to you and your awsome story, well sorry for bothering you again with my farfetched speculations, I'll check in again later, ja ne! ;)

i really am enjoying this story and how much it is grabbing me and i thank you for showing me a glimpse of the "others" and yes i meant the rest of the party. I realize that this is Wolframs story and he is the focus but what i was looking forward to was rumors something for them to follow after they get rid of faraya. Just looking willy-nilly doesnt seem right. Your story is engrossing and am looking forward to more.

hullo! it's me your own personal suck up!>_> first i'd like to thank you for taking your time in to answering my premature questions ahead of time even if your going to explain in later chapters, i really appreciate it. so 14 against 1 thats my kind of fight, i'm really looking foward to that idea, to teach that bastard a few lessons. "breaking him" what does he think wolfram is a horse? for crying out loud, but in a heroic and desperate atempt wolf has manage to keep his virtue for another day, but oh boy that king is going to get it, he doesn't know he just drove in to fuckville and wolf is the mayor. god his death is going to be slow and painfull! and the oscar goes to... "i'm afraid of the dark" right and academy award worthy perfomance bravo; he fucks with that kohar guy out of pure spite it makes me laugh every time. i'm really starting to like amae, he is being awfully nice, can i like him with out being betrayed, wolf really needs some support right about now, and getting out of there shouldn't be so imposible with a litte help. now the kid being a healer came as a surprise, i'm just as interested as wolf, are those powers his own or is he taking them from selfish sod (aka the king)can he use any other power, do other comcubines have them as well? right now i'm wondering what will be the repercutions of wolf bitch slaping the king and of amaes atentions on wolf, will he be punished and if so how severly, and how will kohar and the other concubines react to this two events and of curse what will be wolfram punishment for putting such a fural struggle against the king and making him cum with exitement before the action started (snigers)wow wolf is so damn good! well thats it for now i think i got everything but if not i'll write again, things come in to perspective better after i close the browser don't ask me why probably i think to much or have an over active imagination. ja ne!

Faray got what he deserved. But it's not over yet. I hope Yurri finds him soon. I wonder what Amae is up to. Great chapter. :)

thanks for the explanation--this was a great chapter i thought though that wolfram would have a little more strength to him though but it thought it was great that he got the king a couple of good ones hope he did break his nose though. can you give us a glimpse on what the others are doing? even just a couple of paragraphs here and there.

wow! What a great surprise to come back from Otakon to find 2 new chapters! although I'm slightly embarrassed to admit it, I actually wish there was a bit more Wolfram abuse in this last chapter ^.^;;; I'm still waiting on a Yuuri-uke scene XD Anyway, the concubines are starting to become intriguing characters. I think Amae is Yuuri in disguise XD Where is Yuuri anyway?! lol Anyway, keep up the good work! You can tell I like this story because I took the time to type my review out on a PSP XD

Yo! Perskaiciau dar karteli sita chapteri ir tikrai galiu sakyti, kad jis puikiai pavykes. Zaidimas kortom tikrai geras... (zinai, beskaitydama pagalvojau, kad butu visai faina, kad berniukai butu pazaide ka rimtesnio... Jau taip ir issivaizduoju kaip Wolfram'as sedi visas apsiredijes, o kitos concubines vos su triusikeliais ^_~ ) heh. Na lauksiu kitu chapteriu! Taip kad net nemanyk nustot rasyt! ;)
Kaip sekes sia savaitele? Tikriausiai prirasei daugybe chapu (na jei zaido nezaidei hehe.) Na susimatysim greit. Ikis!

hi glad to hear from you again! that was quite and intriguin chap 11! i really don't like tat god damn king, he was able to disturb wolf, if ( not to say when) he finally gets his hands on (dick in) wolf his is going to leave a very ratheled blond, he is already close to a mental, emotional and neveious breack down. to be honest i'm kind of looking foward to it (god i'm a moster). i just love who wolf goads the kohar guy, that man is going to pop a vessel one of this days an aniurism would be nice. to tell the truth i don't know what to think about the other concubines,specailly amae there is an ambivalence about him, i'm curious about him as a character but i'm not sure if i like him, the same goes for yasai, how come his like don't trust the guy but he never loses step or footprint of him. i'm curious as to what they ment that they could get some use out of wolfram. and what's that toranis problem any way, these are really fucked up concubines, i mean bloody hell the part where you discribed them as wolves i would have use the frace skeeming bitches, it seems more acurate. well for what i just read they ain't stupid bints after all, wolf is going to have to watch his back from at least one of the two groups of male concubines, don't know much about the female ones yet, but i bet that would be interesting if not insightful, my guess is that he could make friends with at least one of them and learn some touchy if noy valuvel info, maybe a nice tender conversation about why and what is to be aconcubine(and a female one for a practically gay king at that) i'm wondering does he has a queen, and if he does what does she think of the harem. and completly changing the aproach is time running paralel to this univers in the demon kingdom, is it faster, slower or the same. i mean it would blow thet they go back and like years have gone by and things have change, i hope that is not the case. i agree with wolf he should get as many kicks as he can from kohar, since he is so willing to make wolf's day, he is such an easy tarked, and i swear he brings it upon himself, by now he should know better than to fuck with wolfram. i find wolf thought on yuri must endearing, and i think he was on the mark about yuri laughing and leveling the place ( or turning it in to baren waste land to more acurate) oh! i've meaning to tell you that i'm missing a tearjerker scene, i really like does, like in wotp when wolf aked yuri to dance with him one last time before leting him go, all that agntsy mood when he is depress and vulnerable i just love it as much as the bratty or the serious wolf. well ta' for the great chap. i'll be waiting for more, i've writen enough trying to get it all out in one go as if not to stalk and pester you, i'll be haunting the site hoping to be the firts to catch your new chap and post the long ass review so you won't be to tier to read it after reading all the others i know i hog all your time and reviewing space, that's all for now ja ne! XD