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sorry to do another entry so soon, but it was 4:30 in the morning and i was trying to figure out was the deal with the concubines and imagining different scenarios when i remembered when you described them ogling at wolf like salivating,laughing hyenas, and musing on their suspicious if not creepy relation between them when an not so unusual thought poped in my mind, are the concubines shagging each other, are they allowed to do so or they do it any way against the rules, or is my perverted imagination over reacting? i mean i for one would like to have wolf not only worrying about the king trying to shaft him, but be jumpy and paranoid about the other sluts wanting to gang bang him, come on! he has sex apeal after all, one would thing he smells of pheromones. don't be surprise about the hour i'm a creature of the night and usualy proul aroud the site during the ungodly pre-dawn hours. well with that out of the way is fare well till next up date, ja ne!

Yay! I love the meeting between the king and Wolfram. I'm glad you didn't rush the scene and we have more time to get to know him better. I like the king so far though.

Now I'm uneasy. I need wolfram to a) find Yurri and b) not get raped. But I guess it's not really up to me.

still trying to figure out who amae reminds him of - good or bad - you leave very good questions need more answers. am looking forward to wolfram breaking out spectacularly. worried though once the power is all gone will he start to get sick because he cant use his powers? like he started to on earth b4 shori released them?

Yay! I'm so glad to have internet access for a while! I've been waiting for updates for a while. lol. Yay! I can't wait for Wolfram to meet the king though. That should be an interesting encounter. lol.
Keep up the good work as always!

OMG poor poor Wolfram.... update chap. 11 soon, please :D

there, it took me forever, but I read your last story, and now what you have so far of this one, so I will finally comment. Good! I'm glad Wolfram is putting up a fight. those people suck. Anyway, i will patiently wait for the next installment. I hope it's soon! (reading the whole of it in 3 days kinda turns you into an addict. I need my fix!)

faisty little wolfram! once hes figured out what he's gonna do those people are good as dead, god that was awsome, I HAD A BLAST! wolf is going to be the dead of that kohar. i wonder who will the one to submit first, i'm still ruthing for wolfram, that guy has just made himself a powerfull enemy. Yasai was very nice feeding wolf, and i can't wait for wolfram to cross words with amae that will be somthing to witness, will he like wolf (what ever that means), or wil he think of wolf as a treath to his place as the kings favorite, and been the kings favorite does he has any influence ever so slightly over the king's judgent when it comes down to other concubines? and talking about the bastard, i'm looking foward to his reaction to wolfram's feats in his harem, i'm sure he's going to say something about it been the king and all but i'm more interented in what is wolfram going to say back. but at least he has the respect if not fear of his fellow whore, now there is a silly thought wolfram leading an army of whores! i'm glad you are not anoyed by me insesant babling is just that i get all exited and fiered up, because it is so good. there are very few writer up to a level that they make you belive what they are writing, you have an awsome plot, wich you develop cohirently, you are great at conveing atmospher and at describing, you have a great understanding of the characters, and your original characters actually fit in to the kyo kara maho univers. there are only three other fanfic writer that i consider are up to your caliber, and belive me i read like a maniac, its actually obsesive compulsive.i just wish the whole thing was actualy part of the series and was animated as well, but reading is always more fun. oh well i'm flater for your prizing like i said i get too exited, i think to much and i have no life. its been fun as always i hungrily wait for more of this master pice, ja ne. ;)

wow i just saw the review list am' i the only one that insist in bugging the hell out of you? i feel a little ashame writing testaments for reviews and shit. i can only hope it doesn't bother you that much, and much to your anoyens i write again if any thing else comes to mind, feel free to tell me to shut the fuck up, or laugh at me and use me as you jester what ever helps you to bare with the craze obsesive compulsive reader and reviewer again gomen for waisting your time and testing your patience, and of the all of the other reviweres who happen to read this, i wonder what the think of me? oh well, and don't forget to keep tourturing wolf i just loved chap 10, no more bugging for now, no seriously i'm done, ja ne. XD

i understand about not using his powers and wasting them but arent they wasting even as he waits. I love how you have made wolframs character you are bringing him to life for me even more so and have made him so adult and not the brat. i really do look forward to your next chapter. i hope we see the others soon and here maybe some rumors of yuuri soon. i realize that this is wolframs story but even a hint would be good for them. thank you for sharing your story.